cruzazul 2815 Share Posted June 4, 2013 Unfortunately your application has been denied. Here are some things that need to be improved if you are wanting to reapply. Your biography is detailed and shows server lore, which is very good there is one thing that could be fixed, it is up to your though. Having your parents killed in a bandit raid is incredibly cliche and has been used many times. Perhaps you could give a more unique story to showcase your parent's death. Expand on all three of your ORQs. They need to be at least 1 paragraph long, if not more. Also try to add more dialogue throughout. Your meta-gaming and power-emoting definitions are both incorrect. You can look for the definition but put it in your own words. Plagiarism will not be tolerated. Make sure you post your application on our minecraft forums thread. Please wait 24 hours from this denial before reapplying. If you have any questions don't be afraid to send me a message. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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