Life of a hermit

[boodilly 0]

So, one day I was looking for some creepers to kill (their iron is always usefull) And I was struck by a grand idea! I shall go into the wilderness, survive, train, and have an incredible adventure!It shall be in this Book that I write the occurances during my time here.

Day zero.

I set off walking about noon with only my trusty iron sword for protection.

First day.

As I am walking I see a cave of the perfect size to be a home; exactly as I had imagined for my journey. I settle in, and make basic items like torches, a sleeping mat, food, a crafting bench and a furnace from scrap.

Second day.

I walk out side and am stunned to see a foul slime nearby. I decide to stay away from it. I start a small mine in hopes of finding iron.

Third day.

I wake up to find it is raining outside and decide to mine and stay out of the rain. My pickaxe is almost broken, so I start make a new one.I am suprised to find that I have no wood, so I dart out to the nearest tree and grab some logs. I make a pickaxe and start to mine, which yeilds 8 iron and 21 coal.I make it out of the mines just in time to get back in the cave before dark.

Fourth day.

Two creepers greeted me as I left shelter, and fighting them off I decied I would do some hunting. In the course of the day, I killed 6 creepers, two slimes, and 13 cows. In the afternoon, I built a cobble stone ledge with a steep dropoff for acrobactics traning. As night falls, I make myself a leather hat and leg guards.

Fifth day.

I started my day by clearing 5 creepers and a skeleton out of the area. One creeper gave me an iron shovel, to my suprise. I then did some acrobatics training. If you have not done this intresting form of training yet, it deals with the subject taking controlled amounts of damage from falling to help them get better at padding future falls. After about 5 falls, I feel very beaten, so I decide to hunt for pork rather than use my stock of emergancy food. As I am hunting, I relize that I stupidly have not made a fire for heat yet! I already had steel for my tinderbox, but I needed flint. Lucky, there was a gravel pit nearby, and it did not take much searching through the debris to find flint.

Sixth Day.

Today,I woke up at noon. I did some acrobatics, then mined for the rest of the day. I did not turn up much,just some coal deposites. During the night, I add a small farming patch of ten spots to train my herbilism on.

Seventh day.

I start out with acrobatics, and run through all my premade food. I went hunting for pigs and seeds and get some of both.

Eighth day.

Woke up early to do some extra excavation training. When I got done, I went back to the cave, to find a creeper waiting for me.I promitly killed it, then did some acrobatic training. I mined for the rest of the day, finding 7 iron. Tommorow, I hope to make a cake.

Ninth day.

Today was a mix of alot of activitys.First, I went mining with no results other than cobble. Then, I went hunting, killing several pigs and a few creepers. Along the way, I descovered that the axe made a good weapon.

I have decided that I will train with the axe since I am aready proficent with the sword. Of course, I did more acrobatic training.

Tenth day.

Today followed the normal pattren. Getup. Clear monsters. Acrobatics. Then, it started to rain. This led me to spend this day mining, which yeilded 6 iron.

Elventh day.

Today, I went exploring to find some sugarcane for cake. Along my way, I found a grotto of white trees. (I can not remember what they are called)

It was obviously made by man not nature. My jaw dropped to find out that I was not as alone as I thought I was. I continued a bit farther and found my sugarcane.I will hide my iron tonight, just in case.

Twelth day.

Today, cake was made. I woke up very late today, so I only had enough time to do acrobactics and fight off a few monsters. During one of my fights, my origonal iron sword broke.

Thirtenth day.

A normal day. fought off monsters. acrobatics. mined.

Fourteenth day

Today, desipe rain I hunted. I used the extra food to do acrobatics

training.

Fifteenth day.

Woke up very late. Might be sick. Did acrobactics and mined till about midnight.

sixteeth day.

Pulled an allnighter without noticing it.I return to my home. Skelleton kills me.

[Antharin 90]

You should add longer dialogs, also make it realistic that you don't carry a bed, furnace and crafting table with you. You should say that you had settled down, made a furnace and crafting table, found a nice place to put down your plankets for a temporary sleeping place. And you shouldn't just think of an idea to go into the wilderness alone for 'a marvelous idea'.

Just some tips.

Anyways well done so far.

[boodilly 0]

reseved.

[Danny 2232]

Moved to the Great Library. It shall be sorted into appropriate category shortly.