annoyingweirdguy's 4th lotc application

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Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: annoyingweirdguy

How old are you?: 12 (but mature).

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: GMT standard time London.

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes, i believe so.

Have you had any previous experience in role-playing?: Yes I play many Minecraft RP servers and a few MMORPG.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes I read and understood them.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: I heard about it from a friend.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: None

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! : Yes

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of role-playing is: To act and speak as if you are the character you're pretending to be and putting yourself in their shoes

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Using previously gained knowledge within a gaming the universe for personal gain or advantage.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: When players use emotes to describe an action that removes the ability of another player to respond.

In-Character Details

Character Name: Alatar yarrum

Character Race: Dwarf (forest)

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

Alatar was born in the middle of the wilds, but as his parents died soon after his birth. His parents had been murdered by a bandit on their way home when he was only a day old. he was found and raised by a small family of forest dwarves who cared for him at though he were there's. seasons after when he was around 16 (in dwarf years) he was chased into a cave by an orc and a skeleton. it took him half a season to find his way out and he has been scared of caves ever since.

His adoption parents bought him a small wooden sword for his 5th birthday, he never let it out of his sight and carried it everywhere (although when he became 18 he forged a larger iron sword instead). Alatar was never a very social dwarf and spent most of his time in the shadows of the forests where he would farm or cut trees. he hardly ever kept in touch with his adoption parents, so he has never known where they are, even up to this day. He has never had many human, dwarf of elf friends as he usually talks to the passing pigs and cows. Alatar still lives in the wilds, but may sometimes change location. normally he stays in his small, homemade wooden house with a farm. He is very friendly most of the although he does get angered easily.

What are your characters ambitions?: Alatar always wanted to be a world renowned wood cutter and live in a big manor.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: http://www.planetminecraft.com/files/resource_media/preview/lordofthecraftdwarf_minecraft_skin-4044655.jpg?t=1352051132

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: alatar hates orc's as they once killed his pet pig, piggyton (and chased him into the cave when he was 16).

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in role-play. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? as i walk up to the dwarf i pull out some money and hand it to the dwarf. "what would you like to buy" the dwarf says. i can see he does not want to part with any of his belongings so i look at him and hand him the money and say "here, take it". "th-thankyou" the dwarf stutters.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? i shout loudly at the orc "hey you ugly mug step away from the dwarf!" he turns round and pushes the dwarf aside as he strides towards me. he picks me up and holds me up to his face. "what did you say!?" he grunts. he throws me to the floor and walks away.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenseless man. What does your character do?: helping the old man up i sit him against a rock. i pull a small bottle of water out of my bag and hand it to him. i quickly rush to the near-by forest to get the man a temporary walking stick. i return with a thick stick and hand it to the old man. "thank you" the man says handing me back the bottle. "anytime" i reply and the man walks away.

[LeRenardNoir 413]

You were denied for the following reasons:

Your biography must contain server lore. Include things like Asulonian locations and events. Your Open Response Questions could each be expanded upon. Add more detail to them. Also I felt that the resolution to your Open Response Questions seemed a little rushed, take the time to give more development for the characters in these little one paragraph snippets, I should be able to walk away from it with what your character would do in these given situations. Good luck on your next application!

Please wait 24 hours before re-applying.

PM me if you would like further explanation/help.

While you wait…Go and vote for the server to support it!

We all would really appreciate it.

[LeRenardNoir 413]

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