[Denied]Human Application.

[Violet Asasin 13]

[cruzazul 2815]

 

Unfortunately your application has been denied. Here are some things that need to be improved if you are wanting to reapply.

 

Your biography is too short and lacks detail. Remember it needs to be at least 2 full paragraphs if not more. I would suggest adding more to your character's life. This is very important for when you begin roleplaying.

 

Describe your character in more detail. With what you have said I do not really get a good picture of how he looks, thinks, and acts. Add onto that and explain even the minor details. They can help a lot when describing your character in general. Painting the reader a picture when listing the tenancies and personality as well as look of your character can be an enormous help when trying to understand what your character is.

 

Expand on your first ORQ and add some more dialogue throughout it.

 

Please wait 24 hours from this denial before reapplying. If you have any questions don't be afraid to send me a message.

[cruzazul 2815]

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