[Denied][Dark Elf] Prodofpersia's Application

[prodofpersia 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

 

Minecraft Account Name: prodofpersia

How old are you?: I am 14 years old.

 

Time-Zone: EST - Eastern Standard Time

 

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes, I have read, understood, and agreed to the rules.

 

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I have played on many large RP servers, such as Massivecraft in which you choose classes, and A'therys Ascended, which includes nations, towns, classes, and is a very big role-playing server.

 

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: I was looking on Google for great Minecraft role-playing servers, and I came across the LOTC website. I read through everything, and decided this server sounded perfect.

 

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:

I have made no other applications.

 

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):

Yes, I have posted this application to the Minecraft Fourm.

 

Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?:

Yes, I have read all the Elven lore, and I will make use of it, use it, and follow it in game and in my biography.

 

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!

 

Role-playing: Role-playing is when one character, or a group of characters, act as a character they have made and interact with eachother.

 

Meta-gaming: This is using information that you don't know to your advantage before anyone tells you it. One example is if you knew a characters past before you met them. This is not allowed.

 

Power-emoting: Power-emoting is using actions or words that ruin the story and does not allow any other actions from other characters. One example is saying: "Jimmy and James push prodofpersia off the roof, paralyzing him from the neck down". This ruins role-play and is not allowed.

 

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

 

Full Name: Ceruahern Ehierhileia

(Pronounced Ser-oo-aa-hern  Ehh-hair-he-leah

Current Age: 140

Sub-race (if any): Dark Elf

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

Childhood:

I was born in the now-abandoned town of Dunroch, in Anthos. We lived peacefully with the residents of Dunroch, and no fights or raids broke out in the town. I was a jittery little boy, who loved food. Both my father and my mother were dark elves. She sometimes warned me "When you get older, Ceruahern, people may discriminate against you. Be the better elf, they always said. When I was about 30 years of age, my dad started to teach me "Self Defense" lessons, due to my mothers anxiety for me. These lessons were cheerful, with laughing and bonding time between me and my father, but one night after lessons, everything changed. As I mentioned, I was a food-loving little elf, so I asked my father if he could make a quick trek into the woods to make me my favorite dish, pepper-apples. These were the most delicious treats; hollow apples with pepper and carrots inside. He, being the erogenous man he was, trekked into the forest to fetch me my treat. My father never returned from that forest.

 

Teen Years:

There was so much sorrow in the village of Dunroch. Everyone knew about our loss, and everyone tried to avoid the "Out of place" Ehierhileia's. Soon, people started leaving the town. The town grew smaller and smaller, until we finally left too. We trekked north, not having a clue where we were going, and ended up in the lands of North Anthos. We became trapped in a small tree, and lived off of greasy zombie flesh and bone marrow. As a young boy, I was weak and small, and we could not escape from those lands. 

 

Older Teen Years:

I was a strong teen; living in those wastelands for nearly 100 years. I was strong enough to run at a rapid pace along with my nimble mother. It was a clear day, as we planned to escape from our captivity. We would need to trek west, to find the place we were looking for in the beginning of this journey. We hastily threw our sewn bags (made of spider skin) over our backs and dashed to the west, making sure we checked the direction markings we made on our arrival. We spent days and nights traveling, and some without food, water, and shelter. In those traveling days, I lost my finger, but I lost something else, much, much more important.

 

Modern Days:

I lost my mother. The only one I still loved in the world, the only one who still gave me hope. Believe me, I tried saving her, by trying to suck the zombie infection out of her arm, and even trying to stop the blood flow. But, nothing worked. My beloved mother was dead, and I would have to continue the trek by myself. Many more nights of weakness and sorrow passed, before I came to a beautiful city of trees and elves. I glanced over at the entrance, and above it were big letters that read:

LEUMALIN

 

Ambitions for the Future: I wish to establish a home, until I can make a journey back to the forests my father ventured into, and hopefully make a home with him.

