[Denied][App] Hellfiazz

[hellfiazz 879]

[cruzazul 2815]

 

Unfortunately your application has been denied. Below are suggestions I have listed that you should implement into your application before reapplying.

 

Make sure you post your application on the Lord of the Craft Minecraft Forums thread as well as our forums here.

 

 

I like that you have implemented a good amount of the server lore into your biography. This is something that is very important when it comes to roleplaying. However, your character seems to lack a bit of depth. Even the small minuscule details will be important to you in your roleplaying journey. Perhaps add more depth to the character, maybe even a few more weaknesses.

 

I'd like to see your application put into a third person perspective, though it is not required.

 

Your ORQs all need to be expanded on. You put minimal effort into them. This is one of the most important parts of the application as it shows how you are able to present yourself in a roleplaying environment. More dialogue and unique emotes will do this portion justice.

 

Please wait 24 hours from this denial post before reapplying. If you have any questions don't be afraid to send me a message.

 

[cruzazul 2815]

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