[Denied]Pokefreakdog"s Submission

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b]Out-Of-Character Information[/b]
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name:Pokefreakdog
How old are you?:16
Time-Zone:Australia?
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: Yes, On StoneCraft, Buxville and Sherlock city.
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: I was surfing the internet for role playing servers
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):Yes
Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Of course

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: Playing a role that it either fictional or non-fictional, Stepping into another world as another person.
Meta-gaming:Knowing things that your role/ character does not know and applying them to roleplay.
Power-emoting:Being overpowered and instead of having a responsible action, inputting a unfair outcome.

 
In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Sunday Forest
Current Age: 18
Sub-race (if any): None -Full Human-
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

 

I was born in a cottage in the middle of a dense forest by my parents; Das Forest(My father) and Jill Forest(My Mother). Sadly shortly after giving birth to me my mother died of a unknown illness. From then after my father had to take care of me by myself.The family ran a woodcutting business and so I quickly became handy with the woodcutter's axe. Soon though the business was getting less business and shut down. From then on my father became very poor and we had to start hunting for food ourselves.

 

Soon my dad taught me snares and other traps to capture the animals and also to keep them off the crops.By the time this had happened I was only 10, simply too young to actually kill the animals by hand so I instead used traps. Soon even the forest creatures learned to avoid our traps and I had to go in to the city to find a job. From then on I never left the city with my father and have always had to protect him in his ever growing age.

Ambitions for the Future:[/b] I wish to start another business to restart my families misfortune.
Personality:[/b] Kind, Caring nature, if provoked I will simply walk away.
Skills:[/b] Handy with an axe and ropes.
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):[/b]
Any other details you wish to share about your character:[/b]wears a monocle because one eye is blind.

[b]Open-Response-Questions[/b]
[i]Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.[/i]
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[b]1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do?[/b]

Answer:I try alert the guards by shouting "Intruder" over and over again. They of course think I am just pulling a prank. I try to make them see the intruder that was now half way across the court yard towards the Emperor's palace. Now, I feel like I must take action to I run up to man trying to stop him. He quickly swipes me off , but in the doing so, he alerts the guards as I thud loudly to the ground.

The guards quickly give chase to the man and quickly catch him.The man curses something under his breath and is quickly dragged off to the dungeons.


[b]2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armour and an iron longsword, how do you react?[/b]

Answer:I scout the area around while making sure not to make a noise. I then climb up a tree and throw a rock I picked up on the way up the tree to distract the bandits. One bandits goes and pursues the noise while the other stays firm. I then spot him walking off to get a drink from the nearby stream, I quickly run to the man hoping I haven't been spotted. Luckily they don't notice me until the last second, me and the old man then try to walk faster with no luck. Just as we are about to get caught we 

hear the noises of guards rushing to the situation to arrest the bandits.

[b]3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens).[/b]

Answer: I quickly scan over his merchandise quickly noticing he has a pile of steel entwined rope and a wooden axe. I say to him that I would to purchase the rope and he suggests a price of 10 mina for both. I quickly take out my coins and discover I only have 9 minas. I ask if maybe I could get it One mina cheaper and the old man laughs and agrees to my proposition. He then hands over the rope and axe gives me an extra item- A good luck charm. I tell him I didn't pay for that and he chuckles and insists I take it. I nod then put the items in my backpack and walk away wondering why the old man was so kind.

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I'm gonna have to deny this:

 

• Your biography demonstrated zero knowledge of LOTC human lore. You can find human lore here - http://lotc-wiki.wikidot.com/wiki:holy-oren-empire and you can also find current events here - http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/forum/18-human-roleplay/
• Expand upon your ORQ's to better prove your knowledge of how to role-play. Include things such as dialogue and detailed actions.
• Add examples to your meta-gaming and power-gaming definitions.

You may re-apply in 24 hours. Feel free to PM me with any questions or concerns. Good Luck!

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