[Denied][Elf] Camsue's/ootrillionoo's/vulento's Application

[OoTrillionoO 0]

[MonkeyCoffee 516]

Your application has been...

 

 

 

 

Hello! After reading through your application, I've decided to deny it for the following reasons:

 

• Your roleplaying, meta-gaming and power-emoting definitions are incorrect. You can find the definitions on the internet or here, on the forums, but remember, don't plagiarise, write it in your own words.

 

• You have not included any lore in your application, here is a link to the wiki to help you find some! http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/

 

• Why exactly was your character's mother tortured? Please explain why.

 

• Add some more things to your biography other than your character learning strategy from his father.

 

• Your first Open Response Question needs more actions, whilst your second Open Response Question needs more dialogue. We want to see your roleplaying abilities!

 

• In your third Open Response Question, you mention "50,000$". We do not use dollars, we use Minas. Just so you know!

 

 

 

Please re-apply in 24 hours from this post or face instant denial. If you have any questions, feel free to pop me a PM!

[MonkeyCoffee 516]

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