[Denied]My Application (Sgtliger)

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please fill out the
following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details
are accurate.

 

Minecraft Account
Name: SGTliger

How old are you?: 14

Time-Zone: Mountain

Have you read, understood
and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

What previous
experience have you had in role-playing?: I’ve played on 5-6 roleplaying
servers, sadly most of these discontinued in 5-6 weeks of roleplaying.

How did you hear about
the the Lord of the Craft?: From the Minecraftforums of course.

Link any applications
that you have previously made for the server: 
N/A

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): Yes I have.

Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your
biography?: Yes I have.

 

Definitions

In your own words
define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

 

Role-playing: Acting
out a part with others.

 

Meta-gaming: Roleplaying
that you know something that your in game character doesn’t know.

 

Power-emoting:
Something that you state happens but can’t actually happen in game. Like
stabbing.

 

In-Character
Information:

Complete the following
biography on your character:

 

Full Name: Kashe Qu

Current Age: 18

Sub-race (if any): N/A

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

Kashe was born and raised in  Abresi. 

 

When Kashe was only  4 years of age his family lost all of their money and belongings to a thief, they were forced to live out on the streets. He suffered many sicknesses and hardships on the streets. In these hard times, Kashe's mother resorted to prostitution for the extra money. But there was one thing that changed all of these things, a young boy named Matheus. 

When Kashe was 10 his parents were caught in a bandit attack at Matheus birthday party, when Matheus and Kashe were fetching some water and wine for the party. When Kashe returned
he saw Matheus staring at the dead guests, he was weeping. Kashe put his arm around Matheus, Matheus then said

“Kashe… lets make a promise”

Kashe replied “A promise…? What kind of promise?”

“A promise that when we meet again we will both be strong… so none of these things will ever happen, and when they do… we’ll be strong about it.”

Kashe begin to slowly cry. Realizing his parents were dead as well. He walked towards them. Then
replied saying, “When we meet again? What do you mean when we meet again? I will always be with you.”

“For now, we go our separate ways” Matheus chokes, “And try our best to fulfill our promises. Besides if I have you I won’t be able to become strong.”

Kashe felt an ache in his heart. So great he couldn’t bear it, he began to weep, so loud the whole
city could hear it. But finally after a few minutes of crying. He got up, and embraced Matheus, he then walked away turned back. Matheus waved back, bright red cheeks, and tear eyes. And shouted, “Farewell brother!”

 Kashe was impacted by this forever. Kashe wasput into foster care and was taken in by his training master. Vex Tung, a master in axes. Vex taught Kashe everything he knew. Vex died a young death
when Kashe was 17 years old. Vex left all of his belongings to Kashe.

Ambitions for the Future: Meeting up with his
childhood friend Matheus, and paying him back for everything he did for him. He
plans on living a peaceful life full of wealth, adventures, and friends.
Although Kashe wants to live a peaceful life, part of him wants to go on
dangerous adventures, full of violence and trouble. It’s up to him to decide.

Personality: You could say Kashe
isn’t the brightest person to be around, not having his parents around for half
of his life has definitely had a large impact on him. He hasn’t learned most of
life’s lessons, and isn’t the best with social skills. Although troubled in
social skills he’s great working with himself or people he has been close with
for a long time.

Skills: Kashe is greatly
skilled in the arts of the Ax. Being taught by Vex Tung greatly increased his
skill. Pickpocketing are also great skills of Kashe’s. Being homeless for 6
years has taught him patience and great sneaking abilities.

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): http://oi43.tinypic.com/2uy66qc.jpg

Tan, short dark hair.

Any other details you wish to share about your character:

Kashe is rather a strange person, he doesn’t respect your privacy, is blunt, and is just
different to be around. He might be mean at first, you just need to get to know
him.

 

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be
answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.

____

 

1. Whilst in the mighty human
capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do?

 

Answer: I sprint towards the dark-clothed figure and tackle him. I
hold him to the ground and search him for weapons. I find a poisonous dagger, I
grab my ax and point the tip to his neck. I ask him “What are you doing with
this dagger?!”

He replies “It… it… is for self protection!”

“How dare you try to assassinate the Emperor!”

I pick him up and report him to the guards.

 

2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you
come across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable
old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armour and an iron ax, how do you react? (I changed it to an ax to make it fit my roleplaying
character, I hope that’s okay.

 

Answer: I sneak up behind the two bandits as quietly as I can. As I
reach them I grab my ax out and take out both of their feet in a whirling
combo. I ask the old man if he is okay and if they took anything. He replies
with a simple no. I tell the bandits to be off if they want their lives. They
both take of running towards the East. I jot in my notebook they probably live
somewhere to the east. The old man thanks me.

 

 

3. You are standing within the
mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of
general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens).

 

Answer: Kashe: “How much for the diamond boots?”

Merchant: “200 minas?”

Kashe: “How much for the diamond ax?”

Merchant: “300 Minas.”

Kashe: “Deal.”

 

Thanks.

 

 

 

 

[Lita 677]

• Please expand upon your definitions, including examples and more detail.
• Your biography requires quite a bit more server lore, to ensure you actually did read it.
• Please make your biography flow a bit more, it's choppy and hard to follow.
• You cannot commit villainous actions in an application (i.e. pickpocketing, thievery) due to the fact that a Villain Application --which is required to do these things-- requires 1 week of play on the server first.
• Expand upon all of your ORQs, including much more detail and dialogue, and please remove the traces of powergaming from your answers.

Remember to wait 24 hours after this message is edited before reapplying, and feel free to PM me if you have any questions or concerns.

Edited June 4, 2013 by {Mentor} Escharian
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