[Denied]Brotherpig123's 3Rd Application

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Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:brotherpig123

How old are you?:14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Australia GMT:+10

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:[/color Yes, very well

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:I've played on other minecraft roleplay servers

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:I was searching on youtube for good roleplay servers

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/77963-brotherpig123s-application/

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: When a person imagines a fake character and pretends to have their appearance, personality, and character.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: When someone uses information that their character doesn't know to their character's advantage.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: When someone says something that tells what the other roleplayer is going to do, not what the Power-emoter is doing. e.g "Bob shot Steve's head off" is power-emoting, they should say "Bob fired his gun at Steve".

In-Character Details

Character Name:Kirden Bannolds

Character Race:Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

Kirden was born with brown hair and blue eyes and was raised on the Whisper Isles for 16 years, he spent most of his time widdling wooden boats and sailing them in the water, he became a prodigy of widdling by 12 and had loving parents who cared for him dearly. He was well fed and grew to be a strong, buff lad, and didn't look that bad either. His father taught him that only gentlemen went far, and that you rarely get help from strangers. While his mother told him that there are bad people out there, and you can't make much friends without gaining a few enemies aswell. His younger brother, Jacob, was very interested in the ocean and sat on the dock watching the sun pass the horizon, dreaming of one day, being captain of a ship in the Oren navy.

Kirden and his family were some of the people to survive the undead and escape on the ship to Asulon. Kirden was only 16 and his brother, Jacob, was just 14. Sadly, not the entire family lives to this day, Kirden's father, who became extremely seasick, died from dehydration because of vomiting and the lack of fresh water. Also, when the family came off the ship in the new land of Asulon, Kirden's mother died from reasons unknown, leaving Kirden and Jacob alone. He and his brother then bought a house in Arethor and lived their for the next few years. When he turned 19, Kirden joined the Arethor guard easily managed to feed himself and his brother.

When Kirden turned 23, he heard about the new world and the amount of people going there, so he told his brother to pack his valuables and necessities because life in Asulon will soon be behind them. Since Kirden was in the Asulon guard, he was able to be above decks, and sometimes hid some food in his pocket and sneaked it down for his brother to eat. He widdled a replica of the boat they were on in his free time, it looked exactly like it. After the boat stopped at some islands and Kirden bought another house, he joined the gaurd there with his now 21 year old brother.

What are your characters ambitions?: To live a long and happy life and keep in touch with his brother.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: Nope

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?As I entered Arethor, I noticed a poor-looking dwarf trying to sell his wares. "Apples for 3 minas each!" he said. No one was paying attention to him so I thought to myself I should go talk to that dwarf. So I wandered up to him and asked what he was selling. "All the necessities you need! I have food, dyes, tools, all you need!" I remembered that I was in search of food. And even though his apples didn't look the best. I felt sorry for him and bought a couple. "Thankyou kind sir!" He said, "Please come back any time you like!" I asked him if he had a family but he replied no. "I couldn't be able to keep a famly with the amount of money I make." He told me,"I barely make enough to keep myself alive!" I told him I lost my father and then my mother soon after. He felt truly sorry for me and gave me another apple for free. I told him my name was Kirden and said I would come back the next day.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? I was traveling along the Oren road late at night, and I heard someone arguing. I looked around and I noticed an Orc threatening a Dwarf, it looked like it was soon going to turn to a fight so I walked over and asked what the fight was about, the Orc replied in Orcish, "This runt bumped me as I was passing along the road, and then he lied and said it was accidental, so I told him if he didn't apologise that I would pull his head out of his body, stick it on a pole, and make him watch me feed his limbs to the wolves." I then asked the Dwarf if it was accidental and he replied, "Yes! I was just running down the road because I need to get back to my wife, she's ill, and I accidentally bumped into this Orc and he thought I did it purposely." So I told the Orc it was just a misunderstanding and he actually understood and continued on his travels, I said goodbye to the Dwarf and then continued traveling aswell.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man, looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down,a bag of Minas falls to the ground, splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: I noticed a very old man with a walking stick. He looked very weak and I was going to ask him where he was going, but as soon as I was about to ask him, his walking stick broke and he fell to the ground, a bag of minas fell to the ground and split open, I thought to myself how easy it would be to grab those coins and walk away, but as my hand was reaching for the coins, my father's words spoke in my head. "Only gentlemen get far." So I pulled my hand back, broke a stick off the nearest tree, and helped the man up, I walked with him for a bit, to make sure he was ok. "Ohh thankyou young man for helping a man like me." He said as I was walking him. I asked why he was walking on such a road like this, he replied, "I have no home now, I'm going to finish the rest of my life with the elves, with my old friend."

[Queen of Aegis 174]

- We where in Asulon for 70 years, it is highly unlikely that you as a human only aged 3 years after leaving Aegis

- Your ORQs are told as if it already happened, you are doing the act now and should be written so

Just a note: Try to fix the coloring in your next app

You may reapply in 24 hours after this post

If you have any questions feel free to PM me

~BoomBox~

[Queen of Aegis 174]

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