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[b]Out-Of-Character Information[/b]
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name:npp
How old are you?:13
Time-Zone:Az,USA
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?:yes
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?:world of warcraft
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?:friend
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):
Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?:no

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing:a game with quests and a free roaming world
Meta-gaming:
Power-emoting:

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name:Anthro Potolomy
Current Age:21
Sub-race (if any):Dark Elf
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):I was a poor elf raised by wood elves.my parent died a the great storm of 89. when I was 15 I learned the dark arts of nature.when I turned 20 I left my village to do my own study. I learned to cast evil tree sprits on people.
Ambitions for the Future:
Personality: Impatient, ambitious,
Skills:jump high, run fast, and climb trees
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):
Any other details you wish to share about your character:

[b]Open-Response-Questions[/b]
[i]Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.[/i]
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[b]1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Upon inspection you realize that a group of High Elves are mocking a small Wood Elf child. How do you react?[/b]

Answer:I would walk up to the high elves and laugh. I would say that they are so insignificant that they have nothing to do but laugh at a wood elf. If they didn't leave I would then fight them. After that I would yell at the wood elf to stick up for him self and stop being a baby. Then I would walk away.

[b]2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. He collapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do?[/b]

Answer:i would first take all of the gold. Then I would pick the man off the ground a throw aside. I would then just walk away from the man. But before that I would trap him in a cage of tree roots.

[b]3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved).

Answer:I would ask him if he had and health potions and some food to eat. He would say that he could give me those things for 1000 gold. I told him that that price was ridiculous. He said that I should go somewhere else then . I asked him if I could get it instead for 500 gold and he said that that was alright I paid for the food and left. That night I would come back a take my gold back from him and poison him in the process.

[Cappy 1599]

Reasons:

• Firstly - you have not filled out the entire application. You are missing the definitions for metagaming and power-emoting and your character's ambitions.
• Your role-playing definition is completely incorrect. You could read up some of the guides on our forums or search the internet for help with these answers, but you must not copy them directly. That is called plagiarism and will get you banned from applying here, and is a crime in the real world.
• Secondly, your character is extremely overpowered with all strengths and no weaknesses, often known as a "Gary Stu" character. You should read through this guide to help you avoid this issue.
• Thirdly you have no included any lore from the server in your biography and you are creating fictional events. There was no "great storm of 89". Your application should demonstrate you have a sound knowledge of the lore and backstory of our server by using places and events that actually happened and existed on the server. Do not hesitate to PM an Application Team member or myself if you need any help including server lore into your application.
• Your biography is extremely short, and it should be at least two paragraphs long as a minimum.
• You need to read over Elven lore on the Wiki, which can be found here and demonstrate a fair knowledge of it in your next application. One particular thing of note is that 20 is extremely young by Elven standards, still a child in their society. If you refuse to read and understand our lore, you will not be granted access to our server
• You cannot play a magical nor villainous character until you have acquired a magic application and villain applications respectively. Until then you cannot perform any kind of magic or villainous actions. This includes stealing, murdering, breaking in, poisoning and a myriad of other activities or any kind of magic at all, among many other things. You should read up on the villain rules here and the magic rules here. This doesn't mean your character has to be a shining hero, but they cannot be an established criminal already.
• Your skin does not represent a dark elf, and will need to be changed. You could ask for help with a skin in the skins section on our forums or try to find a better one yourself.
• Last but not least, you would do well to rework your spelling and grammar across your entire application. A good grasp on proper use of English is a very useful skill to have.

I seriously suggest you reconsider your choice of server - we are a role-playing server, not an RPG with quests and PvP. If you are still determined to continue applying, I recommend you take a long time to improve your next application. Some thing I can recommend are spending some time reading some of the many guides written by our players to help you understand what role-playing is and what this server is about.
 
 
 

If you have any queries relating to this application, please do not hesitate to PM me on the forums!

You may reapply in 24 hours from the time of this post.

[Cappy 1599]

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