[Denied][Human] Daeruim Doran

[yopplwasupxxx 5946]

[b]Out-Of-Character Information[/b]
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: Yopplwasupxxx
How old are you?: 16
Time-Zone: EST
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: My main Roleplaying knowledge comes from table-top DND, however, I have played on other minecraft Roleplaying servers, such as Gildorym, Uthrandir, and the Bashcraft Server
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: From a group of friends
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/page__st__2220__gopid__20946913#entry20946913
Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: The art of acting as a non-fictional/fictional character who is not you
Meta-gaming: Using powers and hacking abilities to use powers that your character does not have and creates havic in the Roleplaying
Power-emoting: Doing a emotion/action that you determine the outcome of before the other reactant can react.

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Daeruim Doran
Current Age: 20
Sub-race (if any): None
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): Born to a middle-class family in Arethor, Daeruim lived a normal life. Father was a merchant, and would constatly leave the city, leaving Daeruim's mother to be his main influence in life. Daeruim has three siblings, two older brothers and one younger. His brothers were loud, and constantly talked of knights and would sword-fight in the house or plaza, but Daeruim was quite different. He subjected himself to his room most of his childhood, keeping himself in books and stories. Daeruim grew quite intelligent, however, traded for his social abilities. He grew shy around other people, and would stutter infront of others.

 

However, one day his father's trading caravan was hit by bandits, killing Daerium's father in the process. His mother, now a widow, was crushed by the loss, and they left the city for a small village. This made Daeruim quite depressed, part of his father's death, but mainly the now lack of knowledge from the books of the city, replaced by the three books he could take before leaving. He was forced into outdoor work, and became quite found of gardening. He grew older, and more restless, wanting to return to the main city and quench his knowledge. He left the village at age 20, and ventures out into the world.
Ambitions for the Future:[/b] Wants to become a scholar of a kind, and mayhaps a scribe.
Personality:[/b] Very shy. However, is very nice to those he trusts, and is very intelligent in many knowledge areas.
Skills:[/b] Smart, Factual, Farmer
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):[/b] Hair is brown, with a beard growing from the lack of shaving. Has green eyes, and is middle height. Wears commoner clothes. Link
Any other details you wish to share about your character:[/b]

[b]Open-Response-Questions[/b]
[i]Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.[/i]
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[b]1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do?[/b]

Answer: I would become frightened, and yell for the guards frantically. I would explain of the man sneaking into the building, but in a scarred tone. However, if the guards would not believe me, I would think they had something apart of it, and leave the city as quickly as I could.


[b]2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armor and an iron longsword, how do you react?[/b]

Answer: I would gulp, and try to walk away from the fight. However, as I started to walk away, I would feel guilt, and walk towards the armed bandits. I then would freeze up as I got too close to them, scared from the chance of dying, but scared of knowing if I did not help, he would die. Keeping my best not to stutter, I would ask them to stop.


[b]3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a colorful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens).[/b]

Answer: I would ask for any books they might have, and see if they had anything I did not. I would cross my fingers, hoping to find something interesting. If I found a rare book from times long gone, I would give a generous price, as my knowledge of haggling is limited, thanks to my shyness. He asks if I collect these types of books, and I would say yes.

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Incorrect Meta-gaming definition. You can find more information on the forums and wiki.

 

Skin screenshot appears to be missing a face.

 

Expand on all Open Response Questions and add dialogue to all.

 

 

A good first attempt.

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