[Denied]Krunos10 Application

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(Shoot I apologize I forgot to put Alt in the title :/ ) 

 

Out-Of-Character Information

Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

 

Main Account Name: Lil_Kells

 

Alternate Account Name: Krunos10

 

How old are you?:  16

 

Time-Zone: EST

 

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes

 

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: Have been playing on LOTC.

 

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

 

Role-playing: Creating and impersonating a fictional character.

 

Meta-gaming: Using OOC information in game on your character. For example, if I a friend told me something on skype such as the location of hidden 

 

treasure and I were to use the information that he gave me to find the treasure.

 

Power-emoting: Having your character do something that another character could not respond to. For instance, If while role playing I were to say "He 

 

took out his bow and shot him right in the heart".

 

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name:  Krunos Vulnir

 

 

Current Age: 367

 

Race: Elf

 

Sub-race (if any): Mali'Ker (Dark Elf)

 

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

 

    Krunos Vulnir grew up in the Holy Princedom of Malinor with his father, Vuln, and his mother, Velulaei. Krunos was always very respective and obedient to his parents who he lived with for the first three hundred years of his life, but he had trouble befriending others. Krunos always played tricks and joked with other people. The other elves who lived in this Elven Peninsula began to get very angry with Krunos and eventually confronted his parents about it. Furious, his parents forced him to move out of the house and find a job and to find a wife. Krunos had other plans.

  

    Krunos found a house made of darkwood and the special mixture of clay that most Mali'Ker's houses are made of. He started to practice sneaking around Malinor without getting caught and pulling the best tricks on people that he has ever attempted. It got to the point where he could pull a prank without anyone even knowing. Eventually, Krunos went too far and accidentally almost got a man killed. Upset with himself, Krunos went home where he started to rethink what he wanted to do with his life.

 

    Krunos Vulnir decided that he was going to leave his life of jokes and tricks and train to become a swordsman. He bought a stone sword with the little money that he had and went to practice right away. After many years of hard training Krunos became a decent fighter. He decided that it was time to go and find a place in which he could use his newborne talents. While looking around Malinor he found a recruiting poster for the Malinor Sentinals, right away Krunos knew that he had to join. In that instant, Krunos Vulnir rushed to the Sentinals baracks in Normandor located on the northeast section of the Elder Tree Isle.

 

Ambitions for the Future: Become a Mainor Sentinel to use his new sword skill. 

 

Personality: Funny, he loves a good laugh. With his new found passion for fighting he respects those who are better fighter than he is.

 

Skills: Swordfighting and jokes.

 

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):

 

 

Any other details you wish to share about your character: No

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Please wait 24 hours after this verdict has been placed before re-applying or face instant Denial

 

Your application wasn't bad but a few vital errors let it down. Make sure your grammar is good and proof read your application.

 

Expand on your definitions, give a longer and more detailed answer for each. Also please add examples to each of your definitions so we can make sure you understand completely what each definition means.

 

Your Character Questions are too short, please answer these with a paragraph long answer. This will re-assure us that you understand your character well enough to role play with it.

 

Good Luck with your next application.

 

Sorry about the error, at the beginning.

 

Ben~

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