[Denied]my 4th applaction for gherren

[thaddeus11 75]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:Thaddeus12

How old are you?:I am currently 13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:est,U.S

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes I do.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:Yes, Ive played on skyrim world of Warcraft and some more major rp games

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes, I have

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:My friend also known as Akeinos_GoldHand(CentralGuard)

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!:

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:Role-playing is when you and a friend act something out by making a charter of your own.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:meta-gaming is when you start doing or saying something your charter does not know about.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:Power-Gaming is when you do something forcefully by giving yourself power, like killing someone instantly.

In-Character Details

Character Name:Gherren

Character Race:Cave Dwarf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:Gherren was born a little bit before the demise of aegis, His Mother died at birth, But he still had his father, yet they were very poor. At the age of 17 Gherren was expected to work in the mines as if he had been doing it all his life, As his father still had honor to wield. At the age of 18 Gherren and his father was forced like so many others out of his homeland and into the new world of asulon Where his father did not make it. When Gherren Got to the new world he followed the dwarfs of Alras later becoming kal’alras. When Gherren found out that alras had finely been taken over he decided to leave for an adventure until the new hold of kal’alras had gotten order. On the road to the cloud temple he decided to take a short cut through the mountains and got lost, later almost dying of hunger but saved by the monks of the cloud temple, he now stands in the center of the cloud temple wondering what happened to him, and where he is.

What are your characters ambitions?:His ambitions are to get back to kal’alras as soon as he can.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:I could not get it to post an actual pic, but if you go to miners need cool shoes and search Gherren youll fin a full pic of it.

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:nothing

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?*walks up to poor dwarf. Can you show your wares to me kind sir. I’ll take that mushroom soup please.*hands purse full of minas to dwarf.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?My charter slowly walks up to the dwarf and ask him what is going on here,The dwarf tells me a good reason I go get the guards for help,The dwarf gives me a bad reason I walk away hoping the dwarf still does not get hurt.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:My charter walks up to the man and helps him up, Are you ok My charter would say and then he would help the old man with getting his minas back into the bag and help him back to his house or destination.

[LeRenardNoir 413]

You were denied for the following reasons:

Your Open Response Questions could use some detail as they are rather brief. Make sure to add dialogue and actions to each one. As for your biography, it's decent but it can be improved. Good job on your inclusion of server lore. In general, I would recommend improving on your spelling and grammar.

Please wait 24 hours before re-applying.

PM me if you would like further explanation/help.

While you wait…Go and vote for the server to support it!

We all would really appreciate it.

[LeRenardNoir 413]

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