 

Personality: I am sneaky, I always look for the bright side of bad situations, I have a very strong willpower, and I will do anything to save myself / make myself wealthy. I do not like talking, and hate conversations.

 

Skills: Skilled Swordsman, Nimble, Fast Runner, Very Quiet

 

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): I am a dark-skinned elf, with blue eyes. I have medium length black hair, and enjoy wearing gloves all the time. I wear no shirt, but ragged pants and small shoes.

The link to my skin: http://www.planetmin...rk-elf-2091885/

 

Any other details you wish to share about your character:

I regret asking for the pepper-apple, and I will hate myself forever for not saving my mom. I keep things to myself, and I do not let go of anything that hurts me.

 

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.

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1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Upon inspection you realize that a group of older elves are mocking a small elven child. How do you react?

 

Answer:

 

I think to myself "These are elders. They are more powerful, more knowledgeable, and more respected than me." I remember my devastating childhood, remember the pain involved, and decide to help the poor elven child. I do not speak one word, as I like keeping to myself, but instead I scale a small tree. By instinct, I take out my bow and arrow and prepare to shoot. "Killing will make it worse" pops into my head, so instead of arrows, I take out medium sized rocks. One by one, the rocks hit the elders square on the head, and they all fall in a pattern. With no eye contact involved, I quietly yell

 

"run, boy"

 

I dash away as the small elven child does the same, not even exchanging words.

 

 

2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. He collapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do?

 

Answer:

 

As soon as I see the shiny gold on the pathway, I quickly scoop the coins up and throw them in the bag, without glancing at the man. He says "Thank you" in a kind manner, as if he thought I was picking them up for him. My morals start kicking in.

 

"No, I have lived my life in poverty, I deserve these coins more than that man does. He is almost dead, isn't he?"

 

and

 

"Look at this poor soul. He is trying to live a life, just like myself. It is not his fault I was poor, and he needs the money to help himself live."

 

I try to block my good morals out of this situation, place the old man in a sitting position on a tree, snap his walking stick in two, and dash out of the situation with my heart pounding, partly from anxiety and partly from guilt.

 

3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved).

 

Answer:

 

The trader starts talking about his wares to me. He says:

 

"C'mere, you defenseless boy! I have a bargain' for ya'! Im sellin' ma finest swords, for yer protection!

 

There lies many, many fine handcrafted swords by Eelhest Marher, the best elven blacksmith known.

Again, stealing and killing come into my mind, without my consent.

 

"These here swords are werth 300 minas; but for ya', ill give em' for 100"

 

Of course, living a shady life, I have much more than 100 minas. But, the thought came into my mind "Can I get these for free? It would be a horrible thing to do, but he hasn't even heard my voice yet."

 

"No thanks"

 

I whisper, very very quietly.

 

After the carriage has passed, I begin my assault. Running behind the carriage, I take out my hand crafted dagger and stab the wheels. The carriage slows down, and eventually comes to a halt. The trader gets out, but he doesn't have enough time to look at the wheels. As he bends down, I push the dagger into his brittle head, and he falls to the ground dead. Hand crafted swords for free, what a great day!

[cruzazul 2815]

 

Unfortunately your application has been denied. Here are some things that need to be improved if you are wanting to reapply.

 

Dunroch is not an actual Lord of the Craft legit city. Try to use an actual in game city. You can find a good amount of information pertaining to our cities in the wiki.

 

Try to expand on your first, second, and third ORQs. They are not bad but could use a bit more detail. I like your first one, try to add to more dialogue to them as well.

 

 

Describe your character in more detail. With what you have said I do not really get a good picture of how he looks, thinks, and acts. Add onto that and explain even the minor details. They can help a lot when describing your character in general. Painting the reader a picture when listing the tenancies and personality as well as look of your character can be an enormous help when trying to understand what your character is.

 

Please wait 24 hours from this denial before reapplying. If you have any questions don't be afraid to send me a message.

[cruzazul 2815]

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