[Denied]Spqrsancus' Application

[spqrSancus 175]

Out-Of-Character Details

 

Minecraft Account Name:

spqrSancus

How old are you?:

15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: 

EST

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: 

I am, I excel in English, albeit occasionally making minor mistakes.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:

Small amounts, but as I have had trouble finding a good serious RP server, I do not have much.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:

I have read them and understand them. I agree to them. 

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: 

Basically, I was searching throughout the internet for a good roleplay server, one in which people would actually ROLEPlAY, instead of chatting with horrible grammar, and having no STORY.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:

I have no other applications.

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :

Just did.

Definitions

 

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:

To roleplay is to act out a role in a story, with a specific background story.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:

To use information you know in your real life that your character may not know as of yet. For example, looking at nametags to determine a character's name, or, a friend tells you the location of their really secret base and then traveling there, albeit your character has NO idea where it is.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:

It is an emote in which the other player is given no chance to respond to it. For an example, /me cuts off [person]'s head.

In-Character Details

 

Character Name:

Sancor

Character Race:

Elf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

 

            Sancor was simply a wandering warrior monk, whom had pledged himself to protecting the poor and weak. One day, however, Iblees appeared to him in a dream, and spoke to him. He told him that light was a lie, and that to fight darkness, he must wield it in hand. Sancor took this to be literal, and from the light of stars, he forged a blade of pure shadow, taken from the void. And so many did seek this sword, and one day, as he slept, a group of bandits crept up on him, and took the sword from his side and plunged it deep into his heart. And even as they punctured it, they did not. Instead, the blade struck down on his soul, and tainted it forever, and as it did so, it disappeared.

 

            The blade tainted his body, too. His hair, once fair, grew dark as night. And it made him grow older, and faster than any other elf. He was once only 13 elven years old, and in the space of a year, his mind was that of one of 800, and his body, of 500.

 

            From here was the beginning of his TRUE journey. For with the blade came a realization profound. He learnt the ways of darkness, and learnt of why we needed it, why it was required by life. He came to see curses for blessings, for they gave him wisdom. He has sworn to bring the land peace, whether by light or by darkness. In his mind, you were with him... Or you were not.

 

What are your characters ambitions?:

My character seeks peace and wisdom, but will use anything at his disposal to achieve it, due to the taint of the Blade of the Void.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

I am very sorry about the size, tried to get you a larger picture, but I couldn't figure out how. Sorry. I hope this is okay. If not, I can post my actual skin (the one I used to upload it)

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: 

He will refuse bribes, but will gladly trade information, and accept donations.

Open-Response-Questions

 

 

 

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

 

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

I will ask what is his wares. If he has nothing of interest, I will give what I can. If he has something I need, I will buy it instead. If that is not enough, I will attempt to bring him to some Elven friends, or back to his people, no matter the danger.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

I will try and calm the Orc down, or if I am too late, or he does not listen, I will have no qualms about killing him. I will give what I do not need to the dwarf and move on.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

I will gather the coins, and will either go walk away with them, if I have need of money, or if I think he might pose a threat as to drawing attentions to me, I will kill him. If I have not need of coin, I will give them back to him and try to find him another walking stick, and carry on with my journey.

[MonkeyCoffee 516]

Your application has been...

 

Denied.

 

Reason(s):

 

You cannot make a "blade out of pure shadow, taken from the void" as described in your bio, as this isn't in the lore.

 

Along with this, I don't see how a 13 year old would be able to craft any sword at all.

 

All of your Open Response Question  need to be expanded, they also need to contain dialogue.

 

In your third Open Response Question, you say that you want to kill the man because he might draw attention to you. This requires a Villain Application, as you can not simply kill someone.

 

 

Overall, it shows that you somewhat read our lore.

 

 

 

Please re-apply in 24 hours. 

 

If you have any questions, please, don't hesitate to PM me, I will gladly answer it.

[MonkeyCoffee 516]

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