[Denied][Elf] Dancingpanda23

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

 

Minecraft Account Name: DancingPanda23

How old are you?: 13

Time-Zone: EST

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Eeyup

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I have roleplayed on an Elder Scrolls server,along with another minecraft roleplaying server,that has shut down.

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: My friend,angelgirlx617, told me about it.

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: N/A

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):

Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: I will definitaly make use of the lore,and I have read it!

 

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

 

Role-playing: Roleplaying is making up a fantasy character,and acting as him/her in a video game. Roleplay usually takes place in an older time. When roleplaying,you act as your character,not making decisions that you would do in real life, but doing what your character would do.

Meta-gaming: Meta-gaming is when you know something ooc,and use it ic,when your character didn't know that before. Examples of this could be finding out where the enemy base is ooc,and then saying you know the location ic,and attacking it. 

Power-emoting: Power-emoting is when you act overly powerful,or unrealistic when roleplaying. Killing and/or controlling other characters without acting it out is also Power-emoting

 

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

 

Full Name: Idril Anwamane

 

Current Age: 190 years old

 

Sub-race (if any): Wood Elf

 

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): Idril grew up in a rich family. She was an only child,and enjoyed having her parents all to herself. Her father was a doctor,and her mother owned a food shop,which had many customers. Her village was large,but there were many poor people.Idril was taught by her father about curing illnesses,and herbs and the sort.She soon became very good at curing people.When she wasn't learning,she was shooting her bow.Idril learned to hunt at a young age,and would always go into the forest when she was bored,or in a bad mood.At the age of 150,when she was equivelent to the human age of 15,a virus started to infect the town. Her father was having many people come in with the same complaints. They had headaches,stomach aches,and their limbs were stiff. The diesese was unknown to her father,and he had no cure,or idea of what to do. He sat in his study for a few days,reading every book he had,but he never came across what the sickness was. Meanwhile. Idril sat in her room,painting pictures. She wasn't allowed outside anymore, for her parents feared she would also become ill. Her mother closed up the shop,and stayed in the house with Idril.By this time,nearly the whole village was infected. Idril's father wouldn't go outside,and he wouldn't allow his wife or daughter to leave the house either. One day,when Idril became 16,her mother went into her shop to get something she had left there. She hadn't checked the door. It was wide open. A few ill,and barely alive villagers came into the shop silently. They had become angered with the Anwamane family for not helping them,and locking themselves away. One of the older woman who was sickly pale,and ill,grabbed the arm of Idril's mother. She screamed,and kicked. "If your family will not help us,and let us die in agony,then so will you!" The woman yelled. She,along with a few other sick villagers grabbed her and dragged her into the crowd of sickened people. She screamed again. "LET ME GO!" She cried. The ill people just laughed,coughing right after. The scream had alerted Idril's father,and he ran into the shop. "DARLA!" He screamed. A few men grabbed him and threw him in the crowd. Idril had seen everything,watching silently at the door. She then sprinted back into her house,and into her room. She quickly threw some of her stuff in a bag and ran away,out of the village,and away from the virus. She ran and ran for days. Taking breaks when she needed them. When she took a break,she would sing or draw to pass the time,sleeping in the trees at night. She eventually went into a town,and heard about Malinor,the Elven nation. She decided it would be good for her to stay with other Elves,and to try finding new people to trust.

 

Ambitions for the Future: Idril wishes to become a doctor,and to meet many people. She also wants to make art.

Personality: Usually a nice person,caring person. However, when she gets ticked off,she will be very fierce,and won't stop until she is calm again. She usually has to have someone else force her to calm down though. When not angry,she's friendly.

 

Skills: She is a good hunter,and is skilled with a bow. Other than combat,her skills are singing,and is knowledgable with medics. She also likes painting.  

 

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): Idril has green hair and blue eyes. She is tall for a wood elf,and very beautiful. She wears a long,silky,light blue dress,and it has a slight trail on the back of it. Her hair is usually curly,but sometimes is straight. Her hair color used to be blond,but she decided to dye it green,the color of the leaves.

Any other details you wish to share about your character: Nope

 

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.

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1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Upon inspection you realize that a group of older elves are mocking a small elven child. How do you react?

 

Answer: Idril glares at the elders,and growls "What are you doing?" She said,glaring at each of them. "None of your business" One replied. Idril stormed over to the elder who spoke. She grabs him by the neck,pinned him against a tree and says to him "It is my business if older people are bullying a young child." Idril swings her fist at the old mans face."You are pathetic. Now you and your little friends here leave,before I do much worse." She growled,dropping him on the ground. She looked over to the remaining elders,and they walked away,looking scared. She then leans down next to the child,her face getting softer and says "Are you alright? Did they hurt you?" She asks the child "I'm..fine" The kid says. Idril decides to stay with the child,and walk him back to his village,and that she does.

 

2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. He collapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do?

 

Answer: Idril picks up all the coins,and helps up the old man "Here," she says,handing him the coins "You might want these back" Idril smiles at the old man "Thank you!" The man says,smiling widely back "No problem" Idril says,walking away. "Oh,and take these too" She turns around,and flicks him two coins "Just incase" She smiles,and walks away.

 

3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved). Idril thinks for a moment,and then says "Hmm..Can I get twenty steaks?" She asks. The trader raises his eyebrows "Someones hungry,eh?" Idril ignores the mans comment,and he chuckles "Alright,thirty minas." He says. Idril nods,and hands him the coin. She then takes the steaks and walks to the nearest village. She gives the steak to random homeless people she sees on the street,smiling at each,and recieving many thank you's. 

 

[cruzazul 2815]

 

Unfortunately your application has been denied. Here are some things that need to be improved if you are wanting to reapply.

 

Make sure you post your application on our minecraft forums thread as well as here.

 

Though your biography is good it lacks server lore. You have the right idea and put a good amount of effort in, but try to put in some more lore. This could be town names or events pertaining to your character's race.

 

Make sure you post a screenshot of your skin in the app.

 

Expand on your ORQs. They are a bit short and lack dialogue.

 

Please wait 24 hours from this denial before reapplying. If you have any questions don't be afraid to send me a message.

[cruzazul 2815]

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