annoyingweirdguy's 3rd applcation

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Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: annoyingweirdguy

How old are you?: 12 (but mature).

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: GMT standard time London.

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes, i believe so.

Have you had any previous experience in role-playing?: Yes I play many Minecraft RP servers and a few MMORPG.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes I read and understood them.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: I heard about it from a friend.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: None

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! : Yes

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of role-playing is: To act and speak as if you are the character you're pretending to be and putting yourself in their shoes

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Using previously gained knowledge within a gaming the universe for personal gain or advantage.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: When players use emotes to describe an action that removes the ability of another player to respond.

In-Character Details

Character Name: Alatar yarrum

Character Race: Dwarf (forest)

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

Alatar was born in the middle of a forest, but as his parents died soon after his birth he was never told what forest. His parents had been murdered by a bandit on their way home when he was only a day old. He was raised by a small family of dwarves who adopted and cared for him. Alatar grew up to be a humble forest dwarf who extremely interested in adventuring ever since he was young.

His adoption parents bought him a small wooden sword for his 5th birthday, he never let it out of his sight and carried it everywhere. Alatar was never a very social dwarf and spent most of his time in the shadows of the forest where he would farm or cut trees. He was an only child and did not keep in contact with his adoption family allot so he got very lonely at times. He has never had many human, dwarf of elf friends as he usually talks to the passing pigs and cows. Alatar doesn't normally stay in the same place for too long and when he does he builds a small wooden hut and farm. He is very friendly most of the time as long as nobody annoys him.

What are your characters ambitions?: Alatar always wanted to be a world renowned wood cutter and live in a big manor.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: http://www.planetminecraft.com/files/resource_media/preview/lordofthecraftdwarf_minecraft_skin-4044655.jpg?t=1352051132

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: Alatar hates skeletons and despises the orc race

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in role-play. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? as i walk up to the dwarf i pull out some money and hand it to the man. "what would you like to buy" the man says. i can see he does not want to part with any of his belongings so i look at him and hand him the money and say "here, take it". "th-thankyou the dwarf stutters".

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? I shout at the orc and say "oil, leave that poor dwarf alone and scram" the orc looks at me and charges i start to gesture to the dwarf to run but the orc grabs my hand and picks me up. "what you say" the dwarf says and chucks me to the ground. he walks off and i run to the tree where the dwarf is hiding to ask if he's okay.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenseless man. What does your character do?: helping the old man up i sit him against a rock. i pull a small bottle of water out of my bag and hand it to him. i quickly rush to the near-by forest to get the man a temporary walking stick. i return with a thick stick and hand it to the old man. "thank you" the man says handing me back the bottle. "anytime" i reply and the man walks away.

[Swgrclan 2682]

Denied.

You must elaborate and expand your biography. There is no mentioning why your character hates orcs, and you say that he despises them. Did orcs harm a lived one? Did an Orc kill his best pig friend? Explain more.

Furthermore, fix your grammar; good grammar enbetters your roleplaying skills.

[Swgrclan 2682]

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