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MC Username: ShelbyIsRockin

Rp Username (be sure to include the correct prefix, look up on info thread): Sa'Raziel

Character Skillset: Raz was raised on a bow and arrow. She is not keen on close combat due to her slightly timid nature in battle. Instead, she likes to shoot her prey and enemies from the tops of trees or from the leaves of a bush. Raz has always had a passion for fishing, liking to play with her food before actually killing it. The kha has recently become interested in farming, but isn't very graceful with it.

Appearance (age, SUBRACE, gender):

15, Kha'Leparda, Female

Personality:

Being a teenager, Raziel is still head strong. She likes things done her way when it comes to her parents and many siblings, and will generally take charge when her parents are out. She enjoys have the attention on herself, and takes on responsibility just for praise from any kha around. She gets immense joy from praise, probably too much. Her obsession with doing everything right and neat can exasperate those around her, but her parents have found her to be rather helpful at times. Even though Raz tends to be a tad disrespectful toward her family, she holds their deity in the highest regards, as well as anyone in the classes above her own. The female kha is partial to anything or anyone better than her own, having sophisticated taste for one in a lower class.

Raziel dreams of marrying someone of higher class, although never being admired as a child because she had never cared about her appearance before. Yes, as a child she was rough and tough and played hard. She had a tendency to be a bit harsh, and even as she mellowed out into maturity she still kept that same vicious attitude toward anything not Kha. Raziel refers to orcs and dwarves as scum, although never meeting them in person. She is quick to judge any raise by it's cover. Humans and elves she has seen once or twice, having more of a curiosity to them. Though she masks her curiosity with malicious actions, Raziel still wishes for a chance to speak with a human and learn their 'language'.

Please include a short bio of your character's life:

Raziel was the first born of six kittens throughout her parent's marriage. They had desperately wanted a male for their first. Though not disappointed with their daughter, they had still named her a male's name, in the hopes that she would take over the family like a male would. Fortunately, everything worked out in their favor in the long run. Raziel was prideful, stubborn, pretentious, and confident from the time she could utter her first words. As she grew, she helped raise the other kittens that her parents bore. Next were Raj, Absinth, Nyx, and the twins (Quill and Raze). Their parents were obsessed with their work as hunters and soldiers, living a modest and quiet life.

Raz, unlike her siblings, was not keen on living such a small life. She grew up drawing maps in the dirt, carving maps into trees, and pretending to explore unknown places. She had a wandering heart, and an urge to go into some kind of combat. However when she was introduced to a bow at age eleven, she was immediately taken by it. She climbed trees and shot down birds, surprised her friends by shooting an arrow right behind them, and spent most of her free time practicing. Right now Raziel is pretty good with a bow, and prepared to explore a lot of Oren, to increase her knowledge about the nasty beings living near her.

Character's ambitions:

Raziel wants to marry up into a higher class and raise a respectable family, although in the future. She is more intent on increasing her knowledge of the world she lives in as of now.

_---Situational Rp Questions---_

1. As you travel through the Karakatuan jungle, you spot a human trespassing on your nation's lands. He approaches you, obviously distressed, and asks for any food, water, or shelter that you can provide, then tells you that he has been lost in the area for days without any proper supplies. How do you react?:

Her claws unsheathe and she lets a growl escape her muzzle. "Ape." Raziel hiss under her breath and digs around in her bag, not able to avoid the gnawing of sympathy in her stomach despite the disgust boiling up in the same area. How dare he trespass? She tosses him a bit of fish, watching him eat with a look of pure hatred on her face, and she proceeds to think for a moment. Figuring her best bet is to capture him, she ties his hands back his back with vines from the jungle and decides to turn him in to the guards. No use letting him go, only to tell of where the Kharajyr live.

2.

As you romp through the lands of the "apes", you come across a tavern. Inside this tavern, a Dwarf notices you and starts gawking at you, then begins to speak.

"Oi! I gots a bowl of cream for you, Kitty! Ha! I'd bet you would make a nice throw rug, wouldn't ya, ya mangy furball?!"

He continues act generally as racist as possible. What do you do?:

Making a mental note of how racist the short apes are, she unsheathes her claws and reveals her fangs. Raziel makes a threatening hiss and weighs her chances against him. Her against a drunken dwarf? But what about the others in the tavern. Whiskers twitching and tail curled in her intense rage, Raz thinks better of making a scene. "Ztupid ape." Longing to rake her claws along his face, she proceeds to make some racial comments before abandoning the ape tavern and go to a place of higher intelligence.

3.

One of your fellow Kharajyr and a close friend of yours comes to your dwelling in the middle of the night and begins to pound on your door. After you let him in, he confesses to killing another Kharajyr over a slice of cake. What do you do in response?

Raziel is shocked and angered, yelling at the friend for his stupidity and disgrace. She slams the door in his face, refusing to talk to someone who disrespects the Kharajyr in such a manner. Furious and ashamed, she would be loyal and never tell a soul. However she would probably never speak to that Kha again.

Do you swear to follow the Tlatlanni and uphold his law, and do you swear to hold Metztli and all of her actions as sacred?

I do!

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From the app it seems as if you were more like 17-20. Just my recommendations though ^.^ Good luck seeing how this is a good app, I think you will be accepted.

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-Reviewing-

Side note:

Rule 4~

Only the applicant and the KAT members may post on an application, all other posting is useless spam, that makes our job harder.

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You have been...

Accepted!

Fantastic, it is really nice when I get to read an application that is evident the applicant has really read the lore properly, thank you! Welcome to the Kharajyr I can most certainly not wait to see you in game and I'm sure either myself or one of the other Kharajyr can direct you to our city. Good luck!

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Moved to the Great Library. It shall be sorted into appropriate category shortly.

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