44rachet 1 Share Posted June 22, 2013 Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate. Sorry about anything misspelled don't count it against me Minecraft Account Name: 44rachet How old are you? 13 Time-Zone: Pacific Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?:Yes What previous experience have you had in role-playing?:On multiple medieval RP servers and a few Harry Potter themed ones How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?:I was searching for a new LOTR RP server. Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:http://www.minecraft...0#entry21417035 http://www.lordofthe...lication-human/ http://www.lordofthe...ic/84082-human/ http://www.lordofthe...lication-human/ http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/87752-44rachet-5-human-application/ Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?:DefinitionsIn your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!: Role playing: To live or act like you are someone or something else. Meta-gaming: To use information from OOC to defeat your enemy such as if you hear there will be attack in one place and put a lot of troops there. Power-emoting: To use your words to make the other person unable to react. Such as I shot 44rachet in between the eyes.In-Character Information:Complete the following biography on your character: Full Name: Jack Treaty Current Age:21 Sub-race (if any):Northerner Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):He grew up in a small mining town where the daily things where always wake up. Go to the mine. Finish mining. Turn in ores. Go home. And then wake up the next morning for the same list of chores until one day he decided enough was enough and he would travel to the city of Celestine and try to find work as a blacksmith. So he left bringing what few minas and provisions he had. One day on the rode he found an old man who was huddled in a ball on the side of the rode severely beaten, worried he went up to the old man and as soon as he drew near a group of bandits appeared! Fighting against them with his dagger he held his own. Parrying thrusting and dodging for what seemed like eternity. But alas there was too many and then soon began to overpower him trying to find an opening to run out of and then he saw it next to the beaten old man. charging forward he burst through the wall only to fall on his face. Tripped by the old man! For it turns out the old man wasn’t so old or beaten after all but actually a man of the age of 30 with a wig and make-up. Swearing for his foolishness he tried to get away but the man kicked him in the gut stopping his scrambling. Looking up Jack stared at the man’s cruel unforgiving eyes and the man shouted "Boy what’s your name?" "Jack...Jack Treated" Jack stuttered. "And what where you doing on this road!" "why I’m trying to get to Celestine" Jack replied feebly "Ha did you hear that boys trying to get to Celestine! Now tell me what where you planning to do when you get to Celestine?" "I was going to try and find a job as a blacksmith" "O so what we have here is a boy 18 trying to make his way to Celestine all alone to become a blacksmith" “The men begin to laugh breaking out into tears. "well boy here is what i have to say there hasn’t been work in Celestine for many years" then being pulled up by the brute of a man Jack spit in the mans face saying with a cocky smile” well wherever there is someone like you there is plenty of work for me" “Aenguls help me” Jack thought The man lifted his fist to punch Jack but then stopped "you know Mr. Treaty i like your spunk but ill still have to kill you for what you said to me. Well this is it Jack thought death by a man whose breath smells of onions and spoiled milk. "But since i like you ill give you a fair chance against me" dropping Jack to his feet as he said it "You remind me of myself at your age" the man said "but I almost died many times to men like myself now also" "well if i turn out like you i hope my breath smells better" Jack replies The man belows laughing saying through tears "im going to enjoy killing you now" "wait" Screams Jack "what is it" The man bellows" "what is your name?" "Arulan" "Arulan what?" "I’ll tell you the rest if you beat me" The two walked ten paces away from each other and were each handed a knife. The men around them formed a circle and where placing bets on who would win. "what are my odds" Jack asked a man next to him "40-1" the man replies "I’d like to place a bet of 20 minas" Jack says cockily throwing a bag. A man walks between the two saying when the fight will start "5" Sweat rolls down Jacks face "4" He can feel his stomach ache from lack of food and the blow he took "3"Better say me prayers Jack thinks "1" Too late The man charges at Jack bellowing and Jack easily side steps the man sending him through the circle of men "Well that was pretty pathetic” Jack taunts smiling at the large brute of a man. The man bellows his face turning a deep red "now boys this is how you stick a pig" He charges Jack keeping his arms wide so Jack won’t be able to doge them Then at the last second Jack dives under the man and cuts the man’s calves. Hot blood pours from the wounds splattering the sand. The man limps to the edge of the circle and Jack says "looks like this pig has a bite worse than its Oink. Ok that wasn’t a very good come back but lets keep going” and proceeds to oink and make pig faces to the ring of men’s delight . "Treaty! you have made a fool out of me in front of my men and now you must pay" "Well it wasn’t that hard" Jack exclaims Angered and seeing red the man charges at Jack one last time and to the man’s astonishment Jack jumps over the man cutting his back. Dying the man says to Jack "my name is Arulan Madier" "Well Mr. Madier it was nice to meet you and I’m sorry how this turned out" and Jack proceeds to walk away down the road to the astonished wide mouthed bandits picks up the Minas he won. And then sent a silent prayer to the ancient ones. Outside the limits of Celestine he finds a boy no older than 10 staring at a deer in the clearing curious he asks the boy why he isn’t out playing "that deer it looks so plump and I’ve not eaten for a long time" "well I’m sorry to hear that" and Jack grabs his bow from his pack and 5 arrows. For he knows he isn’t the best archer proceeds in nocking all 5 carefully sliding them into a ball "watch this" he whispers to the boy releasing the arrows and watching