[Denied][Mountain Dwarf] Tripstor's Application To Be A Mountain Dwarf #3

[Axros 4]

Attention: I know the coloring format was bad, I copied and pasted the application format.

 

[b]Out-Of-Character Information[/b]
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: Skylord_Garrett

Alternate Account Name: Tripstor
 

How old are you?: 13
 

Time-Zone: Eastern Time zone
 

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes I have
 

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I played on

another Lord of the Rings server but left when the staff became abusive. I once
played on this roleplay server dedicated to Percy Jackson and the same deal
happened there.

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: I heard about it from planetminecraft and used to love watching candle's videos from this server.

 

Link any applications that you have previously made for the

server:
#1: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/84279-deniedtripstorskylord-garretts-application-to-be-a-cave-dwarf/

#2: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/84329-deniedmountain-dwarf-tripstors-application-to-be-a-mountain-dwarf-2/

 

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): I will post this application  on there directly after this.
 

Have you read the Dwarven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes I will

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: This is when you jump into a made-up

role and make choices the character
would make, in other words you pretend to be this character. (E.g. Phil's elf is called Marv and is a fictional character.)

Meta-gaming: This
is when you use information about a character you obtained OOC to your personal
advantage. (E.g. Phil found Mark's home on the forums and raided it without his character finding out in-game)

Power-emoting: When you god-mod yourself in a roleplay and force an action upon another player (E.G.
Phil slices Dominic’s throat and takes his loot).

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Kilin Falkreath
Current Age: 18
Sub-race (if any): Human
Clan (if any): No clan yet
Past: Well, my mum and dad worked as blacksmiths. We lived on a farm by ourselves just outside of Kal'Dwain. As a boy I loved to play with the swords and hammers they crafted. One day while I was swinging a small dagger a man

approached my pa, I didn’t know what to do. The man pulled out a knife and
stabbed my father. My mother runs out screaming but the man grabs her and drags
her into my house, locking the door behind him. I bash on the door hearing her
screams carry on for roughly 30 minutes.

    I hide in a barrel outside of my house waiting for the man to walk out. I heard the door creak open and the hooded man stepped out, his dagger covered in blood. I clutch the dagger I was playing
with and leap out of the barrel and stab the man in the chest. He pulls the knife out of his chest, grabs me, and throws me into a wall. He unsheathes a sword from his belt and starts strutting towards me with a maniacal look in his eye. I reach for a hammer my pa used for crafting armor and swing upwards at the man's head, hitting the man in the skull. He falls backwards his head hitting the ground with a thud. My heart was racing faster than a elven horse running from a orc, things started going blurry and then everything went black.

          I wake up in a dark room with moss-covered walls. I glance around at my surroundings and

spot a iron bars. I huddle in a corner and cry to myself until a man comes to take
me out of the cell. He starts asking questions about my parents and who the man
dead man was on my doorstep. I answered the questions as best I could. Then the
man asked why he was at my house and I told him I had no clue. I couldn’t hold
back the tears as they streamed down my face, filled with lost memories of my
mother tucking me in and my father lifting me into the air smiling at me. The
man lets me go and I started hunting criminals for a living. 

Ambitions for the Future: Kilin hopes to one day discover why his parents were murdered and who the man was.
Personality: Kilin stays to himself most of the

time, working alone as a young bounty hunter can prove difficult because of being called a villain which you are not. He is pretty selfish and confident he can do anything on his own.

Skills: He is very skilled with a blade and decent with a bow. However he has emotional issues from seeing his parents murdered at such a young age, and murdering a man himself.
 

Appearance
 

Any other details you wish to share about your character: He does suffer from fainting spells on rare occasions.

[b]Open-Response-Questions[/b]
[i]Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.[/i]
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[b]1. Whilst mining deep in the undergrounds of Kalos you see a large deposit of diamond ore at the other side of the ravine you are on. There is a very thin rock bridge that looks precariously unstable, but it is the only way to access the deposit. What do you do?[/b]

Answer:

 I question the odds of me crossing the bridge

safely and decide otherwise. I try and cross the bridge myself thinking I could do it on my own.

[b]2. You are sitting in the local tavern with a large pint of ale in your hand - sitting nearby you is a rather young dwarf whom is clearly going through a bad time. He is crying to himself, and clutching a small wooden hammer toy. In the other corner of the room two shady dwarves are sitting whispering to each other and pointing occasionally at the dwarf. They stand up, one with a small dagger in his hand and begin to approach the young dwarf. What do you do?[/b]

Answer:

         I would tell the boy to come with me right away and explain a man was walking towards

him with a dagger. I would then take the boy outside, waiting for the men to
walk out, and if they did I would run away and take the boy to safety, but ask they orphanage owners for some profit in return.

[b]3. Whilst wandering through the Dwarven Caverns you hear a voice call out to you; “Oi, ye’! C’mere n’ get ye’rself an ale!”. You spin on your heel and see a heavily bearded bar-owner looking at you - a huge grin on his face, and a mug of ale in his hand. How do you react?[/b]

Answer: I glance at the man with some suspicion. As he

offers me a mug of ale I carefully accept it. From my experience as a Dwarven
Bounty Hunter people will take extreme measures to get rid of you. I shakily
take a sip and wait to see what happens to me.

 

[LaCabra (Soda) 1519]

Sorry to deny this application, but there are just a few things that need fixing,

- Human is not a subrace of Dwarf. In your case, the subrace should be Mountain Dwarf.

- Your Open Response Questions need expanding. Try to make them at least two paragraphs, and they should flow like a story.

- This isn't required, but I'd suggest you may want to redo your character's biography. Once you get in-game, and go searching for the man who killed your parents, he won't actually be there ever (unless you know out of character who killed your character's father). Changing this is up to you, though.

Please do not re-apply for 24 hours after THIS POST. If you have any questions, feel free to private message me!

[LaCabra (Soda) 1519]

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