[Denied] Application, Revised, Mono Piez

[FlareGunCalamity 213]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:Flareblaze5678

How old are you?:16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:USA central

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:yes

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:I have read, understood and agreed with your rules.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:I have.

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :Yes.

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Roleplaying is, in general, creating a story and acting it out in game. Role playing is taking a character you made up, and eventually becoming him or her in a game. you live through the character's thoughts and feelings. it usually includes pretending to be races from a certain mythology.In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:Meta-gaming is using outside sources, such as cheat books, wikis, online articles, or the internet in general to strategize for in game dungeons, battles, and play-through. it can also be used to search what items you can find in game or cheat in general.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:power emoting, or peer gaming, is the act of making an action agains another player in game with out them knowing, such as "playr A kills Player B" or "Steal X Gold from player 5" and is disliked on LOTC.

In-Character Details

Character Name:Miranda Lauren Peiza (Mono Pei)

Character Race:Human Female

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:Have you ever met someone you loved with all your heart, fully and passionately, and truthfully? Miranda met a man who she loved, and he was the best man ever. it turned out there love was romeo and juliet. he was from an enemy kingdom and that broke her heart. She was forced to never see him again.

Two years later she received news that he was drafted into war and killed in battle. that day she rose from the shadows. that day, all the world would now that she was miranda, and miranda was not afraid.

Miranda was emotionally scarred from her experience with that man. she never had another boyfriend. she doesn't trust authority. And she will fight. she will fight, but she will never, never kill. she knows how it feels to lose someone, and everyone has a someone who will feel that pain when they die. be it a mother, father, sister or brother.

She remains today a refuge from the kingdom after defecting and gaining her deceased love's side. She is commonly known as Mono (Reference much).

Her hair is long and blonde. she had purple eyes and she is fair skinned. she likes to wear blue and go barefoot. She is, when around trusted people, humorous, kind, loving, but short tempered, and naive. she's also very creative. She was raised by elves, even though she is a human being, and later in her life moved to Arethor. She was originally raised as an archer, but dropped that intent and took a fighting class, like karate, and sword fighting. she grew up reading tales of Lore.

She is fond of the elven race and has been told many a time she looks like one. she is fascinated in religion and Lore.

What are your characters ambitions?: To avenge her love, but to avoid killing AT ALL COSTS.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:She's not afraid of anything except for death. she hates wars and armies, and authorities and knights. She likes tea, pies, and cakes.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? Wow. He looks kinda, um, down in the dumps. I approach him.

"hello" I say to him meekly as i approach him.

" would you like to buy something" he sounds rather grumpy.

I look through his wares. there seems to be nothing of use to me on his shop. not wanting to seem impolite, i pick up a small pot.

"how much is this?" I ask as politely as i can to mask the fact i have one in my inventory.

he looks at the pot and tells me how much money i need to pay.

after i walk away, I realize its a much better pot anyways. I keep it and leave my old pot by a tree.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?Nope. Not going to watch this dwarf get beat up. I step in-between the dwarf and the orc, and face the orc. with my elbow, I nudge the dwarf to leave gently. i can hear his footsteps against the ground.The orc looks confused and mad.

"I'm going to fight you if you don't stop harassing people."

I prepared for him to hit me.

He slaps me so hard I fall down. I rub my head to soothe a throbbing pain. Before he hits again, I swipe his legs, and grab them, And pull down with a forceful strength. Not on purpose, he trips and falls instead of simply falling. He must have tripped on a rock. His head hitting a root as he lands. A thick branch falls on his neck and I realize in horror that he's choking.

With all my strength, I tug the branch off, and then help him up. He was confused at this act of kindness. He agreed not to harass dwarves anymore and left.

I left too.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:I help the poor man up. what else would someone do? I help him up and search for a bow or branch to make do for until he can find a real cane.

A Box elder branch i found seems sturdy enough, so i hand it to him.

"I'm afraid i don't ave a bag for your coins, sir" I tell him sadly. he looks at the ground. i looked too and saw a small bird. he took a coin in his beak and flew away. i giggled. it was cute.

The man smiled.

i collected the coins into a pile. afterwards, i piled them ion my skirt and used that as a holder. i walked him to a store, and bought a satchel with my own money.

After scooping in the coins, i gave him the bag. he thanked me and i replied with a polite "your Welcome."

Helping people always makes me happy.

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Did not wait 24 hours before reapplying.

As this is your fourth denied application, if your next one is denied you will be banned from applying for three months. I suggest you take time to really think about your application, make improvements and ask for assistance if needed.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

[mmat 7460]

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