[Denied][Human] Deltagav Attempt 3

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: DeltaGav

How old are you?: 13

Time-Zone: Central

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: Dungeons and Dragons, Dragons Dogma, Skyrim

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: Forums

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/91679-human-deltagav-attempt-2/

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): ok

Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: playing the role of a character in a game, pretty much controlling someone else.

Meta-gaming: Outside info that influences ingame decisions to change the game

Power-emoting: sending an emote that can not be fought against or be defeated. ( Sorry if you dont understand)

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Elric Griffin

Current Age: 22

Sub-race (if any): Northerner

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): As a child i was living in a tiny home in a tiny village. Every day was the same, I always woke up helped clean and did what my parents asked. Although one day it was windy and men appeared at our village's gates. They wanted people for their army. So they took me. I got to say goodbye to my parents and then they took me and I never saw them again. They trained me to hunt and survive. They also taught me to bargain and steal, to loot and to sneak. Although I didnt like what they taught me, I still had no choice.

One day they sent me out to hunt. At first I thought to act well and bring back alot of game but then it came to me to run. So that's what I did, I ran. I ran as far and as fast as I could. Finally I made it to the road and walked to the nearest village. I rented a room in the inn and payed off fines from hunting. Now I live off the land and find my true calling.

Ambitions for the Future: Elric's ambition is to find his true calling, adventure and have revenge for his family.

Personality: He is smart, wise, talented, ambitious, courages and cunning

Skills: He is a master bowman, fine with a short sword, good at hunting, and farming is a hobby. He is also a master at apothecaries.

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/1872928/mine-archer/

Any other details you wish to share about your character:

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.

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1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do?

Answer: I would quickly run up to the gaurds and tell them my suspicions. After telling them I would yell to the streets saying to go inside. After that I would rush up to the palace and help defeat the man.

2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armour and an iron longsword, how do you react?

Answer: I would run up, push aside the two men and shield the old man. I would ask reasoning for what they were doing. After that I would ask the old mans side of the story and try to piece it together from there.

3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens).

Answer: I would ask for arrows, armor replacement, sharpening stones, and things in that area. I would ask him for at least half price. Then we would bargan. If I didn't get the price I wanted I would at least buy something, say thankyou and we would part ways.

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Expand on your definitions.

 

Your Biography was good. Try to make sure you are using server lore, this will make your application a lot better and will also give you a quick learning adventure about Lord Of The Craft. Also go into detail about your character and maybe talk about a key event in his life or talk about his strengths and weaknesses  The more detail about your characters life the better as it will tell us, The Application Team that you understand your characters role on Lord Of The Craft. Server Lore can be: Language, Place names, Characters, events, etc..

 

Your Character Questions are too short, please answer these with a paragraph long answer. This will re-assure us that you understand your character well enough to role play with it.

 

Your Open Response Question's need to display the role play method in them to achieve an accepted application. You need to set it out like this:

 

Edward looks around the Inn and notices a man tucked away in the corner. The man is wearing dark robes with a hood resting over his head. He walks across the room towards the man before calling over "Oi You! Come over here!" The man looks up towards Edward and gasps before attempting to get up and flee.

 

You should set out your role play like that and then we will know that you can control role play with your character and also know if you have the role-playing skills to obtain a place on our server. Always stay in 3rd person and never change tense or use 1st person in your Open Response Questions. If you can do this method with every single Open Response Questions they will be at a closer to acceptable applications standard. However do not forget to include details about your character and too make sure you stay as your character throughout the role play. Include his/her(s) strengths or weaknesses to make your role playing effective.

 

Good Luck in your next Application~

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