[Denied]Captai_Awesome Submission Form

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[b]Out-Of-Character Information[/b]
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: Captai_awesome
How old are you?: 15
Time-Zone: Eastern
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I used to play club penguin and post on forums of a book series.
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: On a forum post.
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: None
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): I think so.
Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes.

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: A place where people can choose a character and storyline to become in which they associate with other characters (players) on a forum, game, or in real life
Meta-gaming: Using a game in influence your character or setting in which you play.
Power-emoting: Putting ones actions on another

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Ysmay Glorwick
 

Current Age: 19
 

Sub-race (if any): Northerner
 

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

  Ysmay was born on her family's farm near Aegis. During birth, her mother died due to the immense amound of blood loss, resulting in leaving just Ysmay, her father, and their small farm. Throughout her childhood, she and her father struggled to get by on petty wheat, cow's milk, and pig's meat. She learned to read and write as her mother was a scholar and left behind many of her old books and notebooks. Her father cherished her education in order for her to maintain a better life for herself. She scrapped these items though at the age of ten wanting instead to help her father and take adventures throughout the land. Even with her help, Ysmay's father worked hard, ending with him becoming very, very sick and weak. At the age of 17, Ysmay lost her father.

   She now stands alone on her farm, contemplating of whether to burn it down to start a new life, or to continue what she has known her whole life; farming and trade. She is waiting for a sign though. Life is ready to throw a curveball at Ysmay, for her old childhood adventures will become elongated and more dangerous than she could have ever imagined.
Ambitions for the Future:[/b]

  Ysmay wishes to travel the world she has barely knows of.
 

Personality:[/b]

   Ysmay is a quiet, kind girl who only wishes to see the best in people. She is an adventurer at heart wanting to break free from her sad, quiet past.
 

Skills:[/b]

   Ysmay can farm, somewhat trade, swordfight, and do what you would call modernly, parkour.

  

   Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):[/b]

   Ysmay is blonde with pink eyes (I could not find a skin with blue eyes. I tried to change the color but failed, so please make this small exaption. Who knows, maybe she has a some weird ancerstoral past?) She is your typical Northerner, except she is lithe. (I tried to take a screenshot but failed, like usual. I could go on the server and show you the skin though if that helps. Here's the link where I got it from http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/1090082/blue-dress/  )
Any other details you wish to share about your character:[/b]

No.

[b]Open-Response-Questions[/b]
[i]Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.[/i]
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[b]1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do?[/b]

Answer: I begin to follow the figure, curious as to what he's up to. I stay within the shadows though to avoid any encounters or dangers.


[b]2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armour and an iron longsword, how do you react?[/b]

Answer: I tell them to stop, for he is an old man with little to live for anymore. By threatening him, they are not making themselves bigger and better, but instead defiling themselves in attempting to steal from a man they clearly know cannot defend himself. If they wish to prove themselves strong and capable they should take on someone who is more capable of taking them. If they ignore me, I will attempt to defend this old man from these bandits.


[b]3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens).[/b]

Answer: I will most likely be carrying a feeble stone sword, some leather armor, and some bread. I will offer all my bread and my leather cap for the iron sword he is carrying. If he disagrees, I will throw in the rest of my armor, but only if he gives me some wheat seeds. The logic behind this is that you can easily remake leather armor, and build a small shelter to grow some wheat if need be. I'm basically ripping him off you could say.

[Mystery 118]

Denied,

 

You have the right idea for your application, but you need to just expand on everything.

 

Making at least a paragraph for each questions, except for the definitions.

 

The definitions are still very unclear so I can't tell if you really understand them.

 

Please wait 24 hours to re-appy, as I wish to see more players like you on the server.

[Mystery 118]

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