[Denied]Elros Arcamenel

[iTzShambo 135]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:iTzShambo
How old are you?:14
Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Ireland 
Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes I would like to think so.
Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:Yes a couple prison servers and another role playing server.
Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes I understand and also agree.
How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:Alot of my friends play the server and I have also talked to Tythus a couple of times.
Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:N/A
Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! : 

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:Taking on the form of a character and acting like that character
In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Meta-gaming is a player using knowledge out of character that they should not know for their own benefit. 
In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:Power-emoting is the difference between preforming an act or attempting to preform an act. For example someone breaking free from 20 orcs that hold him in chains.

In-Character Details

Character Name:Elros Arcamenel
Character Race:Elf
Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:
Description 
Long blonde hair with dark blue eyes. Green shirt and a green coat around him. Bright white trousers and grey slippers. He is 5ft 11 and 26 years old he has a big heart but is not shy with a bow.
Story
Elros is from a small city called Swalinf behind the Dark Mountains. He was raised by his father Denros Arcamenel. His mother was killed by  band of Orcs that were raiding the village his Grandfather was also killed in this event. He is now keen on getting his Fathers revenge as his Father died from a wound of his last battle. At the age of 14 he was wandering to a new home to set his destiny straight. When he was picked up by a large man on horseback and hit hard over the head.

He awakes three weeks later in a small bed with a young lady beside him. He panicked and jumps to his feet and takes to the door when he is grabbed by the same man. He looks up worryingly when the man says "Do not worry we are helping you". The man goes on to explain that he was following the Orcs and saw his village pummel and wants to help. The boy then refuses and jumps on the mans horse and takes for a Elven city and to avenge his family.
   
What are your characters ambitions?:To join with fellow Elf's and protect villages from Orc's.
Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: http://imgur.com/Y4Eg8
Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?
As you venture toward the Dwarf his eyes widen with happiness, He then rush's around his stall naming all his products and describing them.I then say "Slow down my friend I myself dont have a penny I just came to ask where the closest Elven city is".The Dwarf falls on a sack of potatoes and put his head in his hands and says "I've nae  eaten a'day and its nearly sundown. Do you have antthing worth a penny lad" I go down on one knee and say "I have 2 leg of goat but you will have to come on an adventure with me to the Elven town" Then we both leave venturing into the night.  
You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?
I casually stroll over and attempt to trip the Orc as he is drunk he falls easily. The Dwarf hops away laughing at Orc cursing him. I quickly flee before the Orc rises. He then runs into the Dwarf later and the dwarf hands him a purse of silver for his efforts.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

I rush over to the aid of the man, attempt to pick him up but he is way to heavy and keeps resisting. He pleads with me to let him freeze but I gradually win him over and get him to his feet. As he rises he goes to pick up a coin but screeches with pain and falls again. I pick up each coin and then pull him meter by meter to a near by tavern where the innkeeper takes him to a room and thanks me for returning his father. 

[Peter Chivay 2494]

 

Please wait 24 hours before re-applying.

 

There are two main points of your application that I would like to see you improve on.

 

1. Expand on your power gaming and meta gaming definitions.

 

2. While your biography is the proper length, I would like to see some lore implemented into it. Places currently in the server, nations currently thriving, and other aspects that are unique to the server.

 

(( This is not mandatory, however. I suggest you making sure the formatting and colors are correct in the application before posting, can make it much easier on the reader! ))

 

Feel free to PM me if you wish any further explanation or help. 

 

While you wait…Go and vote for the server to support it!

 

 

We all would really appreciate it.

[Peter Chivay 2494]

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