[Denied]fish_pig's application

[Lloyd the Mutant 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: fish_pig

How old are you?:

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: united staes of america

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: very good

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: yes

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: a friend told me about it

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!:

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: To be someone you are not for fun.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: I dont know.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: I dont know.

In-Character Details

Tall, Smart, Shy

Character Name: Lloyd Fey-Crown

Character Race: Elf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: Hey, im Lloyd Few-Crown. Im an elf. My parents were killed by bandits as a kid. Whe I turned 13 (few days ago) I set out o deem my revenge. I traked them all over the lands. Meet some friends adn enemys. Im a quiet guy. Dont care much for the City life. And I love dogs.

What are your characters ambitions?: Revenge

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: Pale

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? Walk in and purchase what i came for and dont interfear with others afairs.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? Ignore it and keep walking. When i get to the neatest town i will tell the athoriys.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: help the pld man up and craft him a new waking stick. then ask my question.

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

The following question is unanswered: 'How old are you?'

Explain specifically what previous roleplaying experience you have.

You must post your application on the Minecraft forums before you can be accepted.

Roleplaying definition needs to be expanded on. You must provide Meta-Gaming and Power-Emoting definitions and examples. You can find more info on the forums and wiki, but make sure to use your own words.

Bio needs to be greatly expanded upon and made at least two paragraphs. Please add some server lore, which can be found on the forums and wiki.

Need a skin screenshot. Use THIS GUIDE to see how.

All Open Response Questions need to be greatly expanded on.

There are numerous spelling errors throughout the application that need to be fixed.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

[everblue2er101 906]

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