[Denied]Brotherpig123's 2Nd Application!

[brotherpig123 38]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:brotherpig123

How old are you?:14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Australia

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes, very well

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:I've played on other minecraft roleplay servers

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:I was searching on youtube for good roleplay servers

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/77963-brotherpig123s-application/

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: When a person creates a character and pretends to be that person.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: When someone uses information that their character doesn't know to their character's advantage.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: When someone says something that tells what the other roleplayer is going to do, not what the Power-emoter is doing. e.g "Bob shot Steve's head off" is power-emoting, they should say "Bob fired his gun at Steve".

In-Character Details

Character Name:Kirden Bannolds

Character Race:Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

Kirden was born and raised on the Whisper Isles for 16 years, he spent most of his time widdling wooden boats and sailing them in the water, he became a prodigy of widdling by 12 and had loving parents who cared for him dearly. He was well fed and grew to be a strong, buff lad, and didn't look that bad either. His father taught him that only gentlemen went far, and that you can't get help from strangers. While his mother told him that there are bad people out there, and you can't make friends without gaining enemies. His younger brother, Jacob, was very interested in the ocean and sat on the dock watching the sun pass the horizon, dreaming of one day, being captain of a ship in the Oren navy.

Kirden's life changed forever when he was 16 years old, the Orcs took over Whisper Isles, the villagers hated the short temper and stubborness of the Orcs and many left to other villages. Kirden and his family traveled to Galahar to start a new life. When Kirden turned 19, his mother died of old age and soon after, his father died from a bar fight in the tavern, which left just him and Jacob. Finally, at the age of 21, Kirden joined the Pheonix Guard and his brother, Jacob, joined with him. With the undead attempting to take over the city, the rest of Kirden's life is open to a new page.

What are your characters ambitions?: To live a long and happy life and keep in touch with his brother.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: Nope

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?I would walk up to the dwarf and ask him how his life's been, trying to become friends with him, I would buy some of his items and tell him about my life, after we've finished talking I would say goodbye and promise myself that I would come back the next day.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?I'd step in and try to find out what the quarrel is about, I'd then try to solve it and get the Orc and the dwarf to apologise and forgive eachother. After that, I'd be proud of myself for helping them and possibly preventing a fistfight or even death.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man, looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down,a bag of Minas falls to the ground, splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:I would reach my hand out at the bag, thinking how easy it would be to steal some, but pull it back in thought of my father's words, I'd then help the man up and ask him if I could help, I'd walk him to Malinor and make sure he would be alright.

[Skippy 2466]

You did not post your application on the Minecraft Forums as we ask you to. You need to expand on your role-play definition. It is slightly vague. It seems like in your biography you think we're still in Aegis. Well, we aren't. We're currently residing on islands between Asulon and the new world. Lastly, you need to improve your ORQs by adding dialog and not answering them like "I would...".

Reapply in 24 hours.

[Skippy 2466]

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