[Denied]Sly_F0X's ( Mali'hiy) Elven Application.

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

 

Minecraft Account Name: sly_f0x

How old are you?:14, 15 in march.

Time-Zone: GMT

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes, I swear to uphold all rules.

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: Not very many but I have an "rpish" side to me!

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: I have known about this server for a long time.... and I've decided now that I have my new computer, that I would give this server a try.

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: None.

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): 

Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes!. I will try my best to make a totaly unique and distinct character.

 

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

 

Role-playing: Role-playing, to me, is when you create a character with it's own set of unique abilities and personality traits! which differs from everyone else.

Meta-gaming: Meta-gaming is when you take OOC information and use it IC.

Power-emoting: Power-emoting for example is when you make a "GOD" character. e.g (Player 1 instantly kills player 2 and steals all of his money).

 

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

 

Full Name: Mali'Hiy

Current Age: 444

Sub-race (if any): High Elf.

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

 

When I was a young Elf, the past, not long ago, The world seemed so vast, beautiful and vivid. I would play with others like they were family. More than family. I treated everyone as best as I could except for this dark elf whoose name I can not recall. Me and him were like Fire & Ice. We did not see eye to eye at all. Troubles started when I was around 102. Ohh how I can remember those days *smiles* When the air was fresh, the fruit ripe on the trees and the sun splitting the stones. Those were the days the earth will remember along with everyone else who has lived to see them happen. I grew up in a fairly large home in Malin, my father a skilled craftsman and my mother.. Oh how her eyes shone as morning broke. She was a scientist. She believed in the betterment of our peoples combined. All races under one. My father on the other hand, was extremely patriotic towards High elves and he cursed Dark elves claiming that they are the reason for Malin's defeat. 

 

As I became a teen I realised that the world changes. People change. At first, this greatly upset me as no longer was my "so-real" world a reality. It became very dark and cold for a while. My father was to nieve to notice, but my dear mother on the other hand, loved me. She kne my world had grown cold and she tried to help, to no avail. My mother died not long after this. I grieved and mourned for weeks praying and praying that she would come back, however she didn't.

 

I had to get on with my life and see the world. I was young, I had no idea as to how my life would turn out, I just simply didn't care. I was an average teen who enjoyed running around the city, singing, hanging out with my friends and listening to my fathers stories of old. One day he took me fishing in a small secluded forest outside Malinor. This was a rare occasion. Me and my father did not get along very well but I saw this as an attempt to build a solid bond. However, this was not his intentions. After a good several hours of fishing, we set up camp. We had caught nothing and I felt a great downfall upon my heart but it was only fish, not a big deal, My father told me that he had killed my mother and that I was not safe. At first I didn't believe him, I couldn't. He told me to run. Again, I couldn't. He was begining to change. His skin starting to turn black. I then ran

 

Here is where my story will start.

 

Ambitions for the Future: I want to become apart of the Royal guard.

Personality: I am a strong willed/minded elf who admires magic and would one day love to become a mage. My litteracy is above average however sometimes I may be a little too overconfident.

Skills: I love bow's. I am a proficient Archer. I can lead. Just like my mother, I am a strong, Independant Elf who relys only on ones self to fullfill all of thy needs.

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/908338/elf-archer/

Any other details you wish to share about your character:

 

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.

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1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Upon inspection you realize that a group of High Elves are mocking a small Wood Elf child. How do you react?

 

Answer: Usually, Us High elves would not be in this situation, But However so, I feel as if I must act. I walk over to the group and try to seek reasoning. The group appear to be intoxicated so I distract a handful of them and usher the wood elf child to report this to his parents and go home. I then quickly leave the area before suspicions arouse.

 

2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. He collapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do?

 

Answer: I gather the coins up and give him a small pouch that I have around my waste. I then hurry over to him to make sure he is ok and out of harms reach.

 

3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved).

 

Answer: "Sorry sir but I am afraid I have no time to haggle with traders at this moment in time. Please do accept my most humble apologies and have a great day!"

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Please wait 24 hours before re-applying or face instant Denial

Also please add examples to each of your definitions so we can make sure your understand completely what each definition means.

Your Biography was good however try to make sure you are using server lore, this will make your application a lot better and will also give you a quick learning adventure about Lord Of The Craft. Also go into detail about your character and maybe talk about a key event in his life or talk about his strengths and weaknesses  The more detail about your characters life the better as it will tell us, The Application Team that you understand your characters role on Lord Of The Craft. Server Lore can be: Language, Place names, Characters, events, etc..

 

You can find a lot of server lore and interesting facts on the Lord of the Craft Wiki and many threads on the Elven Role-Play Forums. Here are the links to each.
http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/wikka.php?wakka=Elves"
http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/forum/17-elven-roleplay/

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19254-recovering-the-ancient-tongue-of-the-elves/page-1

 

If you need any more help on Lore or have any questions feel free to ask a lore master or member of the Application Team. I am sure they will be happy to help.

 

Your Character Questions are too short, please answer these with a paragraph long answer. This will re-assure us that you understand your character well enough to role play with it.

 

Your Open Response Question need to display the role play method in them to achieve an accepted application. You need to set it out like this:

Edward looks around the Inn and notices a man tucked away in the corner -wearing black robes. He walks across the room towards the man before calling over "Oi You! Come over here!" The man looks up towards Edward and gasps before attempting to get up and flee.

You should set out your role play that and then we will know that you can control role play with your character and also know if you have the role-playing skills to obtain a place on our server. If you can do this method with every single Open Response Questions they will be at a closer to acceptable applications standard. However do not forget to include details about your character and too make sure you stay as your character throughout the role play. Include his/her(s) strengths or weaknesses to make your role playing effective.

Good Luck with next Application.

 

Ben~
 

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