them fly through the air like birds moving with lightning speed toward their target. Two of arrows are three feet of the deer another never leaves the bow but the last two strike home the deer’s knees buckle as life slowly leaves its body. Every breath becoming harder and harder until it breathed no more. The boy sprints towards the deer looking like he was about to cry then his mouth spreads out into a smile revealing sharp white rows of teeth. He then precedes to wide his mouth until it was as wide as the deer and swallows it whole. Suddenly the boy has a fit of spasms and begins to change...Into a deer it was not boy but a transfigures that changes into what it eats. Jack quickly Jack notches and arrow and fires but the deer spring dantily to the side. Jack backs up stumbling over the rocky earth. But each step he took the deer got a little bit closer. Then Jack tripped falling on his bottom he grabs around for a weapon the deer hovers over him saliva pouring from its mouth then it rears’ up stretching its mouth when. Jack Throws a rock into its gaping mouth then the deer goes into a fit of spasms changing transforming…into a rock. Getting up and wiping his trousers Jack dusts off his trousers and continues on. The end. Ambitions for the Future: To continue to Celestine and find a new life Personality: Cocky, witty, and Optimistic Skills: Stealthy and handy with a knife in the dark. And OK at archery Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): http://www.minecraft...87/jack-treaty/ Any other details you wish to share about your character: Doesn’t trust old people or little childrenOpen-Response-QuestionsEach question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point. ____1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what doyou do? Answer: As the man runs past I trip him making him fall on his face then pulling him off to the side I say "who are you and why are they after you" Depending on what his answer is ill either let him go or return him to the guards (Ill pretend that he was trying to escape from the jail for he was wrongly accused of stealing) "I...I...I was a... accused of stealing from the king" "And what was it that you "didn’t" steal" "his crown" "youve got to be kidding me doesnt he wear that on his head?" "not when he is sleeping" I then proceed to search him making sure he is telling the truth. But soon the guards are close."go hide in the hay and I’ll come back" I order. "ok" he replies and stumbles into the hay. I then leave and take to the inside of the city and then the roof tops looking for cloths that are drying. Finally i find a womans gown that should fit the man if i put a mellon or two inside where the bussom is. Buying some melons i return to the man and tell him to shave and put on the clothes while i get a horse. I then find the nearest horse merchant. "how much i ask?" pointing and a fine black stallion whose coat gleamed in the afternoon sun. Truly a majestic beast. "20 Minas" "You want 20 Minas for a horse that belongs in glue?" trying to make him think the horse isn’t as fine as it is "Belongs in glue does he my boy? Why that’s the finest horse I’ve breed all year I hope to make a whole line of 'em" "well then you should get yourself a deal with the glue merchants down the street because you’ll need them to make a profit of such a foul line" "Is that so?" "Now being the generous man I am I’ll give you 10" "Know that I am human and must eat like every one so I want 17" "17! Why my good sir this horse looks so sickly, I’ll give you 15" Grumbling the man replies "15 it is". I then proceed to return to the man that now looks like a very fetching woman and tell him to get on behind me asking if he has any family. I do in a village not too far. Then I bribe a man to say to the guards he saw them go to the east while we are going west. Trotting out of the town we leave unnoticed and rather happy to have gotten such a wonderful steed.2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armor and an iron long sword, how do you react? Answer: I no longer trusts old guys so I throws the sword at one of the bandits hoping to cut him down and run away. To get the man some help hiding his leather armor. Then running away Jack looked over my shoulder to see the bandits chasing Jack now “O ancient ones what have I done now!” Jack muttered. The bandits were almost upon him due to his heavy armor. “Well this is great” Jack called then. Jack felt the rap of metal on metal as one of the bandits swung for him. “Have to do better than that old bean” Jack said as he turned and rushed the two men swinging his gauntleted fist he smashed the two in the face... The pair bent over holding their noses and crying in pain. Jack then snuck behind them and snipped their purse strings and taking them. Laughing under his breath he quickly went to see if the old one was ok, seeing him all fine from a distance Jack then went away. Laughing knowing the fools would eventual realize that they would have trouble with now money.3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a colorful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens). Answer: "I would like to purchase the bow and the daggers. I’ll give you 20" I begin "20 why what are you trying to do starve me! I want at least 40! Why these dagger are made of the finest metals of the dwarves and this bow is no normal wood but orc tusk and made by the elves" "Well my small friend it seems like you know your stuff. Therefore I’ll give you 26" "26 why even a small man must eat I want 35" "Know that I must be going and I’ll use these weapons for the good of the kingdom and so I can get to Celestine" "Why didn’t you say you were going to Celestine? My cousin lives there and no courier is willing to take my package to him" "What is in the package?" I ask curious now "Why just salamander gut, sheep’s bladder, toads liver, human finger, dwarf tongue, a piece of gum, toenail clipping, which where free of shipping! gator tears, Oliphant ears, orcs arms, and an evil charm" "Why my good sir what line of work does your cousin partake in" "Necromancy “the old man replies giving me a rather toothless smile. "Well it’s not my problem so I’ll do it" "O and it will still cost you 10 Minas" "Damn you my short friend but we have a deal" I say shaking the old mans wrinkled hand. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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