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Out-Of-Character Information
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.
 
Minecraft Account Name: Jaybleezy
How old are you?: 15 ears old.
Time-Zone: Pacific Northwest.
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes, I have.
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I regularly play Daemon's Serious Medieval Minecraft server.
I also regularly play World of Warcraft. At least once a week I play Skyrim on the PC.
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: I Google searched "best roleplay server minecraft". Honest. Try it yourself if you don't believe me.
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/91609-jaybleezys-application/
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): Yes.
Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes.
Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:
 
Role-playing: Imagining/playing yourself as another person in a game or board game, like DnD.
Meta-gaming: Using out-of-character information in-character.
Power-emoting: Playing your roleplay character as more powerful than someone else as default.
 
In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:
 
Full Name: Deryn Jaemas
Current Age: 23
Sub-race (if any): N/A
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):When Deryn was born, he was weak. His parents, Elna and Moryn, had to nurse him to health, and he barely survived. He was born, for an unknown reason, with a mild strain of Plague. It almost killed him, but he survived with no physical scars, although his mind was damaged.
 In his teen years, he was completely recovered, but he had what we now know of as schizophrenia, and would hallucinate regularly until his twenties. By the time he was 18, he had practically mastered archery, and could shoot a grape from 50 meters. At age nineteen, he left home in search of his uncle, who had vanished. To this day he has not found his uncle, Jalyn.
Ambitions for the Future: Deryn hopes to find his uncle and train with him in the art of magic. He also strives to become a legendary archer.
Personality: Deryn has slight schizophrenia, sometimes seeing strange creatures, and occasionally having epileptic fits in which is entire body shakes and he is rendered unconscious.
Skills: He is great with a bow, and has some knowledge of magic.
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): He has brown hair, green irises, and he wears a green robe
with his quiver strapped to his back.
Any other details you wish to share about your character: When he has a schizophrenic episode, he will
sometimes leave a location abrupltly and not return for an hour or so. Rarely, he will believe he is
someone else, or that he is not even Elven.
 
Open-Response-Questions
Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.
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1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering.
 Upon inspection you realize that a group of older elves are mocking a small elven child. How do you react?
 
Answer: Deryn attempts to make the group move along, eventually resorting to pulling out his bow and aiming with a flat-faced arrow, telling them to move along or get shot.
Afterward, he goes to comfort the child, and bring him home.
 
2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. He collapses in front of you,
 falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway.
 The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do?
 
Answer: Deryn gathers the gold coins back into the pouch, sets it aside, and attempts to wake the old man. Upon finding that he has died, Deryn
closes his eyes and puts his body under a tree with a flower wreath, his coins jingling on Deryn's waist.
 
3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it
 and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything,
 and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do?
 (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved).
 
Answer: Having recently aquired coins from an elderly man, he approaches the cart, asking if the man could sell him another quiver-full of arrows and
some sassafras root to make root beer. He then continues along the path he was following.
 
[[ please excuse any sentences beginning without a capital. sometimes my shift key goes wonky. also, my profile pic is my skin.]]
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Need to post your application on this Minecraft Forums topic before you can be accepted.

Expand slightly on Meta-gaming and Power-emoting definitions or add examples. More information can be found on the forums and wiki, but make sure to use your own words.

23 is very young for an Elf, still considered a child. You may want to make him older.

Please add server lore to the bio such as events, dates or places, which can be found on the forums and wiki.

Cannot apply with knowledge of magic, this can only be learned with a Magic Application.

Put the skin screenshot in the application for record keeping purposes.

Expand on all Open Response Questions and add dialogue.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. Send me a PM if you have any questions.

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