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Out-Of-Character Information

Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

 

Main Account Name: booklight12

Alternate Account Name:

How old are you?: 16

Time-Zone: eastern standard

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: about 2 months worth of experience

 

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

 

Role-playing: to play a role or character in game. Playing a specific role in a game in which you take up the life of a character

Meta-gaming: Using ooc information icly when your character doesnt know it. For example oocly someone tells me they just killed someone, and then I use the information to accuse him of murder.

Power-emoting: Forcing action upon another player. for example when emoting you say *blake kills bob* instead of *blake attempts to stab bob in the heart*

 

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Blake

Current Age: 20

Race: Human

Sub-race (if any):

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

Blake was born in the wilderness with his parents. He started off as a kind lad, he and his parents the bloodwolfs lived happily with the wolves of the area. They lived in the middle of a pack of wolves territory you see. He lived a simple yet lavish life in the woods. It was all good until the wolves became frantic. One night in the pitch black dark the wolves came to his camp and killed his parents. he was only about 5 then so he didnt really know much of the world. The wolves sparred is life for reasons unknown. For the next 10 years after He would live on his own with nature by his side and the spirits of his parents guiding him with every kill he made.This lifestyle was good for a while until he saw another human female of the same age. Her name was jennifer and the second he laid his eyes on her he was madly in love. The woman was a beutiful blonde woman with sliky white skin. The womans parents were hunters and one night on their daily hunting routine, they came across Blake and the animals of the forest. This ended quickly and in great succession her parents killed every living animal there thinking they would attack Blake. Those animals were his pets and friends, and In a rage He had ran up to the parents and made quick work of them tearing them to shreds and eating parts of their bodies for meat. When Jennifer found out about this she suddenly got a shot in her brain and jumped off a bridge into a waterfall and drowned.

  It has been 4 years since that day and Blake has not let her go. He had many attempts of suicide all failing. He was in a great deep depression for a while until he found a White Wolf of the name Rasputin(It may just be  his imagination or Rasputin may be real, answers are unknown). Blake spoke to this wolf he thought he was insane and just imagining this wolf was speaking to him, but Blake felt Rasputin in his heart. This wolf taught him how to live again and brought him to many great cities One of them in which Blake spent a lot of time in was Solace. He Met a friend in the city who was a Gladiant and was able to live a good life in that ciry. Also, Rasputin taught Blake to interact with other humans and beings. Rasputin also taught Blake that everyone is equal. That is why to this day, Blake will trust anyone he comes across, its a great quality but may cost him his life in the future. Also, Blake never thinks of others as bad people, only people with bad pasts. He lived with Rasputin for about 3 years but sadly Rasputin had passed away as a very very old wolf. Blake when Rasputin died promised to make  name for himself and fight for others in glory, and to forge alliances on his new journeys in this land. Blake may succeed or fail but he will try his hardest to help the innocent and rise above others as a leader.

Ambitions for the Future: Wishes to become king, or have a very high position as a military leader or hero.

Personality: Calm normally, he tries to keep his anger down and is very laid back and a bit of a ladies man. but dont let that fool you because if you wrong him you will see his sadistic side where he can tear you and your entire family to shreds without feeling any guilt (only if he is deeply angered by someone)

Skills: Great at combat, and is a great hunter and user of the swords, he usually fights with one tomahawk and sword, or two tomahawks. Is minor chef, but he is very smart and charming.

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): Has white hair, one blue one red eye due to an accident as a child. white skin, Is about 6 foot, lean and very muscular due to living in the woods his entire life. wears a rasputins wolf pelt on his back at all times to keep him with him always.

Any other details you wish to share about your character: Nope

 

1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Uponinspection you realize that a group of older elves are mocking a small elven child. How do you react?

Answer: Blake walks up to the group "Oi, get away from the lad blokes, before you rip ye all te shreds"

one of the elves say "Ha, I would like te see you try 4 against one we would easily defeat you fool.

Blake snarls at them and begins to growl and speak in a menacing demonic voice "I said leave him alone or i will cut yer tongues out and feed them to the Wolves here" another one of the older elves is a bit scared "Woah, what happened to yer voice lad I dont want any trouble" Blake begins to growl somemore before pulling out his bone knife "I said leave before i gut ye, now scram" The group of elves run of terrified by blake. "Are ye okay lad did they hurt ye?" He asks the young elf.

"No, no they didn't hurt me, they were just being mean and threatened to kill me if I told anyone of their secrets"

"What secrets lad? are they valuable? stolen?" The boy shakes his head.

"No they are the remnants the body of a person they killed a long time ago, I was trapped by them and have to keep it a secret." Blake looks intrested.

"Why dont we bring these criminals to justice they dont deserve to have peace if they are killers."

The boy nods "Okay"

"Okay then lets be off and tell the guards in the next town over" They procceed to the next town to tell the guards of the murder.

 

2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. Hecollapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there,defenseless - what do you do?

 

Answer: Blake walks up to the man sympathetically and tries to help him up "Are ye okay sir? I dont want an elderly man to get harmed" 

"No, no i'm fine just leave me be" Blake picks up the mans coins and hands it to the man

"You dont look it sir, here I'll help ye out, where were ye going?"

"Oh your a kind young lad, a normal person in these times would just take my coins and leave, thank you I was just heading down that road to my cottage why dont you accompany me"

Blake follows the old ma helping him down the forest to his cottage. When they are there the old man gives Blake a Golded coin. "This will guide ye on yer journey traveler." The old man disappears into the house as if he was never there and just a shadow. "Thank ye sir" Blake tosses the coin in the air on the way out and the coin begins to have a dark black aura around it. The aura and the coin  both disappear into thin air and Blake passes out. "W. where am I?" Blake wakes up in the town he was searching for the entire time . "What what happened" Blake looks around and he is in the middle of a tavern in the city. He asks the bartender "What happened?" the bartender replies

"Why you dont remember? ye were up all night drinking and partying. Ye must've been so drunk"

Blake looks confused but shrugs thinking that is true and that he just dreampt up the old man.

 

3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved).

 

Answer:

 

Blake walks up to the man bidding some venison "Here can I have that fine piece of venison"

"Oh this is the finest piece of meat we have it will cost 50 minas" Blake is Really suprised "50 minas?! Do you think I am daft? I will give 3 minas for the meat." The man replies

"Ho ho you drive a hard bargain, I will give it to you for 30 minas."

"6 minas I will give you" The man smiles 

"15 minas and we have a deal" Blake laughs in his face annoyed at the seller

"Okay, okay I think I can make an exception for 10 minas" Blake growls and his voice sounds menacing "3 minas I said" The man is terrified

"3 minas take the meat just please let me be" Blake smiles

"Thank you" The man hands blake the meat and Blaae takes it. Shortly after the man tells a guard being angry at blake he says that Blake has stolen the meat from him and he is the thief that has recently been stealing from them. The guard walks up to Blake "Come with me thief we dont take your kind here" The guard tries to Cuff Blake. Blake pulls away and tries to punch the guard in the temples to daze him. The guard is hit and Blake runs out of the town and goes to the next town over in attempts to not get into trouble for crimes he hasn't committed. 

[Princeton 396]

Denied

 

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Your biography was still unclear and didn't have enough lore. You don't mention the relative location of the forest and you only mentioned Solace once. The white wolf wouldn't actually be able to exist, it would have to be in his imagination. 

 

Your ORQ's were much improved, maybe add a little more detailed actions.

 

You may reapply in 24 hours. Feel free to PM me with any questions or concerns. Good Luck!

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