[Denied]Armani52561 Registering No.2

[Armani52561 4]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:Armani52561

How old are you?:12 turning 13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Pacific time - California

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Oh yes, I have lived in California speaking English since I was born.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes, a bit with my brothers.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: yes, and I absolutely agree.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: Well I saw it from Potato Orgy

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/79396-armani52561-registering-for-the-server/

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! : Yes, I have.

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Roleplaying is when you act as a character from maybe a show or an mmo or a movie and you take on his "role." A lot of people including my brothers love to roleplay Dungeons and Dragons and Shadowrun.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Meta gaming is when you use out of game knowledge to give you an advantage.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Power emoting is when you force another player to do something without allowing him to respond or act. This can give unfair advantages to others.

In-Character Details

Character Name:Banur

Character Race:Dwarf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: He comes from the dwarven home of Mount Ire. He has been taught to fight, the only way his race can survive. All throughout his childhood he has been trained for battle. And he never once doubted his leader and his family's decisions. Banur is as tall as all other dwarves, Around 5'1. He has a stern facial expression and he has a passion for steak and potatoes. However, now he is 20. He goes out for an adventure. His first adventure, and a special one to him indeed.

He has waited his entire life for this adventure He has prepared, trained, and he is ready. His father has gone on an adventure much like his; he wants his adventure to be just like his fathers. But who knows? Could it ever be the same? He does not like the rain as it messes with his vision. He is a good cook and loves to chop down trees.

What are your characters ambitions?: He wants his adventure to be a great one, and he wants to participate in a war.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: He worked with his father as a merchant from the age of 16 to 18.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? I come close and examine him, I realize he is part of my race so I buy a fruit. I then tell him the secrets of bargaining which I learned from my father. He then replies thank ye so much.” I also tip him 50 minas. He tells me “Thank ye very much.”

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? I tell the orc, "What in god’s name are you doing! “ He replies by saying “This one o’er ere wan’ed to attack meh. “ I ask the dwarf “Di ya really attack ‘im? Ow could you!” The dwarf replies by saying “Ge outta our way! No one needs ye ere!” I then stop the fight and threaten the orc by saying “Don’t ye hit ‘em!”

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenseless man. What does your character do?: Since I am not a thief I gather all the minas, put it in a pouch, and hand it to the man. Next I break of a thick branch and hand it to the man. I tell him “I on’t normally help humans, but this be an exception. I on’t want to see ye here anymore.” I then throw the pouch at the man, softly to not hurt him seeing as he is old. Then I run away into the mist.

[LeRenardNoir 413]

You were denied for the following reasons:

A good application, however there were a few glaring issues. Your Open Response Questions were much too short and lack detail. Please expand upon each and every one. Your biography has server lore, but I would prefer to see more events and locations from Asulon and perhaps how you got to Elysium, the current island. Good luck on your next application!

Please wait 24 hours before re-applying.

PM me if you would like further explanation/help.

While you wait…Go and vote for the server to support it!

We all would really appreciate it.

[LeRenardNoir 413]

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