[Denied][Dwarf] Fergrim

[Pancakehz 2279]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and

ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: Kshelton999

How old are you?: 14

Time-Zone: pacific

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: yes I love rp and have played on many rp servers

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: I was searching for LOTR servers and this one came up I saw it and really liked what I saw.

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:N/A

Have you read the Dwarven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes, of course.

Definitions

In our own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: pretending you are someone else or playing a different role other than yourself

Meta-gaming: Is playing as a role that already "magically" knows stuff such as someone's age or name.

Power-emoting: Forcing something upon someone such as *kills Madrig the Mighty Dwarf* instead of doing the right thing as in *attempts to stab Madrig*

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Fergrim Ravenhood

Current Age: 120

Sub-race (if any):

Clan (if any): Please post a reply as to what this means and I will reply later please.

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

Fergrim grew up in a mountain with his mother, father, and four brothers. His brothers names were Drakin, Talin, Belin, and Targrim. Targrim was the oldest and Fergrim was the middle child. At age 14 his father died fighting off goblins to protect his family. The goblins killed his father and took his brothers, the two twins, Talin and Belin. Fergrim had a dream that his brothers were in a nearby cave and woke his brothers to help him look. When they arrived at the cave his brothers were not there, but goblins were. Fergrim fell to the ground but to his surprise he turned and saw an Elvish crafted iron sword and he took it up. He swung his new blade and killed every goblin in that cave.

After twenty years, Fergrim left home to live in an inn in a nearby town. He went to the tavern one day and saw Drakin. He sat with him and talked but little did he know the next word his brother would tell him is of his brother Targrims death. He died fighting goblins just as his father had. From then on Fergrims hatred for goblins escalated. Fergrim joined a Dwarven army at the age of 103. He fought for freedom of dwarves and to avenge his brother Targrims death. A year later he heard news of his brother Drakins death. All he wants now is to be a great hero to the dwarven race.

Ambitions for the Future: Avenge his father and brothers death and become a great dwarven warrior.

Personality: tough, friendly, brave, ambitious, courageous, daring

Skills: Swords, archery, eating, socializing

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): I will post a reply, if accepted, of my skin, I have yet to make it because I enjoy making my own role-play skins.

Any other details you wish to share about your character: well built dwarf who enjoys to knock a few goblin heads every now and then

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe

the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.

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1. Whilst mining deep in the undergrounds of Kalos you see a large deposit of diamond ore at the ther side of the ravine you are on. There is a very thin rock bridge that looks precariously unstable, but it is the only way to access the deposit. What do you do?

Answer: I approach the bridge cautiously and look around for anything to hold onto if it gives out on me. I find an old rope that seems to be part of an old bridge. I grab the rope and tie it around my waist. As I walk the bridge gives way and I fall. The rope stops me and I think about turning back but instead I swing to get nea the diamond. I begin to mine and when I have it all I slowly climb back to where I was and walk out of the cave.

2. You are sitting in the local tavern with a large pint of ale in your hand - sitting nearby you is a rather young dwarf whom is clearly going through a bad time. He is crying to himself, and clutching a small wooden hammer toy. In the other corner of the room two shady dwarves are sitting whispering to each other and pointing occasionally at the dwarf. They stand up, one with a small dagger in his hand and beginto approach the young dwarf. What do you do?

Answer: I ask the young dwarf what is bothering him and he explains. The two men approach and the one with the knife takes a stab at the boy only to be stopped by my sword stopping his knife. I put down my sword and grab the him by the shirt and throw him back. The other begins to step towards me and I punch him in the gut. He wobbles around for a bit and then I yell "Oi ye best be leaving now!" As they both wobble out barely able to stand I say to the young dwarf, "You best get out of here before those so come to their senses and come back to get you again."

3. Whilst wandering through the Dwarven Caverns you hear a voice call out to you; “Oi, ye’! C’mere n’get ye’rself an ale!”. You spin on your heel and see a heavily bearded bar-owner looking at you - a huge grin on his face, and a mug of ale in his hand. How do you react?

Answer: I draw my sword and ask the man what he wants. "Well I followed you in to this here cave ya' see, and well, I thought you might want an ale," said the man. "I am not in need of an ale at the moment sir." As I turn to leave he stops me, constantly saying he has the best ale in all of the land. I ignore the man trying to avoid any conflict. He continues to follow me but as I turn a corner I get the idea to get him lost in the caves. I run for it and make so many turns he loses sight of me and is lost. I make my way to the cave exit and walk back to my home. When I get there I inform some guards of his location so that he doesn't die. They retrieve him from the caves and he goes back to his tavern.

[Princeton 396]

 

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I'm gonna have to deny this -

 

Your biography contains no LOTC lore. You must include dwarven lore within your biography to ensure acceptance. "Goblins" of the sort you mention do not exist in LOTC. I suggest reading lore on the LOTC wiki - http://lotc-wiki.wikidot.com / I also ask how an untrained warrior kills every goblin in a cave?

 

Your ORQ's were rather power-gamy. Give your character a few draw backs or at least explain where he obtained such respectable fighting skills.

 

Expand upon your meta-gaming definition.

 

Post your application to the minecraft forums.

 

You must include a skin within your application.

 

You may reapply in 24 hours. Feel free to PM me with any questions or concerns. Good Luck!

[Princeton 396]

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