[Denied][Orc] Studmuffin_Iggyi

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Out-Of-Character
Information

 

Please
fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and

 

ensure the
essential details are accurate.

 

Minecraft
Account Name:  Studmuffin_Iggyi.

 

How old are
you?:  18.

Time-Zone:  USA, Eastern Standard Time.

 

Have you
read, understood and agreed to the rules?: 
Yes.

What previous
experience have you had in role-playing?: 
I have played the

Mass-Effect
trilogy.

How did you
hear about the the Lord of the Craft?:  I
was looking for good

servers to
play on Minecraft, and I found this one on Youtube.

Link any
applications that you have previously made for the server:

Have you
posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do

so (link above):  Yes

Have you read
the Orcish lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and

follow it in
your biography?:  Yes I have and yes I
will.

 

 

 

Definitions

In your
own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions

from
elsewhere!:

Role-playing:  Role-playing is when you take the actions and
personality

of another
character in a fictional situation.

 

Meta-gaming:  Meta-gaming is when you take knowledge from
outside the game

and apply it
into the game or if you have knowledge you as a player have, but

your
character isn't supposed to.  For example
if you go up to someone and

know their
name without you asking them and call them by their real name then

that would be
meta-gaming.  Or if you come out of
character and know that

they are an
Orc, but you are supposed to think they are a large human or and

just go up to
them and say: "Hey Orc!"  That
would be

meta-gaming .

Power-emoting:  Power emoting is when you make your character
overpowered

or if give
them advantages that no one else has access to. 
An example

would be if
you come up to someone and say to them: "I shall kill you with

my sword
faster than you can react!

 

In-Character
Information:

Complete
the following biography on your character:

 Full Name:  Kraagar Kel'org Ugark

 

Current Age: 74
 

 

 

 

 

Past /
History (include

childhood,
major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

 I was born into an Ocish village that was part
of the Ugluk clan during

the war
between the Azogs and Ugluks.  My mother
was alone the night I was

born since my
father was off with 80 other Orcish warriors doing a night raid

on a large
Azog village.  My father's name was
Korgan Kel'org Ugark.

 He died when the Orcish warriors realized that
the Azogs were prepared

for the attack.  Him and all the other Orcish warriors were
wiped out and

about an hour
later the Azogs were burning down the village, and the only Orcs

there were my
mother and a few of the warriors' wives'. 
The Azogs found

my tent, but
my mother was already running by the time they found it.  She

found an
Ugark village about an hour and a half from my previous one.  I

was raised
there and I didn't have to worry about any Azogs raiding my village

since the
battle my father was in was the battle that had lost and ended the

the war.

 While I

was raised in
that village my mother had the help of another Orc named

Shaarnorn
Kar'baan Anguzg.  He had taught me to
farm, build, fight, and

mine.  I was very skilled at wielding a sword and
battle-hammer by the age

of 18.  I managed to provide enough food to feed the
entire village,

 which is a LOT OF FOOD by age 35.  When I would go mining I could as

come back
with things like diamond, gold, and iron by age 43.  At 38 years old I

had lead many
raids on Dwarven villages, all of which had had been successful.

 The people of my village had respected me and
was considered by most the

best warrior
the village had ever seen.

 When I

was 53 years
old, I left my village to establish a large city.  I had 13

other Orcs
help me build the city.  At first it was
more of a village than

a city, but
it was a large village.  A year and a
half later we had built

a large
village with shops and farms that had a population 138.  Today,

the village
has a population of 243 With a military of 140 Orcs.

 

Ambitions for
the Future:  Expand the village into a

large

city and
create the largest military in all of Asulon.

Personality:  Very respectful and helpful to others.  Not safe to be around when angry

Skills:  I'm an experienced miner, and know how to
farm.  I am

experienced
at building things like houses and fortresses. 
I am a master

at wielding a
sword and battle-hammer.

Appearance
(this must include an in-game screenshot of your

skin):  I am 7"5 and very muscular.  I weigh about 310 pounds.

 I have this attached to the post.

 

Any other
details you wish to share about your character:

 

Open-Response-Questions

Each question
in this section must be

answered with
a minimum of one paragraph which must describe

the event in
full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore

at any
point.

 

____

 

 

 

1. You are
roaming the mighty capital of

the War
Nation Of Uruks, as you near

the Arena you
spot an Orc, wearing what seems to be human

garbs as he
looks at you he smiles and say out loud in common not in blah “Come friend let

me teach you
of civilization and break your

mind from
this orcish savagery!”, how do you

react?

