[Denied][Human] Lilt286

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: lilt286

How old are you?: 14

Time-Zone: Pacific Standard Time

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I am Currently playing Dungeons & Dragons.

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: My friend Bryanwaffles

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: http://www.minecraft.../page__st__2300

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):

Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: Role-playing is when you play as a character and make decisions for him/her.

Meta-gaming: Meta-gaming is when your character knows something that he shouldn't.

Power-emoting: Power-emoting is when a character forces another character to do something.

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Jack Yoully

Current Age: 37

Sub-race (if any): Notherner

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): Jack was a strong young

child however not always the brightest. He had a small job as a miner with his

father. After his dad was killed by a cave-in he gave up on mining and started

to spend his time learning to read common. His mother was a house wife but

after his father died she had to get a job, so she became a maid for a couple

of lumber-yards in the area. Whenever Jack finished a book his mother would

reward him with a small piece of cheese that she stole from some of the lumberjacks’

forestry huts. When Jack was six-teen years old his mother was banished from

their community because she got caught stealing cheese so Jack had to get a job

at the lumber-yard.

After Jack was fired he left the village with

his hatchet, a backpack full of water and some food. A couple months later Jack

found an abandoned hut near the lake and setup his home in the hut. He started

a carrot farm near the hut and learned to farm. A couple months later when he

was cleaning the hut and found a small hatch beneath a broken bed frame. He

opened the hatch and went down the ladder when he looked around he saw a small

room full of books. Jack was so exited he didn't know what to do so he ran around

looking at all the books and reading the first page of some of them

He spent 8 years in the hut, however one night when he was sleeping he

smelled smoke and woke up to see his hut on fire. He ran outside and kept on

running until his legs got tired. When he finally stopped he had wondered what

had happened, he found a small village and asked if they had seen anyone going

in the general direction towards his house. One person saw a goblin walking

that direction. Now Jack spends all his time finding out who burned down his

house.

Ambitions for the Future: Jack wants to find who burned hi hut and kill them.

Personality: Jack is a strong guy and isn't very smart however he always tries to seem or act smart. He also gets very emotional because he always tries to supress his emotions but sometimes he cannot hold it.

Skills: Jack knows how to use an ax and can read common. Jack is also a skilled lumberjack and can farm.

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): Jack is very muscular and has long arms. he has amber eyes and brown hair. He always wears his hat wherever he goes. I am unable to post my picture so I attached the file.

Any other details you wish to share about your character: No.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.

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1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do?

Answer: I yell "Guards!" and start running towards the man. I see the guards start walking towards me and try to tackle the human but miss and hit the ground hard. The man sees me miss and starts to run away. He makes the mistake of not running straight away from the guards and sprinting towards the left. The guards and the human run around the corner and then I remember the extreme pain in my arm.

2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armour and an iron longsword, how do you react?

Answer: "Hey! What are you up to thugs!" I yell. The biggest bandit looks at me and I see that he is an orc, he yells "Go away before we decide to mug you as well!". I draw my sword and start running toward them. The second bandit that looked like either a hobbit or a goblin continued to threaten the old man. The man sees me running and tries to hit the small bandit but misses and hits the ground with a clang. The orc hears the clang and turns around. While he is turned around i run up behind him and hit him in the back near his left most disc. He falls to the ground and over his back I see the old man almost get hacked by an ax. The old man blocks it and while he is trying to recover I get even closer towards the small bandit and see that he is a goblin. The goblin turns around and swings at me, I block it and while the goblins attention is towards me the old man stabs him in the head. After both of us catch our breathe the man says "Thanks for saving me there," he throws me a bag of mina "I owe you.". I say "Thanks but you did half the work.". He walks away while I check the bandits for any notes about a hideout or a boss.

3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens).

Answer: The man says "would you like to buy a trinket?" while I walk toward him. I say "I am looking for a lucky necklace.". He says "Lucky? Ok well lets see we have a necklace of a sheep. No, um, well maybe you'd like a necklace with a statuette of an elf?". "Can I see that one?" Pointing at the necklace with the statuette on it. The shopkeeper says "Sure." while handing me the necklace. "What's the starting price?" I say. He says "Five mina.". I say "That's a bit much how about we do two mina.". The man counteroffers saying "I'll go down by one mina.". I say "Can you go down to 3 mina?". He says "I guess." while throwing me the necklace. I throw him the two mina and walk away.

[Lita 677]

• Improve definitions of roleplay, powergaming, and metagaming.
• Add server lore into the biography. 
• Link to previous application is broken, and there seems to be no previous app associated with your account.
• Color codes are broken. [Not a reason for denial, just aesthetically annoying.]

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