[Denied]Danieltheii's Alternate Account Application

[TheWalrus 1]

[b]Out-Of-Character Information[/b]
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Main Account Name: TheWalrus198
Alternate Account Name: DanielTheII
How old are you?:16
Time-Zone: Atlantic EST
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?:Yes of course i will obey the rules and laws.I also think that the rules are good and secure
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?:Yes i have,In fact i went on this server before on my other acount and many others servers.Though on other games i also roleplay in some occasions.

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing:To me role playing means alot. Its like the medieval fantasy that i knew did not exist just come to life. To experience myself in the shoes of a person or creature that lives in a magnificent world like this one.
Meta-gaming:Meta-Gaming is the use of out of character information such as in OOC chat and using it while in character to get advantage and use info that your in-game character doesn't know about.
Power-emoting:When a player uses commands to his advantage giving an unrealistic advantage in game for example. /me launches a ball at the man who couldn't move and died with no chance of survival.

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Daniel  Dragon Tsyganok
Current Age: 21
Race: Elf
Sub-race (if any): Half Elf
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):When i was born in the land of Aegis my parents and i lived in a happy cottage in the wilderness near a tavern owned by Goblin. He was my best friend and we helped each other by protecting each other from assassins and scams. We lived happily until at the age of 17 strange sighting of the undead happend. I was really scared with my family and we decided to move out. Sadly goblin couldn't come with us and we had to leave him there. i already started to see some grey hairs on my pretty blonde hair because of all the issues in the world at the time.But one night i woke up to an alarming sight i saw my parents were undead and they were burning. I ran out of the house and saw the house burn to ashes. The flames in my blue eyes felt like i was burning on the inside. Everything happend so quickly that it felt like moments of seconds. In the morning i salvaged all the items i could from the fire and went into the river to clean up from my singed skin. After i took a bath i fell unconsious and after about 5 days i familiar face saved me. It was goblin. He after all this time came and helped me in my time of need and i thanked him greatly. He told me the last ship is leaving to Asulon. We had no choice but to leave our memories behind and settle in a whole new place. And now here i am, sitting on a rock and thinking of what to do next. But now goblin has his new tavern here and i will start and join the guards for some coin and shelter. Than later on i will try and become a knight of a kings army.
Ambitions for the Future:My character's ambitions are joining the best knights in the world and also to have a very nice home.Joined the best knights is one of my ambitions because i once was rescued by knights when a large group of bandits got me.
Personality:My character is always doing what he is told and always trying to help.Not only does he try to help but he enjoys fighting with others not actually fighting against each other but for training.Also my character loves to scale walls and jump from roof to roof.
Skills:My characters most skilled talents are that i am very agile and very skilled in the arts of war.Such as tactics if you are outnumbered and how to eliminate enemy's fast. But Mostly i am very skilled with agility because since i was small i always had fun with my friend Anthony climbing things and jumping to places and that gave me very good agility when i was older because i also practiced acrobatics.
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): http://imgur.com/1DVCelU
Any other details you wish to share about your character:

[MonkeyCoffee 516]

Your application has been...

 

 

 

Hello! After reading through your application, I've come to the decision to deny it for the following reasons:

 

First off, someone can not be twenty one years old and come from Aegis. We left Aegis about 200 years ago.

 

Goblin doesn't seem like a name that someone would have.

 

Someone does not grow grey hair simply because of "all the issues in the world".

 

The part in your ambitions, in which you mention that a group of knights rescued you, seems like a pretty large part of your character's history, so why not include it in your biography?

 

You have not included enough lore in your application. Here is a link to the wiki to help you out: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/

 

Why exactly does your character like to scale walls? Why is he skilled in the arts of war? Who is Anthony, why didn't you include him in your biography?

 

 

Please re-apply in 24 hours from this post or face instant denial. If you have any questions, feel free to pop me a PM!

[MonkeyCoffee 516]

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