Drago1128's Application

[Drago1128 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: Drago1128

How old are you? : 14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: EST United States

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes, Fluent, but not that good at spelling, if i mess up at spelling i always correct myself, if it means a lot i will take my time, just because of rp

Have you had any previous experience in role-playing? : With my friends, not in an official server

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules? : Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft? : Friend

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/72124-drago1128s-application/

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!: Yes

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of role-playing is: Taking control of a character, and using it in a fantasy world, where you decide what happens

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: If you know something your character should not know, and take it to and take it to your advantage. Like seeing a person’s real ign, and not using their role-play name.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Power-emoting is when a person plays as a power hungry overload who cannot fail. Like someone who has the best armor in the game, and cannot die, or the player will not let him/her die of natural causes

In-Character Details

Character Name: Drago

Character Race: Human

Character biography: Drago was born in human civilization, the human city of Solace, as a son of Horen. He was raised in the city, along with His 3 brothers. When Drago was a young kid, Galador a young elf and Drago were best friends. His father died when he was 13, along with one of his 3 brothers. His mom took care of him, but ironically at age 16 His mother died, His brothers moved away and left Drago, Drago had no choice, but to become a guard for his local city. After 4 years he became the captain of the guard, for about 5 years. But one day 3 men rode into town and took all of his belongings. And told lies to the king, and residents of the city, Drago was stripped of his ranks and had no choice but to run away from his city at age 25, he went to go live with his best friend Galador. Together they lived deep in the woods and hunted off of trees with their bows, Drago became very skilled with his bow, but still trained well with his sword, at age 28 Galador and Drago moved in with the dwarfs, to learn their fighting styles and their history they learned about Urguan, and how he is the Master Dwarf, and learned to fight with a axe. Drago then moved out of being with Galador and tried to find his 2 brothers, after 3 years or searching he had no prevail. Galador and Drago now have met up again and are ready to take on the dangerous world together.

What are your characters ambitions? : To become a king, Emperor, Or just to rule the rule the world.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: http://imgur.com/AwoRw

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character? : No

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in role-play. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?: In Aethor, a powerful human city, where Drago comes to trade, gamble, and train, he stumbles across a young dwarf, This young dwarf is poor, trying to sell minor stuff at his stand. I go up to the young dwarf merchant, "Hello Young dwarf, what wares are you selling today?" says Drago. "Well nothing much, some fruit, a poorly forged sword, some damaged armor-" The dwarf is cut off. "Hmm I’ll buy the fruit and the sword, ‘Hands the dwarf 200 Minas". "200 Minas!?" "It only cost 50 you know, right?" "Yes I do, you are young, and should learn some people do good things," Drago walks away.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? : Drago would take out his sword to defeat the Orc, you may ask "How can he take out an orc so easily"? Well Drago has been trained in bows, swords, and axes, and is very efficient at combat; taking down an orc is no challenge for him. Drago charges, slashes the orc in the mouth, quickly after that the orc realizes he has no chance, and tried to run away. Drago takes out his bow and shoots the orc in the leg. The orc, lain on the ground, Drago takes out his battleaxe, and decapitates the orc. Drago quickly runs to the dwarf, he is injured. Drago quickly takes him to the nearest city, which happens to be Solace. But to Drago’s hard work the dwarf dies.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenseless man. What does your character do?: As walking down the road to Malinor Drago finds that an old man is passing by, Drago was going to say hi, but before he could even say anything, the old man falls. Drago is horrified by this and hurries to the old man. "Are you O.k.?" asked Drago. "Yes, yes I am fine, may you go fetch me another walking stick?" asked the old man. "Sure" Drago heads out into the woods, collects a stick, and comes back. The old man is gone; before Drago knew it he was hit on the head with a large stick. Drago then falls to the ground, and is now, knocked out. When Drago woke up he was on the road still, coins still in his pocket, his weapons still with him. Nothing has gone wrong. He finds the old man still asleep behind him. Drago wonders, if the old man’s knocked out, who knocked us out... then heads to the old man."You awake?" The man wakes up "Hmm, where am I, who are you," after a long silence the old man reply’s to himself. "Oh you’re the man who was going to help me get a new stick, and i was walking down the road, who attacked us?""I don't know" replied Drago. But I’m sure we'll find out soon.

[Wizard 125]

Under Review.

[Wizard 125]

Denied.

Your character is somewhat a power-gamed creation. At such a young age, he already has mastered the 3 major weapons and can take down an orc with practically no fight at all. To master one weapons takes years of practice. Most characters, especially a human of young age, only master one weapon.

Also, if you read a little about dwarven lore, they are not especially fond of the humans. Usually only dwarves are allowed in the city. Maybe don't have your character go live with 3 different races, especially racist ones.

Also, if you would correct some of your grammar mistakes such as capitalizing I's that would be great.

Post again in 24 hours.

[Wizard 125]

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