[Denied]Application [Halfling]

[Ventios. 4]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please fill out the following questions as accurately as
possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

 

Minecraft Account Name: ventios

How old are you?: 13

Time-Zone: GMT (Southern England)

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes and I
agree 100%.

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I have
played many other role play servers, 2 Harry Potter ones and another lord of
the rings one.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: I was playing
a Harry Potter server and saw someone talking about Lord of the rings. Then I
had a brainwave, let’s find a Lord of the rings role-playing server! I admit it
was very hard to find but in the end I managed to find you!

Link any applications that you have previously made for the
server:

1.  http://www.lordofthe...ation-halfling/

2.  http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/81151-application-halfling/

 

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If
not, then please do so (link above): I have

Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make
use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes, but I am using the Halfling
lore for my character

 

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any
definitions from elsewhere!:

 

Role-playing: Role playing is stepping inside your characters
soul and being them. Using features you have uncovered to make a profile on how
your character reacts and lives.  

Meta-gaming: Using information you would never have gotten as
your character. For instance, you live as a character that has never seen a map
in his life, yet you act as if you know the whole map of by heart.

Power-emoting: Overusing emoting. It is like saying ‘Ventios tried
to eat the apple’ and ‘Ventios ate the apple with ease’  

 

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Fendor The Swift

Current Age: 27

Sub-race (if any):Halfling

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+
paragraphs long): I am a middle aged, noble Halfling. I am currently living with
my brother Grondil in a settlement called Dunwood. We have been through a lot
together and here is the tale of our life so far.

I and Grondil were very different until a later date, he preferred
soldiers and wars. Whereas I was more than happy to look through my brewing
books and even try some out. At the age of 4 my mother died and left my family
next to nothing gold. After that my father went into a deep depression and went
almost mad. He worked as a fisherman but received half as much money as mother
did. So we had to take action. I and my brother thought about it for days on
end then came to the conclusion that we had to start stealing. At first it
started by us merely taking chickens for food but we didn’t like it. Despite
our efforts to keep the family afloat, father was getting worse and drank 10
bottles of human mead a day and that is the really strong stuff. Then one day
out on a human farm we were caught out, it was a large human man that caught
us. He dragged us by our ears back to the burrow. When the neighbourhood found
out they banished us out of the village for 5 years. I was 15 at this time and
Grondil was 13. We were forced to go to the wilderness and fend for ourselves. Left
all alone I have not heard from father since. We stayed in the wilderness for
our 5 years but have not returned until now. We will buy a burrow in Dunwood
and hope to start our other careers instead of thieving; I shall go into the
brewing industry and Grondil into the farming one. We used to stray far from
Dunwood and now are not afraid to do so. We have now earned our titles by thieving
and mine is Fendor the Swift and Grondil earned Grondil the Steadyfoot. We have
hatred for any pureblood creatures like humans and elves as they intimidate me
because of my height; I get on with dwarfs and like their history. Orcs are too
scary to hate.  

Personality:
Cunning, wise, optimistic and very modest. I use my knowledge to get out of
sticky situations and can think very quickly for and excuse.  

Skills: Very talented brewer, very intelligent although not
much common sense.  Also light footed and
very fast at pick pocketing.

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your
skin): I am medium height for a Halfling and have light brown hair. Attached is
the skin file and a screenshot.

Any other details you wish to share about your character: He
has a passion for reading and likes the many tales of the dwarfs. While he was
on adventure he was accompanied by his brother and a pretty dwarven girl.
Grondil and Fendor both fell deeply in love with her but only Fendor got the
girl. Grondil has always had a problem with love and has never settled into a
proper relationship.

 

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum
of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as
descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.

____

 

1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a
dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he
is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do
you do?

 

Answer: Following him I pursue his trail. Me being light footed
it was almost impossible for him to detect me. He was now entering what looked
liked the Emperors chamber and drew his blade I knew now it was time to act. He
blasted open the doors, ‘What the devil is this?’ said the emperor. The emperor
saw his blade and fell instantly silent. Running as fast as I could I tackled
the human scum into the bedside cabinet. I looked down to see crimson blood
searing down his chest. He had stabbed himself. Before we could say a word he
was dead. The emperor thanked me with his dearest gratitude and left me on my
way.    

 

 

2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a
large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an
unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed
bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armour
and an iron longsword, how do you react?

 

Answer: I cause a distraction and tell the man to run but he
is told old and trips on a branch. The bandits catch up with him, take his gold
and beat him up. I try to walk away but then they come for me. I draw my sword
and say ‘I want no violence just give this man his coin and let us be on our
way’ Then the bandits let out a howl of laughter and shout ‘well, we do midget!’
they run to attack. I try to resist attacking but it’s no good I swipe my sword
and slice one of the bandit’s arms clean open. I drop my sword horrified of
what I’ve done. Then the unhurt bandit picks the wounded one up and runs away
with the coin. I leave without helping the human man (looting his corpse for
coin) and leave for Dunwood.

 

 

3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you
notice a small man standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall
and notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that he
is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to
allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling,
items of choice and the discussion that happens).

 

Answer: I walk up to the man and start haggling over a large
dwarven book. I do this to distract him while Grondil can go behind the stool
and pick pocket the man. We finish haggling and I win the book, Grondil and I
walk away to the food stool to do the same again. 

 

 couldnt find the place to put the application on the minecraft forums so please dont deny it because of that.

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

 

Denied.

 

Need to post on the Minecraft Forums before you can be accepted.

 

Incorrect Power-emoting definition. You can find more information on the forums and wiki.

 

Cannot apply as a thief, as this requires a Villain Application. It's extremely unlikely that two Halfling children could survive alone in the wilds for five years. Dunwood was the Halfling settlement of Aegis, which fell over seventy years ago. Your character cannot have come from there. Branborough was the Halfling settlement in Asulon. The server is currently set in the worlds of Kalos and Elysium.

 

Needs a skin screenshot.

 

Expand on the last Open Response Question.

 

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. Send me a PM if you have any questions.

[everblue2er101 906]

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