Akiosh's Application V2

[Akiosh 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: Akiosh

How old are you?:15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Mountain Western time, USA

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: From my understanding yes I do.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes i have been on two other role play servers before this.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes i have read the rules and most likely will go back once in a while so I do not break a rule.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: I saw it on YouTube, and also on Google its come up many times.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: I cannot find it I believe it was removed.

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!: Yes I have.

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Roleplaying is when i act as a specific pre-made character and play like how I've created this said character.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Meta-gaming is when their is a commonly used way of playing... for example on league of legends the meta's are the US were their are a tank, support, Damage per second (DPS), Burst, and support. That would be the league US meta.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: This isn't a good thing. Its basicly when i force another player to do something without their consent. Ex: Player 1 gives player 2 diamond sword.

In-Character Details

Character Name: Symyr of Oren

Character Race: Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: I have lived a hard life. At a young age was trained to fight the worst of creatures. I have seen things that would make children quake with fear. Only a few people can do what I have done. I have been forced to be a ranger.

I am currently trying to stray from this life, as all I want to become just a average citizen. But the world does not need a average person, but a worrier, I will rise to any occasion as long as my family is kept safe. I will not back down until this evil is over; I do know i cant do this on my own. I will make allies, slay the enemies of Oren, and make sure that no one hurts those I dear. I am not just the average man, I am Symyr of Oren.

What are your characters ambitions?: To help defeat the foes of Oren. and to keep my family safe. And stop all fighting I can if i can... but will fight for a just cause.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: http://imgur.com/jba0Y

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: Other then the fact that i'm not a cold blooded killer... No.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? Dwarf what is thou name, I would like to purchase that apple you have there how much will it cost me as I haven't eaten since the morn.

You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? I talk to the Orc and Dwarf: Why does thouest fight. (as i listen to both stories i hear from the Orc that the Dwarf has scammed him from his goods.) Young Dwarf please give back his goods as I will pay you for them. (then they agree to go on their seperate ways.)

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: I grab the coins and tell the man thou shant worry, I will help you sir. (i pick him up and take him to his house, then I go to the town and buy him a walking stick with my own money for i see he doesn't have much.)

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Incorrect Meta-Gaming definition. You can find more information on the forums and wiki, but make sure to use your own words.

The bio needs much more detail - why is your character a warrior, what has done this. You reference a family but explain nothing about it. Needs to be longer as well.

Please expand on all ORQs. All information in parentheses should be incorporated into the responses. The ORQs need to contain dialogue and action, like small stories.

There are some capitalization errors in the application.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

[everblue2er101 906]

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