[Denied][Human] Cmorge

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[ski_king3 0]

 

While this app is incredibly well-written, I sadly must deny it.

 

Firstly, you forgot to post your MC name.

 

In your bio, you use literally no server lore. Like, not even a little. It is written incredibly well, but there is nothing to indicate it is based within the LotC universe. Likewise, it seemed you created your own town for him to have grown up in, with its own customs. That really in general is not a good thing to do, as we would much prefer you use a town or city which has existed and is in our lore. Likewise, your character performs villainous actions, something which you cannot do in your application. Also, you have your halfling fighting, which is not particularly realistic. They're 3-4 feet tall and not suited for fighting. They'd almost certainly lose every single fight they entered.

 

In your first two ORQ's, you perform villainous actions which would once again require a villain application to perform, and as such, you cannot perform them in your server application. Likewise, your ORQ's are a bit short, and need expansion.

 

If you have any questions, feel free to PM me. You may reapply 24 hours after the time of the post below.

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