[✔] [Accepted] Dwarf Mrcool111 (Fourth Submission)

[TheLonleyMulch 1]

Minecraft Account Name: MrCool111

How old are you?: 13

Time-Zone: North American Eastern (American Central)

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: Role-playing console games such as Skyrim

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: Scrolling through PMC's role-playing servers

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/85100-dwarf-mrcool111/

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/85158-dwarf-mrcool111/#entry739117

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/85276-dwarf-mrcool111-third-submission/#entry740298

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): Yes

Have you read the Dwarven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: a change in character to conduct a role. Usually for a medieval time character.

Example: A person might work at a KFC on weekdays but is a barkeeper at a renaissance fair on the weekends.

Meta-gaming:
Out of character information and knowledge. Example: Editing your
characters behavior based on real life relationships.

Power-emoting:
abusive and overpowered chat actions and emotes. Example: *Jake casts a
spell and kills everyone* or *Rachael decapitates Jake and eats his
head*

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Yulri Agevor

Current Age: 13 seasons

Sub-race (if any):

Clan (if any):

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

Yulri
Rcog Agevor was born in Kal’Karik in the city of Karik by the mother of
Yeri Vesriseld Agevor and the father of Irmos Rcog Agevor. His mother
worked as a barkeeper at the local tavern and his father worked as a
blacksmith, forging and selling the finest armor, weapons, and tools. He
didn’t make much due to the amount of blacksmiths in the market square,
but with his wife’s salary at the tavern, they had enough put Yulri out
of the slums. Yulri’s education was limited to his father’s
homeschooling, learning to read and write and sometimes he was taught
history of Kal’Karik. And when he didn’t barter with the dwarves at his
father’s market stand, he would cause mischief in the city’s streets
with his friend Nandor. When they were done with their trickery, they
would relax on the rooftops, often talking about the wildest things.
Nandor would often bring the conversation towards the city’s army and
how it would be to enlist once he was of age. Yulri would sometimes
think about such affairs at night while attempting to fall asleep. Once
of the age, Yulri enlisted into the city’s army with his friend Nandor.
Yulri would then about a years worth of military training when his
father took him out and forced him to work in the city’s mines at the
season of 3. His friend Nandor joined the city’s army and later became a
Commander. He lead an exhibition to take care of bandits attacking
Dwarven merchants in the mountains and died in combat.

Yulri
would then mine for a good deal of his lifetime. He would mine by day,
taking every shift he could work, and forge by night, becoming his
father’s apprentice in his blacksmith job. And once work became too
much, he would turn to the local tavern where he would drink his cuts
and bruises away with a fine Blaze’s Brandy. But the more he worked, the
more he found himself at the tavern. Lucky for him, that same tavern
would be the place where he met his wife, Eileen Ang’dyny Itir. She was
the most beautiful and respected dwarf in the city, all men respected
her, even those who don’t respect respected her! She had gorgeous amber
eyes with red braided hair that was decorated with the most ravishing
gems. It was love at first sight, for him at least. It took awhile to
convince her to marry him. He brought her Red Roses and Blonde Blossoms
everyday after his mining shifts, he even learned to play the lute for
her, singing the most romantic songs to her at the tavern. And when he
was in his fifth season, she finally said yes. But in their sixth season
together, a band of slum theifs took Eileen’s life. Yulri never bounced
back from her loss and he now spends most of his nights at the local
tavern, drinking his sorrows away. He quit his job as a miner and took
the blacksmith job when his dad died of Ki’katta. He now lives a lonely
life of smithing for the city and late and frequent tavern visits.

Ambitions
for the Future: To quit his job as a blacksmith and enlist in the army
once more but not as a soldier, but as one of the army’s blacksmith,
forging the finest armor and weapons for the army

Personality:
Before his wife’s death, Yulri was a kind and cheerful dwarf, whistling
tunes as he worked and taking the extra working hours for his father.
But when his wife was killed by slum thieves, he became a bitter, rude,
and lonely dwarf who angers a bit too easy and has no friends. He back
mouths the bartender, stole gems from the mines that reminded him of his
late wife’s eyes, and curses at the city’s law enforcement. Overall,
though, he is a tough dwarf who takes orders from no one.

