[Denied]My Application

[Phineas Maximus 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: PhineasMaximus

How old are you?:13

Time-Zone:eastern standard time

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: Roblox and a few Minecraft servers

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: A couple of friends

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/79737-my-application/#entry678400

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): Will do!

Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!: Role-playing: To act as another character but you are not him

Meta-gaming: knowing something that your character shouldnt know in a roleplay situation. Power-emoting powergaming is making your character all powerful in a given roleplaying situation.

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name:Phineas Maximus

Current Age: 256

Sub-race (if any):Dark

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

My first memory was of me on the doorstep of a small dark elf orphange. I spent the first two years of my life in that place. From stories I would later hear were about five or six other children, unfortunately I would be the only surviver. The town in which I had been in at the time was in the middle of a territorial dispute between the Oren Empire and the Dwarven Empire. One day it escalated and the two armies marched into the town and razed it beyond recolection. My orphan mother held a dagger in one hand and me in the other. She would rather die than be a slave and she killed herself. I was crying and crying when a human kicked down the door. He saw me sitting in orphan mother's arms.

Even though I was a dark elf people knew I was raised in Oren. They didn't discriminate me. I realize that I am the only dark elf that the humans like. When I see other Dark Elves they are usually being yelled or being abused by Humans. I wish to find out of my Dark Elf brother. I wanted to find the capitol of the Elven empire and when I was old enough I did. Soonly after finally finding a spot in the community some chaos broke out. I ran into the Cloud Temple and people were yelling and screaming. I just arrived when the Head Monk said" Everyone to the boats!" I ran to the boats trying to find out what is going on. When I rush onto the Elven ship people are talking about a beacon breaking. I am afraid about the new land we are coming to. They call it Elysium and I am now in Malinor trying to fit in. I seem to find a few friends but I still like being by myself more.

Ambitions for the Future: To be a well respected hunter

Personality: Xenophobic

Skills: Archery Cooking Stealth

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/831/20130205162648.png/

Height-6,3 Weight-145

Any other details you wish to share about your character:I can get really attached to people.I like isolation to a certain extent.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point. ____

1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Upon inspection you realize that a group of High Elves are mocking a small Wood Elf child. How do you react?

Answer: I ask them why they are mocking him to which they reply "Cause he is small and we are big and we can control him"Then I said, "Well when you are old he will be older, but still young and if he if he is a troubled elf he could hold a grudge. He may come for you and you could die so think twice about mocking the wood elf child again. You never know what he might end up like" I purposely nudge him as I walk by and I kept walking by my lonesome. When I looked back I saw the men stopped harassing the kid.

2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. He collapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do?

Answer: I help the man up and ask if he is ok. He replies, "Yes thank you can you help me collect the rest of my coins". As I bend over to pick up the coins I hear yet another thud. I look behind me to see three men walk from the underbrush. " Hail my good man" said the formost of the three men "That man was a father of a bandit wanted by us, the Rangers of the Forest. We are hoping to see if he knows where they are." Though not reheared in their history I had heard of them to an extent. One of the men hands me a few coins and wishes me a good day. I decided to keep the Mina, putting them in my pocket and I walked away.

3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved).

Answer: I go to the trader and ask, "Do you have any nice bows for sale?"He says," Yes I have a fine hew bow for sale and I could give it up for the right price." I say "How about 13 minas for it."He then replied angry at the such low price "Hmm.. How about 18 minas" I then quickly say back "How about 15 minas."He scowls and says "Fine! 15 minas!Then he gives me the bow and I walk on my way .As im walking away I pull the string back to try it out and it snaps in my hands.He watches it breaks on me and he trys to run away. I then run after him and tackle him to the ground and demand a refund.He replies in fear "Ill give it back if you let me up!"I let him up and he gives me the money. I take the bow home anyway because I may be able to repair it.

[Peter Chivay 2494]

 

 

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Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

 

1. Be sure to create some form of diversity in your biography, make it less listy and more flowy. Other than that, I would ask you to include a slight bit more lore. Such as famous places.

 

2. Your powergaming definition is a little vauge, please expand on it.

 

3. Lastly, expand on your ORQs. Don't be afraid to showcase your RPing ability!

[Peter Chivay 2494]

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