Application

[sulsagamer 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:sulsagamer

How old are you?:13 but almost 14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:US, Colorado

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes, I get B's in Language Arts.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:Yes, on my server we like to have fun rping as different people like The Empire and the Rebelion(Star Wars).

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes, I agree and fully understand dthe rules of LordofTheCraft.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:I heard about it from PetriTheGamingNerd(Youtube).

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:I have made 3 other applications. My first one I didn't post in the right place and the second I didnt write down the right definition for power-emoting and meta-gaming. I also forgot to link a PICTURE of the skin and didn't make it ovious where my second paragraph started on bio.

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:Roleplaying is when you pretend to act as another person.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:Meta-gaming is when you use out-of-game information to affect someones in-game dicisions like saying something about someones race when you can't really tell what race they are.(By race I mean like black, white, esc.)

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:Power-emoting is when you say *Pick pockets your gold.* you have no chance to stop that from happening because they just said it happened. Instead you should emote *Tries to pick pocket -Name-* so the person can act.

In-Character Details

Character Name:Bret Hud

Character Race:Dwarf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:When I was 8 I lived in a peaceful cabin near the dwarf mountains. My dad would go to mine there while my mom stayed home and play with me. I was a happy little dwarf. But then one day I was playing with a toy pick that I had gotten for my 4TH birthday. I heard my mom and dad scream and there was a explosion. I felt a large amount of pain in my back and cheek. I was flung away from the explosion and landed on my back. Dazed and confused I got to my feet and stumbled over to the mountains. When I steped in through the entrance I saw hundreds of dwarves walking around the great halls of the mountain. I croaked "Help" and fell to the ground knocked out. When I awoke I was in a bed with a scares on my back and cheek. I would never forget this day.(Start of second paragrapth.)Now, I am a 19 year old dwarf. Standing at 3,8. I have strong shoulders and a fire red beard. My skin is pale and my eyes are blue. I have several scares on my back and one on my cheek. I wear dark brown leather pants and black leather boots. I am a strong bold dwarf. I will never say no to any help someone needs. Drinking ale is my favorite way to pass the time. If there is a battle I try to join in it. I never steal from someone who does not deserve it.

What are your characters ambitions?:I want to become a great miner like my dad once was and go on many adventures.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:http://dl.dropbox.com/u/64145180/2012-10-15_19.49.21.png

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:My character likes ladies.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?I walk up to the dwarf and say "Hello , what you sellin' here?" The poor dwarf looks at me and say "I sell everything from a caps to boots." I say "Ok well I'd like ye best leather cap. I need to keep the sun out of me eyes." The dwarf replys "That will be 15 Minas." I take out my Minas bag and and take out a huge hand full of Minas and give it to the dwarf. The dwarf stares at me and says "This is over 100 Minas! That is way more then the cap costs!" I say "Oh, that's fine. You need it more then me. The dwarf smiles and give me a leather cap. I wave goodbye and put on the leather cap.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?I walk up to the Orc and say "Hey leave that dwarf alone, you brute!" The Orc looks at me and replys "Who's gonna stop me? I little dwarf? *Laughs Loudly*" I then say "If I must I will." The Orc says back "*laughs* How can you beat me. I am way bigger and stronger then you." I reply back "Strength and height is not the only thing you need to win a battle." The Orc says "Well, the're damn good things to have." I reply "You have only half of what you really need to win a battle." The Orc yells "Oh yeah!? Then lets see!" The Orc charges me but I dodge by inches and pull out my sword. I slash at his ankle. He groans in pain. He comes for another charge but this time with his axe out. He swings at me but again I'm too quick and slash him across the face. The Orc screams in agonyand runs off. The dwarf who was being bullied says "Oh, thank you. I thought I was done for."

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:I run over to the man and help him onto a bench. The old man smiles at me. I smile back and go and get his bag of Minas. I bring it over to him and say "You best be more careful." The old man says "Oh, thank you kind traveler." I say "No problem." I help up the old man and walk him over to Malinor and buy him a new walking stick. The old man says "Thank you so much." I reply "It was nothing."

[Skippy 2466]

Your Application to Lord of the Craft has been...

Denied

• Lore Breaking Biography
  
  First of all, dwarves don't live in cabins above ground. They all live in the caverns of Kal'Karik, in cave homes. Also, the way you age your character is incorrect, as the age 19 is still a child in dwarven years. If you need dwarven lore help, click on this sentence.
  
  
• Breaking Character in ORQ #2
  
  Everything was fine in this, up until the part where you stabbed the orc's face when he was standing. Orcs are about 7 to 9 ft. tall, and dwarves are around 3 to 4 ft. tall. Also, dwarves wouldn't be able to wield swords and be able to move like your character did, as swords are about as tall as them, and would reduce their speed and agility greatly.
  

If you have any questions or concerns about your application, send me a Private Message. You may reapply when these changes have been fixed in 24 hours.

[Skippy 2466]

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