Skills:
His skills started out as fighting when he enlisted in the army but it soon would become mining when his father forced
him to work in the village mine. Mining would be his primary skill
throughout his life with the additional blacksmith apprenticeship. But
when his father died, his smithing skills improved when he quit his
miner job and became the village blacksmith. Smithing is the only thing
he does now-a-days.

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):

 

Open-Response-Questions

Each
question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one
paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as
descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any
point.

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1.
Whilst mining deep in the undergrounds of Kalos you see a large deposit
of diamond ore at the other side of the ravine you are on. There is a
very thin rock bridge that looks precariously unstable, but it is the
only way to access the deposit. What do you do?

Answer:
“Oy! Would ya look at tha size o’ tha dimond!” Yulri tips his head over
the rock bridge, kicking a few rocks over into the ravine. He looks up,
takes a deep breath, and sucks in his beer gut as he edges towards the
bridge. He turns to his side and starts to shimmy towards the precious
rock. He starts to chant to himself: “Doan’t look doon, Doan’t look
doon” and of course he looks down, seeing the depthness of the ravine
again and almost loses his footing. He regains focus and continues to
move across the rope bridge singing a dwarf tune to calm himself down.
He then notices the rock bridge is about to give in, he curses a dwarf
swear and makes a run for it. And as he gets closer to the shiny rock,
the bridge catches up to him, almost crumbling beneath his feet. He
dives for it, almost landing straight on the other side but is hanging
on the edge of it by one hand. He musters up the strength to climb up
the edge and mine the shiny rock. He then turns around and remembers the
rock bridge broke and there's no way across. He sits down and weeps
while drinking a flask of ale.

2.
You are sitting in the local tavern with a large pint of ale in your
hand - sitting nearby you is a rather young dwarf whom is clearly going
through a bad time. He is crying to himself, and clutching a small
wooden hammer toy. In the other corner of the room two shady dwarves are
sitting whispering to each other and pointing occasionally at the
dwarf. They stand up, one with a small dagger in his hand and begin to
approach the young dwarf. What do you do?

Answer:
Seeing the danger of the situation, Yulri would stand up, fists raised,
and tell the two dwarves off. They look at each other and just laugh,
and once the laughing session was over, the other dwarf took out his
sword from behind his backs and brought all attention towards Yulri. He
started to panick being he was out matched and defenseless, he started
to randomly throw mugs of ale at the shady dwarves. He missed every
throw due to the lack of coordination from the ale he was drinking. In
other words, he was drunk and once again, out matched and defenseless.
The dwarves continued to edge towards Yulri with fire in each of their
eyes.

“Oy!
Get away fae him!” The young dwarf says and then charges towards the
dwarf with the dagger and starts to attack him with his hammer. The
dwarf just kicked him and lost all attention towards Yulri and started
to edge slowly to the young dwarf. Yulri would then tackle the one with
the sword and confiscate his weapon. He would then swing it aimlessly a
few times, drop it, and run out of the tavern with the young dwarf
around his shoulders, laughing and screaming.

3.
Whilst wandering through the Dwarven Caverns you hear a voice call out
to you; “Oi, ye’! C’mere n’ get ye’rself an ale!”. You spin on your heel
and see a heavily bearded bar-owner looking at you - a huge grin on his
face, and a mug of ale in his hand. How do you react?

Answer: I’d first yell

“Oy! Get oot! Ye get nae right bein’ here! Ye’ll get yer’self killed!”

“Bar ah thaot ya miners wid enjoy some ale?”

“O’course we wid! Noo gie me that ale an go back an gat’ tha rest o’ dwarfs some!”

The
crazy bartend would give Yulri the ale, smile even more, and run back
to his tavern to get some more ale. Yulri would laugh to himself and
gulp the ale down and continue his adventure through the Dwarven
Caverns. He would then dress up as a different dwarf so once the crazy
bartend would come around again, he would score himself some more ale.

[cruzazul 2815]

 

It looks like you took Ben's advice and improved your app accordingly. Good job and welcome to the Lord of the Craft and the world of Anthos.

 

Please wait patiently for a GM too implement you to the server.

[cruzazul 2815]

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