[Denied][Human] Youdude Application

[youdude 104]

[b]Out-Of-Character Information[/b]
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: Youdude
How old are you?: 15
Time-Zone: Gmt+1
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: Few minecraft roleplay servers, and Rpg games.
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: Freinds
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/74285-sengor/?hl=youdude
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): yes
Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: I have.

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: Acting like a character, feeling his pain and emotions. You must view the world trough his point of view.
Meta-gaming: Using information your characted doesn't know or cannot know. This includes things said out of character, and books he never read. Persons he never met, and sights he didn't see.
Power-emoting: Power emoting is doing emotes, your character cannot do. Example: Magic (without prior training from a mage IN RP and not in backstory) or emoting something that the other person cannot respond to. Example: Grab's shoulder and slit's throat.

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Geralt Volk
Current Age: 31
Sub-race (if any):Northerner
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

Geralt Volk was born in a small, nameless town. He had two brothers, and his mother died giving birth to him. He was the youngest of the Three. His father was a drunk, and when he was 8 year old, He left them. Geralt had to take care of his two brothers, as they were allout incompetent.  He grew up worrying about money, Food, Working to take care of three. In the meantime taking care of edjucation.. The townsfolk said he was a old man, in a young boy's body... at the age of 15, someone knocked on his door. He opened it up and a currier handed him a letter... His oldest brother was killed by bandits on the road. Few days later, he received another letter, saying his father died. He fell into depression, and roamed the streets sad.... One night, He was drowning his sorrows in mead, and came across a scarecrow. In anger, and sadness he picked up a stick, and swinged it at the scarecrow. He felt bether, and decided to make a "punching" bag back at home. He trained on that punching bag, with a axe and fists, untill he became a "capable" fighter. 

 

His current job wasn't giving him a lot of money, so he decided to join the milita, using his skills. He also got his brother, ulfgar to join. One night they were patroling, and they came across a madman.. He ranted about wolfchildren killing his wife, and that the lake was out to get him. Ulfgar laughed at him, and the madman took it a bit to persionally. when Geralt and ulfgar turned to continue their patrol, the madman stabbed ulfgar in the back, killing him. Geralt wanting revenge swung his axe at his chest... He cut off the madman's arm then dragged him back to the village where he was executed. his depression only deepened. He quit the army, and retired to his home. hoarding his money, only wandering out to get food and drinks.

He continued that lifestile for a few years, and ran out of money. Broke, and somewhat out of synch with the world outside, he decided to wander out... Most of his skills forgoten, seeking money.

Ambitions for the Future:[/b]

Geralt doesn't have many ambitions... Currently he is lookign for money, and basicaly live his life.. But there may be a bit of revenge in his mind aswell.
Personality:[/b]  Geralt seems always tired. Weary, depressed And loves a drink. 
Skills:[/b]  Woodchopping, brawling, a bit of swordmanship. He is also fairly good with economics.
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):[/b]  Geralt seems a lot older than he is. Dark almost grey hear, a beard on his face, and eyes that seem a bit small for his sockets. He's averagly built, moderatly strong. 

Any other details you wish to share about your character:[/b]

He loves drinks. Also im quite happy with my character for the moment.

[b]Open-Response-Questions[/b]
[i]Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.[/i]
____

 

I wasn't completley sure if i should write in first person or third person in this part, a so i decided To answer in third person.

[b]1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do?[/b]

Answer:
Geralt would probably point the guards in the direction of the Dark figure if they asked him that, But otherwise wouldn't do much. In his words "Common men dont belong in politics and king-affares."

He would walk away, but probably come back later to see what happened. The Emeror would be killed from the assasin (or not... Let's say he was killed in this case) and Geralt would feel Guilty. But he'd go drown the guilt in alchohol and then feel okay.

[b]2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armour and an iron longsword, how do you react?[/b]

Answer:
Geralt, would shout at them, and throw rocks at them. After they would start chasing after geralt, he would try and run away, leading them away from the old man... (let's say he got away and his plan succeeded) He would later come back, and ask the old man what that was about, and try and help him go away. If the old man was rude about it, he'd say "alright, then piss off!" and leave, angry about it.

[b]3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens).[/b]

Answer:

Geralt would probably try and haggle the lowest price possible, accepting the offer. But he's not exactly good with words so he would probably end up buying things at double the normal cost. after buying a good axe, he would go show it to ladies, trying to win their hart... but to no avail, because he looks old, and smells of alchohol.

[o_Ben_o 193]

 

Please wait 24 hours before re-applying or face instant Denial

 

 

Your Biography was good however try to make sure you are using server lore, this will make your application a lot better and will also give you a quick learning adventure about Lord Of The Craft. Also go into detail about your character and maybe talk about a key event in his life or talk about his strengths and weaknesses  The more detail about your characters life the better as it will tell us, The Application Team that you understand your characters role on Lord Of The Craft. Server Lore can be: Language, Place names, Characters, events, etc..

 

You can find a lot of server lore and interesting facts on the Lord of the Craft Wiki and many threads on the Human Role-Play Forums. Here are the links to each.

Human Wiki page

Human Role Play Forum

 

If you need any more help on Lore or have any questions feel free to ask a lore master or member of the Application Team. I am sure they will be happy to help.

 

Your Character Questions are too short, please answer these with a paragraph long answer. This will re-assure us that you understand your character well enough to role play with it.

 

Your Open Response Question need to display the role play method in them to achieve an accepted application. You need to set it out like this: (This is 3rd Person)

 

Edward looks around the Inn and notices a man tucked away in the corner. The man is wearing dark robes with a hood resting over his head. He walks across the room towards the man before calling over "Oi You! Come over here!" The man looks up towards Edward and gasps before attempting to get up and flee.

 

You should set out your role play that and then we will know that you can control role play with your character and also know if you have the role-playing skills to obtain a place on our server. If you can do this method with every single Open Response Questions they will be at a closer to acceptable applications standard. However do not forget to include details about your character and too make sure you stay as your character throughout the role play. Include his/her(s) strengths or weaknesses to make your role playing effective.

 

Hope this helped.

 

Good Luck with your next application to Lord of the Craft,

 

Ben~

 

 

[o_Ben_o 193]

Moved to Denied Forum