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Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:Armani52561

How old are you?:12 turning 13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Pacific time - California

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Oh yes, I have lived in California speaking english since i was born.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes, a bit with my brothers.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: yes, and i absolutely agree.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: Well i saw it from Potato Orgy.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! : Yes, i will after i finish this.

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Roleplaying is when you act as a character from maybe a show or an mmo or a movie. A lot of people including my brothers love to roleplay Dungeons and Dragons and Shadowrun.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Meta gaming is when you speak out of character.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Power emoting is when you make your character OP (over powered.)

In-Character Details

Character Name:Banur

Character Race:Dwarf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: He comes from the dwarven home of Mount Ire. He has been taught to fight, the only way his race can survive. All through out his childhood he has been trained for battle. Mainly he has been trained with the axe. He loves to chop animals in half. Others may call this weird, ESPECIALLY the humans. But he does not mind what others think of him. And he never once doubted his leader and his family's decisions. Banur is as tall as all other dwarves. Around 5'1. He has a stern facial expression and he has a passion for steak and potatoes. However, now he is 20. He goes out for an adventure. His first adventure, And a special one to him indeed.

He has waited his entire life for this adventure He has prepared, trained, and he is ready. His father has gone on an adventure much like his, he wants his adventure to be just like his fathers. But who knows? Could it ever be the same. He does not like the rain as it messes with his vision. He is a good cook and loves to chop down trees.

What are your characters ambitions?: He wants his adventure to be a great one, and he wants to participate in a war.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: No, there isnt anythign else i can think of.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? I tell him "that if he wants to be rich and powerful in a new city instead of poor and hungry, He needs to be tough. Do not let yourself be a pushover. If someone is paying less than what you want. Bargain with him but dont make him run off without buying your merchandise. Always remember to buy low, sell moderate. A new city always is full of competition. If you are weak and a pushover, the people will eat you up."

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? I tell the orc, "hello sir, why are you picking on this here dwarf? Please tell me what he has caused you." He replies with his troubles. I reply by saying "I see, and fellow dwarf, what do you have to say to yourself? You shall apologize for messing with the orc." I then say to the orc "Stop threatening this here dwarf.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenseless man. What does your character do?: Since i am not a thief i gather all the minas, put it in a pouch, and hand it to the man. Next i pull out a walking stick that i use that's very strong. I help the man up and give him the walking stick. I ask him if he is all right. I help him any way i could. I then walk him to the nearest inn where i buy him a room and he could spend the night. I tell him "Sleep, you had a bad day." Then i go back on the road to Malinor.

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Incorrect Meta-Gaming definition. Expand on Power-Emoting or add an example. You can find more information on the forums and wiki, but make sure to use your own words.

Need to provide a skin screenshot. You may wish to use THIS GUIDE as a reference.

In the Open Response Questions your character should have a Dwarven accent. Please expand on all ORQs slightly, add more action.

There are some capitalization errors throughout the application.

A good attempt.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

[everblue2er101 906]

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