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[Oghren Grandaxe 31]

Out-Of-Character Details

Alternate Minecraft Account Name:lupodusk

Already Accepted Minecraft Account Name: exodawn

How old are you?:20

In-Character Details

Character Name:Kainan

Character Race:human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

Kainan grew up in a small town not far from Al-khazar.

He lived here with his father and his mother, Kainan’s family wasn’t very wealthy as where a lot of family’s those days. His father was a wounded soldier can back not a mounth ago, his mother worked as a farmer’s girl, but send away because the farm where she worked was destroyed.

As kainan’s family had no way to make money, he was forced to do small jobs for the a thief’s group in town, after some years his parents passed away, leaving him all by himself, the local blacksmith felt sorry for the boy and took him in as his apprentice.

Five years later a bandit group raided the town killing everybody young and old, Kainan was pared for the soul reason that there blacksmith had died not three days ago.

And so a new chapter starts in his young live. He quickly felt at home between the bandits who apparently where mercenary’s hired by some lord to raid towns near the human cities. Some strange men whre in this group one call bloodbeard he was the leader, he was always nice to the young kainan. Maybe because his own father was a blacksmith but kainan wasn’t sure.

Kainan now 35 decided to leave the group to roam the world of aegis, he did merc work all over the world mainly in small towns and always tried to avoid the big cities. At one day kainan came across a friendly dwarf not far from Kal’urguan, called “Oghren Stoneborn” who apparently owned a small town near the city.

Oghren invited him to drink some ale and take a rest in his inn. As they sat next to each other, “oghren sad” kainan tell meh yer story, ay always wana know to w’o ay speak. Kainan start to tell his story how he worked as a blacksmith, what happened to his town and how he ended up here.

Oghren silently lissen to the man, after he is done he tells kainan “yer can stay as long as ye want, I can give ye a room in t’e inn, I only ask off ye to guard the town as t’ere is word of undead monsters. Kainan agreed, and he live over 3 year until the undead destroyed aegis, after he arrved in asulon he tried to find his old friend not sure if he was still alive. No some time has passed and kainan is left to wander the world of asulon as he did in aegis

What are your characters ambitions?: to become a famous merc in asulon and maybe to find oghren again

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: he is a merc so need to make a va soon

Open-Response-Questions

Anwser at least two of the below questions with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? As kainan walks in to the market place he notices the poor dwarf, seeing that his wares are of dwarven make. It reminds him of Oghren he good old friend, he walk to the shop keeper and first asks “sir dwarf? Can I ask you what u are doing here? The shopkeeper answers” selling me wares sir. Kainan say”I can see that but why here, don’t you want to sell you ware in the dwarven city? The shopkeeper reacts: aye but it’s a long way from ‘ere and t’er are more customer ‘ere. Kainan nods and pick up a sword, tell me how much? The shopkeeper is amazed that anyone would buy something form him, qiukly says 20 mina sera. Kainan drops a pouch off coins and turns around saying “keep the change”

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? kaian notices the dwarf and the orc, runs towards them and pull them from each other, the orc and dwarf stunned look at the human not knowing what to is happening. As the orc realizes whats happening he starts to mauls at kainan. Kainan deflects every hit and drawns hit sword, he quickly hits the orc with the flat side of his sword so fast that orc isn’t able to parry them, eventually nocking the orc out. As he fall the ground kainan takes his pouch spilling it in half give one half to the dwarf and telling him to get away from here. The other half he keep for himself.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

Kainan helps the man up and quickly grabs the pouch and gathers the mina’s. some off them he hides in his sleeve the man doesn’t know the exact number anyway. Then he walk to a nearby tree break one the the branches and craves a simple cane out of it. The man in grateful for the man help and after greeting him het continue his travel

[mmat 7460]

• Your application contains some spelling and grammatical errors which should be corrected.
  
  
• Your third open response question is a bit lacklustre and is void of much detail, please expand this for next time.
  
  
• Your second open response question contains power-emoting.
  
  
• Your third open response question contains villainous activities, which cannot be performed before your new character has a villain application.

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