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(Probably the hardest one I will ever do, killing off my very first character, had her for quite a bit of time; I didn't really want to let her go. The music is one I posted in the 'what is your character's theme song?' quite a while ago because I thought it suited her, I still do. Anyway, onto the death scene (and credits/thanks)

Note- everything described here happened in game!)

Mayah walked to her door, planning to wander out in search of her lost friend Ava. She pulled her coat around her shoulders and tucked her hands into her pockets, opening the door. As she stepped out, a looming figure stood before her, the figure stepped forward and Mayah instantly recognised her as a lich (skeleton)

Mayah panicked, the skeleton spoke to her and asked to enter the home. Out of fear, Mayah opened the door and let her in. The lich conversed with her and was quite disgusted at the pet pig- Susan 2.0.

The lich asked if there was any place they could talk and Mayah led them upstairs. The lich spoke to her for a bit longer, asking simple questions about her life. Mayah told the lich she was soon to be married and the lich decided she would not kill her because of this.

The lich was missing a finger and cut of Mayah's, using it for herself. She left finally and Mayah ran out the door, searching for help. She stepped outside and was met by another lich. This lich asked her where 'she' had gone and Mayah told him she had left.

He asked her if he could take her, or part of her. He wanted her eye. Another man came along and battled the lich, so the lich used his power to burn Mayah.

As Mayah burned, she accepted her fate. She turned very slowly to the battling man, who was now conversing with the lich, and uttered her final words- "Tell Ari I love him, please."

She burnt and burnt, the lich never quite burning her enough to kill her, instead he threatened the man he was fighting with. A man came and tried to save Mayah, it was then that the lich finally decided to kill her. He allowed the flames to burn her insides and she was finally put to peace.

Credits/thanks (in no particular order, I would like to thank those I have RPed quite a bit with, if I don’t mention you I am sorry! Yes, I used the nicknames I have for people because I have a bad memory)

Ari-

What an amazing character to RP with! Mayah and Ari were soon to be married and this made her death very, very hard. I really hope Ari is able to move on, to achieve bigger, better things. I honestly can’t describe how amazing an RPer you are! You always make me laugh! Susan... Those chickens that liked you a little too much... Buble Michael Bond... Hilarious! I really hope that the town goes well! I honestly can’t thank you enough for all the amazing RP. Also, sorry about the broken window upstairs, the lich did it!!

Alianor- Had some good RP moments with you, enjoyed your ‘distractions’ before Ari’s proposal! Quite an interesting character, thank you for all the RP!

Uboob- The maid? Really? Your girlfriend now? Yes, our characters may not have thought the best of each other but you did have some very nice RP going on there! But seriously, take my advice with that maid! Don’t worry, Mayah can’t get to her now, hopefully Ava won’t...

Amon- Mayahs first love, one of the first people I RPed with, Amon is a great character, he was very interesting and it was sad to see his tongue get cut off and his arm do something (I didn’t actually get what happened) I hope Amon is able to get through this, and be able to speak again, I also hope he is able to find someone else and hopefully marry!

Azel- You are awesome, Azel. I really hope you will start talking to Crystal again! I would like to continue RP with you! Azel is a very interesting character, he is very... solemn (I like it, it’s interesting) thank you for all the amazing RP! That snowball fight was fun!

Ava- No thanks for you! Nah, you were Mayah’s best friend from the start, our characters were very close and I would never have met Ari if it weren’t for you! You gave some of the most interesting RP... Things that should never be shared with anyone... Hahahah.

Tib- I was looking through some screenshots the other day, I took some of my first ever RP, it was with you! And about ten minutes later I met you in Arethor and you and Amon gave me a job! It was great RPing with you, sad to see you gone.

Gal- Almost married you after meeting you less than a day before! We had both had a bit too much ale... It was good to see you again in Oren! I wish you luck in your climbing of the ranks!

Wolf (I know you are banned)- Very good RP with you, sad to see you banned. Wulf was quite an interesting character; Mayah didn’t like him too much, though!!

The Syndicate (I think that was your name?)- Marksimonson and his friends... I had some very interesting RP with you guys, too, you definitely knew how to keep me entertained! Taking over Khabbi, threatening me, kidnapping me twice, recently knocking on my door (while the lich was there, actually!) Thank you for all of that!

Honestly, writing this makes me very sad, it is quite hard to say goodbye to such a good character, especially when she was my first. I hope to see you all in the future with any new characters I make!

-M

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Glad to see you found the syndicate were satisfactory, I feel as if we're being audited at the moment for the exact opposite

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Glad to see you found the syndicate were satisfactory, I feel as if we're being audited at the moment for the exact opposite

If you need me to confirm that you were good RPers, stuck to the rules and were entertaining, feel free to PM me! I don't understand how people would see otherwise...

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A sad, day Although have fun with you're new character, I wish you the best and I hope you know you're death was not my fault but one of Laurina's, and the man fighting me :I

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I hope you know you weren't forced to perma-kill your character. I feel bad now p-p I told evark not to do anything, but you know, he can't help himself. Now, I thought that character was interesting and I was planning on using her for something... Sad to see her die p-p

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A sad, day Although have fun with you're new character, I wish you the best and I hope you know you're death was not my fault but one of Laurina's, and the man fighting me :I

No problem, I asked you to kill her, you made me confirm that is what I wanted three times, it definetly wasn't your fault (if anyone's it was mine, which is why I was glad I did it this way)

I hope you know you weren't forced to perma-kill your character. I feel bad now p-p I told evark not to do anything, but you know, he can't help himself. Now, I thought that character was interesting and I was planning on using her for something... Sad to see her die p-p

No, I decided she needed to go, I would prefer to focus on my other character Crystal as I feel she has more to accomplish, Mayah had achieved most of her goals, Crystal is very interesting and I feel I can RP with her better (Mayah was weak and occasionally quite annoying)

I always imagined her leaving with a 'bang' and she did, if I hadn't have done it now, she would have died some boring death in a fire or something.

It seems people think that I didn't want to kill her off, I did, I was just sad to see her go, I also forgot to thank both of you in my credits! You are both amazing RPers, though, you both had something unique and interesting to offer, I thoroughly enjoyed the RP I had with both of you, so thank you!

Ttwesten I also remember when you played that little boy that abandoned Mayah in the middle of the desert, I was quite new to RPing then, it was a very interesting experience!

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I always liked rping with Mayah. She was always a good time. It is truly saddening to see her go. Good story though :D

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Hi, 'the battling man' here. Needless to say this has been haunting my character ever since it occurred. I thought you played it really well, kudos to you.

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Moved to the Great Library. It shall be sorted into appropriate category shortly.

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