[Denied][Human] Hapybirdy

[HapyBirdy 1]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: HapyBirdy
How old are you?: 18
Time-Zone: Eastern/USA
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes.
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I play SS13 regularly (Space Station 13) and I've also played countless other role-plays.
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: I was simply surfing google.
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):
Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes.

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: Role-playing is when you assume the role of something you're not.  It's nearly always used in Movies and TV shows.
Meta-gaming: Meta-gaming is when someone uses information they know in real life, for the character they're playing as, for example, "Darius reflects Medusa's stare, petrifying herself."  In this case, there was no explanation on how he thought of that.
Power-emoting: Power-emoting is when someone specifically makes their character stronger and defeats something without the say of others.  For example, "Leona charged into battle, crushing Lux with her shield, killing her instantly."

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Aletta Marsia
Current Age: Unkown
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): Aletta grew up in Solace, she was quite a shy child.  The other children would often make fun of her, thinking she was weird, and strange.   She cursed her bad luck with her horrible social abilities.  On her 14th birthday, one kid went as far as attacking her.  She had enough with bullies, and with the knife she got for her birthday, she sliced the kid, killing him. 

 

Then one day, when she was 22, she was met by Isblee, who was a Daemon, he offered her a deal.   Half of her soul, one of her eyes, and all her past memories for immortality and a skill in speaking to people.  She accepted it gladly, not wanting to remember anything of her past, and wanting to have time to make better of herself.

 

She found that what she wanted wasn't what she got.  From this deal she became insane, and had a split personality, and she could appeal to both evil and good because of that.  She also started to have a bloodlust.  

 

She now wanders Asulon, searching for something to do with her life.

 

Skills: Speech, she can convince anyone, good or evil. Not to mention her skill with the bow and arrow, and slightly the Dagger.

 

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):[/b]  She has always worn the exact same aqua-blue coat as long as she can remember, has long dark brown hair.  She has the most purest looking blue eye that you can see, but shielded by her hair is an eye that reflects everything, looking into it, you see yourself.  

 

She gives off an aura of strangeness, and insanity, making you question your trust with her.

 

 

Ambitions for the Future: She wants to do something either insanely good or insanely evil, for the sake of her insanity.

 

Personality: She has a split personality disorder, and often ranges from evil to good.

 

Any other details you wish to share about your character: She is untrustworthy, anything you may tell her, you might come to regret.

 

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.

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1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do?

 

Answer: She walks along side him, allowing him to look less out-of-ordinary, and in the same time giving him assistance.  They enter the palace and take plenty of valuables and leave without a trace.

 

 

2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armour and an iron longsword, how do you react?

 

Answer:  Aletta charges into battle, slcing the throats of the bandits.  While fighting, her hair falls to the other side of her face, revealing her mirroring eye, she then decides the man is not worthy of living, and kills him along with the bandits.

 

 

3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens).

 

Answer: She takes regards to this offer, and takes notice to an old history book.  A small sly smile spreads across her face as she says to the man "I don't have much money, but how much is it for that old book over there, surely not alot?"  the man says in reply "Well, i'll actually give it to you for free, no-one has offered to buy it the entire day, only wanting my more shinier items."   Aletta takes the book and wanders off to read it, having managed to trick the man was too easy. 
 

 

(I may have rearranged the order when I edited it, but everything is there!)

[Princeton 396]

 

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Your application wasn't a bad try, especially not for a first attempt. Here are some things I would advise next try.

• You can't directly speak to daemons, that would be considered power-gaming. I would advise scratching that.
• Your character most definitely isn't a bad idea, but she lacks a background story. Give me slightly more information for where she comes from, appearance, attitude. Here is a link to human lore if you need help - http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/wikka.php?wakka=Humans
• All of your ORQ's need expanding. They lack dialogue and minor descriptions on your characters actions and thought.

Good luck! You may re-apply in 24 hours. Feel free to PM me with questions!

[Princeton 396]

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