[Denied][Elf] Npp

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[Aiden 173]

Under Review

 

 

Please wait a full 24-hours before reapplying or you will face an instant denial.

 

Reasons:

 

1. Your role-playing definition could use some work, and the rest of your definitions are incorrect.

 

2. Please expand on your open response questions, biography, and the appearance, personality, skills, etc questions.

 

For your biography in specific, what happened in those years that you worked, or from the age of 100 to 187, then from 187 to your character's current age?

 

3. Your biography lacks server lore. Add locations, city names/nation names, perhaps the elvish language. Prove that you read the lore.

 

4. You may not have any villainous actions in your application. You steal in all of the open response questions. Please, fix this.

 

5. While you can be a scientist, know that there is no electricity on LoTC (think medieval) so there wouldn't really be machines and parts, as you mention in your application.

 

6. In your open response questions, your character is extremely rude and mean. While this in itself is fine; you are allowed to have a character that is rude and mean, I'm not seeing enough reasoning for your character to be as mean as he is. Perhaps expanding your biography will clear this up, but as it is now your characters seems a bit too 'over the top'.. (Knocking out a small child and taking his money, robbing an old man who cannot get up off of the ground..) 

 

Message me if you have any questions or need any help.

[Aiden 173]

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