[Denied][Human] Xapeb's 2Nd Application

[Arseman Snoretop 12]

[Ford 1996]

 

You're almost there, man! Everything in your application checks out, and I can tell that you've improved since the last application you wrote, but there's just one important part that you're missing. Lore. In-game city names, nation names, road names, race or creature names...You're missing ALL of that. Since you're a human, I'd suggest reading this before you submit another application: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Humans That link will take you to the lore for the humans. On that page, there are the names of noble houses, Divine houses, country names, city names, and so forth. Try to answer these questions in your next app: Where was Jab's farm located? Where was Jab's new home located? What is this small village called?

 

You may re-apply after 24 hours. Please send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Ford 1996]

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