[Denied](Theguy2005) {Elven} Application

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*sorry if the formatting is a little odd...and i know this post is a little before 24 hours from my last app but i am going to be gone the rest of the day so i wanted to post this today*

 

[b]Out-Of-Character Information[/b]
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.


Minecraft Account Name: theguy2005

How old are you?: I am 17 years old.

Time-Zone: Eastern US

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes of course!

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I have played WOW and have done a different kind of role-playing that I Can’t describe..it is not a PC game it is like role-playing like this: Douglas walked to his friend’s house and knocked on the door. It is like That

 

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: I was
looking for a Minecraft Role-playing server that has White-list Because
when I role-play on one without white-list there is hardly any
role-playing going on!

 

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: http://www.lordofthe...in-application/ http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/86657-theguy2005-elven-application/
 

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): yes i have

Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: yes!

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

 

Role-playing:  Role-playing is the form of taking the role of
another person and acting as if you were him/her. When I role-play I
have my character have a different personality than me so it is harder.

 

Meta-gaming: Meta-gaming means for a person to use the out of game facts to to affect ones in game actions.

 

Power-emoting: Power-emoting is when you emote in an
unfair way like this: "Trevor hit John in the face" "John hit Trevor
back so hard he flew and hit the wall"

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:


Full Name: John White

Current Age: 30

Sub-race (if any): Wood elf

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

 

When John was born his Father left him and it was just him and his mother. He always loved the outdoors and could never get enough of it. Every Night he would sleep in the grass out in his yard. It like was Wonderful And full of joy until he turned 18. That year His mother died from a Heart attack. It was the worst time of Johns life. He lost his father Then he lost his mother/ How could it get any worse he would ask Himself. He lived on his own for 3 years cooking and gathering food and supplies for himself to live. But One day he found an older elf wondering around the woods and John got up to see who it could be. He had long Dark hair and looked about the age his mother would have been at this Time. John told him about his mother and father and how he was all alone and from then on he lived with the man he met in the woods. He had never got a name from him though.

 

When John turned 25 he left the man’s home and went to start a new
life. But before he could leave the man told John something that left
him with a choice to leave or stay with him. The man sat down with John
and told him that he knew his mother very well because...well because
she was his wife. John was shocked! "So you’re my father!" he said to
him. The man shook his head and John could not believe it. But he still
did not want to stay with his father because he had done something that
John will never forgive: He left him alone with his mother. So john set
out into the forest with the few things he had.

 

John was traveling in the forest when he saw a group of elves walking.
John came into the group to ask them who they were. All of them said
that they were on their way to start a new life in a town called Anthos
(that is what they will name it). John smiled and liked the thought of
being home with friends and more people so he joined them on their
adventure. After some years the town was finished and when John was 30
he had a lot of money and a very nice home. But he wanted children. That
was the next adventure John would face. Finding a wife and getting
children.

 

Ambitions for the Future: John wants to find a wife and have kids
 

Personality: John is a nice caring guy who loves children. He is very brave and is always up for an adventure.

 

Skills: John is a very good lumberjack and because of this he is very strong.
 

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):  http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/1199343/wood-elf/

Any other details you wish to share about your character: John as long brown hair and it often covers his left eye.

[b]Open-Response-Questions[/b]
[i]Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.[/i]
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[b]1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Upon inspection you realize that a group of older elves are mocking a small elven child. How do you react?[/b]

Answer:
John Listens to the old men and steps up and interrupts them.  "What
did you say about this little kid?" John asked and grabbed the kid
toward him. The old men looked at him and at the boy, "we were
just..uh...telling him how wonderful he was." The old men smiled. John
looked toward the kid "is this true?" "No!" John looked back at the men.
"He is a liar! A Stupid good for nothing Lire!" One of the men said.
John looked at the kid "proof! He is not stupid or good for nothing! He
is a smart little boy who is growing up! You should know what he feels
like considering you were a kid as well!" John looked at the men and
they ran away. After that John looked back at the little boy. "Don't
ever listen to them ok? You are very smart and can stand up for yourself
like you just did! They are not nice and you should not be hanging
around with them ok?" the boy smiled "ok!" and he walked away. John
smiled.

2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man 
with a walking stick. He collapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a 
sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the 
ground and  splits open spreading coins across 

Answer:  John goes down on his hands and
knees and try’s to wake up the old man. "Are you ok?" he asks hoping for
an answer. The old man says nothing. "HELP!" he yells out and people
start to run over. "He fell He won’t answer please is anyone a doctor?"
"I am!" on old man comes next to John and looks at the man on the
ground. "Can you please help him he just fell and won’t get up!" The
doctor looked at him then at the man’s leg. "He broke his leg," John
looked at the leg "Can you fix it?" He asked "of course! But you will
have to pay the price." He looked at the bag of gold coins. "You want me
to use his money?" John asked him. "I never said his money." John
relized he was had no money that he could use then he looked at the
stack of gold coins. "I guess I can use his money if it is saving him"
John Gives the Doctor his money and the doctor leaves with the old man.

[b]3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's
willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do?
(Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion
involved).


Answer: John walks over and looks at the Stuff he is willing to
sell and he smiled. Well I do need that thought to himself. “How much?”
he asked him. The trader smiled “name your price” John looked at the bow
in the wagon. It was just the right kind he wanted! “how about 20” He
smiled trying to get it for cheap. “To low..How about 50” The trader
asked. “To high!” you said to him. "You’re not getting it for cheap kid”
The trader said to him. “50 is the best I can do,” John smiled “how
about 20 and I give you my old bow”. “30 and your bow” the trader said.
John got really mad and took 50 out of his pocket grabbed the bow and
walked off.

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Not a bad try, but I'm going to have to deny this -

 

Your definitions were a bit confusing. Expand upon them.

 

Your biography contained no lore. Living in a forest isn't an excuse to exclude elven lore. You can find elven lore here - http://lotc-wiki.wikidot.com/wiki:malinor

 

Your ORQ's were rather good, perhaps add a bit of extra detail

 

You may reapply in 24 hours. Feel free to PM me with any questions or concerns. Good Luck!

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