 

 

Answer:  "Savagery?!?!  How dare you say such a thing about

Orcish
culture!?!?  What is civilization to us
may be savagery to you!"

 I was in shock that he would say such a thing
about Orcish culture.

 "Well you may think it is civilized to
not bathe, but if that is

what you
think then all you are is a mere blood-loving mad-man." The Orc

responded.
"If that is what you think then why don't you challenge me to a fight and
see how civilized you REALLY are." 
I retorted.  "Why if you are
really that ignorant to not even try to agree 
to what I say, maybe a knock on that empty skull is what you need.  Give me a good reason not to knock you on the
head."  I was appalled at what he
said.  "Well if you do, then a skull
is something you will be missing." "Why you must be weak if you are
only go to say that rather than do it." 
At this point I decided to teach him a lesson and take away an honor he
had from Orcs who he knew and went up to him and ripped away his tusks from his
jaw.

 

 

 

2. As you
are watching an Arena fight between

two Orcs, the
Goj of Krug walks towards

the Arena,
and shouts “Mi brudderz

da Feztivel
ob Krug iz coummeh! We needz

zacrifizez tu
zummun da Zpirit ob Krug un diz uzg, go

gadder da
Warbandz nd raid da landz nd bring mi buck

zacrifizez,
twiggy nd pinky dat we kan zlauhater upun da alter

ob Krug nuw
go mi Brudderz!” How do you react

to this?

 

Answer:  "Raid the lands and bring back
sacrifice?  Well I think you might need
someone to lead raids if you all expect to come back with anything."  I shouted around the large crowd of
orcs.  Being the leader of a raid is
always honorable and Orcs will always try to compete to see who becomes the
leader of any sort of attack or raid.  An
Orc came up to me and said, "Who do you think you are to just come up to a
large crowd of orcs and declare yourself leader of a raid to bring back
sacrifice to summon the spirit of the Krug?"  I didn't really see a need to get angry being
that the Orcs just wanted to start raiding villages right now.  "Well I am a person who has lead over
one-hundred-twenty raids on dwarven, elvish, and human villages."  I responded. 
"Then prove it."  I decided that since male orcs usually greet each other by punching each other, I think it would be fair if I challenged him to a punching contest.  "Ok then, lets have a punching contest and see who wins."  "Okay then, you go first."  I went first and went as hard I could and punched him as hard as I possibly could, and a second later I heard an extremely loud, "OWWWWWWW!!!"  The orc fell to the ground and lay there in pain, I noticed that he had 3 broken ribs on the left side of his body, and 5 on the right.  Once the other orcs saw that, they decided that they wanted me to be the one who led the raids.  The next day we came back with so much sacrifice that we had to make large wagons to carry some of it.

 

 

 

3. As you
are travelling in the

barren Orcish
deserts you come across a quiet

oasis. Beside
it sits a small tent where a young

orc is
preparing a meal of roasted halfling. He calls you

over,
offering you to join in with his meal.

meal.What
does your character do?

 

 

Answer:  "It seems you happen to be preparing one of my favorite meals."  "It is fresh and he is big enough for both of us to have.  You may join in if you would like."  I accepted the the offer without even thinking.  "Thank you very much for the invitation."  I sat down beside him in the tent.  "How did you get this halfling?"  "I was hungry, so I went to look for a village. I walked for miles and found a halfling village.  I managed to sneak in at night and captured a halfing without the others noticing.  I fell asleep when I got back to my tent.  I have been cooking him for about an hour.  He should be ready in about 5 minutes.  "You seem to be very young, how old are you?"  "I am 25."  "What happened to your village since you appear to be the only one here?"  "My village was overrun by dwarves."  "Ah,  I am sorry about what may have happened to your family."  "The halfling is done.  Now lets eat."  I dug in and it tasted so good.  He even let me have one of the ribs.

 

[LaCabra (Soda) 1519]

 

Sadly, I'm going to have to deny this application because:

 

- Your character seems to be very prone to powergame. You said that he is a master swordsman, is a master at wielding battle-hammers, and is an experienced builder, along with a farmer, and can mine with experience. Tone this down in your next application.

 

- Your skin is not an Orc. It looks like... Assassin's Creed and is a Caucasian male. You'll have to get an Orc skin to be accepted.

 

You had a lovely amount of server lore, so good job on that! :)

 

Do not re-apply for 24 hours after this denial or you will be auto-denied.

[LaCabra (Soda) 1519]

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