[Denied]Dwarf (Zanemane)

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: zanemane

How old are you?: 11

Time-Zone: GMT -7

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: In Terraria

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: The player Mitchamaya

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/84470-hello-there-i-would-like-to-join-this-fine-server/#entry731466

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/84551-have-at-thee/#entry732561

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):

Have you read the Dwarven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes I have

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: Acting as another person or magical character

Meta-gaming: Using information that you know but you character would not know

Power-emoting: Using terms that explain an action without going through with it Ex: *Raises hand to prepare to slap*

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Rricorack the flastulant

Current Age: 79

Sub-race (if any): Mountain

Clan (if any):

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

    As a child I was bullied by the other dwarfs because my beard was not the same size as theirs this enraged me. From that day forward I vowed to become stronger and better in all ways compared to those meager dwarfs. This moment I forced myself to train to be the best that I could possibly be. Since the other dwarfs bullied me I decided to teach them a lesson. As I chased them I decided to stop and let them go but they made my the dwarf I am.

    As a young dwarf I was always fighting with my friends (Physically). One day me and my friend got into a fight with some older dwarfs. as we battled fighting, biting, and kicking they grabbed my friend from the fight and one of them pulled out a knife and held it to his throat. as a begged them to stop our parents came and saved us. That day i vowed never to fight without a good reason.

Ambitions for the Future: Fight in a huge war, then settle down

Personality: Normally calm but quick to get angry

Skills: Fighting

Appearance ():

Any other details you wish to share about your character:

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.

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1. Whilst mining deep in the undergrounds of Kalos you see a large deposit of diamond ore at the other side of the ravine you are on. There is a very thin rock bridge that looks precariously unstable, but it is the only way to access the deposit. What do you do?

Answer: I would run to the other dwarfs and tell them that I have found a bountiful vein of diamond. We would attempt to build a bridge. If that didn't work I personally would go over and try to mine the diamonds myself.I made it to the diamonds I would mine it and then split it with the other dwarfs.

2. You are sitting in the local tavern with a large pint of ale in your hand - sitting nearby you is a rather young dwarf whom is clearly going through a bad time. He is crying to himself, and clutching a small wooden hammer toy. In the other corner of the room two shady dwarves are sitting whispering to each other and pointing occasionally at the dwarf. They stand up, one with a small dagger in his hand and begin to approach the young dwarf. What do you do?

Answer: I would ask the the shady dwarfs what they were doing with a knife in their hands. Then swiftly kick the knife out of their hands grab it then tell them to back off. I would chase them out of the tavern and then would throw the knife at their feet. I would run to the dwarf who was crying and ask him what was wrong, and I would try to help him whatever he need.

3. Whilst wandering through the Dwarven Caverns you hear a voice call out to you; “Oi, ye’! C’mere n’ get ye’rself an ale!”. You spin on your heel and see a heavily bearded bar-owner looking at you - a huge grin on his face, and a mug of ale in his hand. How do you react?

Answer: I would accept the ale and inspect it for any visual signs of poison. Without any signs of poison I would take a large swig and gulp it down. After feeling nothing out of the ordinary i would leave the proper amount of change and walk out of the tavern. Shortly after leaving I vomited I ran into the tavern and commanded that the the bartender give me the antidote or he would pay.

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Please review all of your definitions to make sure they are all correct in the terms of role play. Also please add examples to each of your definitions so we can make sure you understand completely what each definition means.

 

Your Biography was good however try to make sure you are using server lore, this will make your application a lot better and will also give you a quick learning adventure about Lord Of The Craft. Also go into detail about your character and maybe talk about a key event in his life or talk about his strengths and weaknesses  The more detail about your characters life the better as it will tell us, The Application Team that you understand your characters role on Lord Of The Craft. Server Lore can be: Language, Place names, Characters, events, etc..

 

You can find a lot of server lore and interesting facts on the Lord of the Craft Wiki and many threads on the Dwarven Role-Play Forums. Here are the links to each.

Dwarven Wiki page

Dwarven Role Play Forum

 

If you need any more help on Lore or have any questions feel free to ask a lore master or member of the Application Team. I am sure they will be happy to help.

 

Your Character Questions are too short, please answer these with a paragraph long answer. This will re-assure us that you understand your character well enough to role play with it.

 

Your Open Response Question need to display the role play method in them to achieve an accepted application. You need to set it out like this:

 

Edward looks around the Inn and notices a man tucked away in the corner. The man is wearing dark robes with a hood resting over his head. He walks across the room towards the man before calling over "Oi You! Come over here!" The man looks up towards Edward and gasps before attempting to get up and flee.

 

You should set out your role play that and then we will know that you can control role play with your character and also know if you have the role-playing skills to obtain a place on our server. If you can do this method with every single Open Response Questions they will be at a closer to acceptable applications standard. However do not forget to include details about your character and too make sure you stay as your character throughout the role play. Include his/her(s) strengths or weaknesses to make your role playing effective.

 

Good luck with your next application,

 

Ben~

 

 

 

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